Magnificent story and character development...... need more chapters!
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This novel is very good and fun! If you are looking for reincarnation with fantasy and apocalyptic elements, give this a try! However, please be warned that the author stopped updating for 7 months now. Not sure he will be back but I hope so.
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Love the story. I'm sad to see it having come to an early drop.
All in all the concept was great and the plot intreguing. It kept me binge reading the entire thing the moment I started.
Have you discontinued this novel? As I can't seem to find any more chapters after 55 for quite some time now. Overall a good novel and I would love to read more of it
Please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it and don’t stop writing this book it’s really good so far and I’m hoping that this book will have a sequel soon.!.!.!.!.!
It is very good, only a few spelling mistakes.
I like the characters and the main character isn't the biggest idiot out of the main characters I've seen.
This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out so please write the next chapter soon so I’ll be able to read it soon I think this book should have a sequel or maybe 2 sequels
I really enjoyed this book/story, however you've been gone for so long with no updates i know you're busy but your absence has made me sad, this is a very well written story so far (in my unprofessional opinion), and i'd really love to pick it back up when it comes back.
Because of the authors note and the story that interests me. I'll give this a 5 star review. continue the great work.. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is a very good way to start. Only a few chapters in and so far pretty solid.
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Fun fun fun! The MC is ruthless(though somewhat stupid a bit by leaving a future enemy alive). Its a fun new novel of exploration that makes sense since the government realistically ain't gonna let individuals decide the fate of the world but instead its ruled by hidden councils and politics. Even special forces have to follow rules and can't be deciding anything and politicians aren't softhearted tbf
Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it! Absolutely love it!
Very interesting plot and already has some good twists. Can't wait for the rest of it. Had me reading 3 in the morning. Translation isn't that bad just has a few errors that are easy to see and fix. I don't feel like their is much room for character development as the protagonist seems set in his ways, however their is still a lot that we can find out about the character. Cant wait to see how this story developed.
I give it a 5 cause it sounds promising, I havent really read it yet but I will. And I hope my 5 wont change. I hope that the novel will be as interesting as the description. To the author please dont make every BIG organization and people with authority and power to be the MCs enemy. Please....
I have started binge reading this so I can't say much about the updates just 3/week seems a bit little, but in exchange for the lower frequency we get a really good quality. The MC is not stupidly OP after reincarnating - it shows he still has weaknesses. Some might say certain situations are unrealistic, but if you take in account what happens right before the MC reincarnates I think it is good writing that the MC sometimes does things cause he loses control of his emotions.
Interesting world and the genre is one I really enjoy. Also having the system be one everyone has is also enjoyable. However, there are simply too many things that make no sense. For example, none of the people they send to the new wolrd seems to have heard a single thing about it. They haven't even heard about the other races before the ****** briefing right beforehand even though mankind has been going to the other world for 600 years. They are given a ******, nonwaterproof bag and some food (not even in waterproofed), and not a single small book or folder about the natural fauna and what enemies they can expect to find. Basically, they are sending the entirety of humanity in almost blind. The last straw for me, was when choosing to learn a ****** willpower skill now instead of waiting for a bit later (he can always learn it), which left him at lvl 5 instead of lvl 15 (at lvl 15 he would have a much easier time to farm the points required to buy it). Sure, skills can be valuable, but I refuse to accept that this one skill is worth more than tripling your current level
I do not give 5 stars because the updates are not as they said ... Apart from that it is easy to read (good grammar / writing), an interesting story that yes, if I read it before (I mean the idea) but that it is done well they are other things ... I really like it for now.
This is one of the best originals I've seen on this site and everyone should try to read it.
That being said there are two major faults with worldbuilding I'd like to point out. This shouldn't stop anyone from trying it, though.
First, the money. This new world works like a tribal society. There's no agreement between tribes or races to enforce the usage of gold and silver as currency. No one trusts one another, humans and non-humans. There's no reason for gold and silver to be accepted as currency to the whole world. At best it could maybe be traded by weight in gold, but even that is fickle. People need survivability, not precious metals from Earth that should have no value there.
The worst is that the author had the perfect plot device to avoid using gold: Essence. If people could exchange Essence between them, there is no reason for gold and it's pretty clear that, plot wise, essence is meaningful for everyone, no matter the race, and universally acceptable.
Second: Manuals. The world has a system where characters can level up stats or get skill from monsters they kill, using 'Essence'. Yet, the author added books that the MC would find and learn techniques, Wuxia-style.
That really didn't go well with his system plot. It would be far better for them to be regular skills from the system.
Like the dagger technique he got by killing a bandit, for example, instead of a book the character should have a chance to gain the skill of the target, monster or human, this way he would have only the skills the Author wants him to have in the end.
Like I said, overall this is a very good novel, but these two points stuck like a sore thumb for me. I'd even advise the author to rewrite them. It'd be a pain, but worth the hassle.
Quite an enjoyable ride. The MC is not a complete idiot like some stories out there, he can be brutal and ruthless when necessary, but doesn't seem excessively so. Updates could be a bit more stable, but overall a good read.
Good story, with a great protagonist who is not afraid to act in an evil way to get what he wants. Recommended for anyone who wants a story that leaves that taste of want more.
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