Reviews of Shinobi system in elemental nation by Fugaku - Webnovel

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Horrible story and plot development. Everything is so force. A chapter can be described with 2 sentence. He wrote a whole chapter stating the list of Justus.. lame!

Seems like author has almost no knowledge of timeline and characters aside from Main characters of show. Story seems like main character is servant of system.

Que ódio, porquê bloodline? Negócio doente e chato. What hate, why bloodline? Sick and boring business. What hate, why bloodline? Sick and boring business. What hate, why bloodline? Sick and boring business.

Olha, eu realmente tenho que falar mal desta fanfic. O homem era orfão em sua vida passada e então nesta vida, ele consegue novos pais, então ele ficou feliz com isso, ok, isto não é o problema. O problema é que os pais dele neste novo mundo não são em momento algum introduzidos... então eles supostamente morrem e o protagonista diz que quer vingança, WTF! Nós sabemos que os pais do protagonista eram gentis, mas não sabemos mais nada... o autor não se aprofundou na relação de pais e filho. Ele pode se vingar um dia, mas nenhum leitor terá sentimento algum sobre isso, então será só mais uma bosta de acontecimento inútil. Oh, quase esqueci... é sobre as linhagens, porra!! Ele consegue comprar linhagens! L-I-N-H-A-G-E-N-S! ISSO É MUITO LOUCO! QUEM GOSTARIA DE VER UMA FANFIC DESTAS? ESTE LIXO! LIXO! LIXO! LIXO! LIXO! LIXO! LIXO! LIXO! Desculpe, eu realmente fui longe demais, mas é que já estou cansado de histórias com falta de originalidade. Porra, se você não tem idéia para uma nova linhagem, coloca o protagonista em um grande clã existente! Mas por favor né, não faça o protagonista capaz de copiar linhagens! Isso é muito ridículo!

Sorry. This novel is not good. There is many weird situation, like mc have the power of kage. Also why the hell you use itachi like that? Itachi persona like clam and mysterious not arrogant like that. If you want to transform someone else you need to know the characters and habit so you can't recognize somebody else. I think you need mc struggle little bit to op for

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hey mr author why are there no updates..??? please check it. you have million viewers and are letting them all down your work was good so just keep it up and give updates just ignore the bad comments... this is your version we just read it what you wanted and would want will be the story so for the love of god please continue your work and thank you for the work done and if there is updates the better

There is only dialogue. How lazy can you get. This isn’t a play, this is a story. I endured a bit but it’s not worth one more chapter SPAM, SPAM, SPAM, SPAM, SPAM, SPAM,

Ok, you can mess up time line and other about fanfic, but give us solid background story, why, how, and when the timeline you create become like that, because even you destroy original timeline, the reader at least understand why your story timeline happen, not like this, you just throwing mess up timeline without background story, the original fan must be upset

Yo man i think your idea is great ,still you have a room for improvement man like you need ti make more natural flow of conversation,cause what you make kinda a rigid one,it's just like talking to your self ,to the point it's always sound like a short statement than a conversation. And the last but not the least u need to be more precise and detail about what event that happened there,almost everything feels like rushing it. Don't take me wrong man,i'm following and reading all the chapter you write/type i give rating to all your chapter,i just tell you some constructive criticism~ Te hee ;>

Hi just read you story its great and have a unique story Dont bother the people who is saying some non-sense regarding how bad your story line and how ypu shold follow the story line of the original story before switching world Its your story anyways and its really interesting how you insert plot on this story Good luck !!!!

i liked the idea of the story.. keep it up. dont worry about the timeline ****. its a fan-fic for **** sake......................

Hello bro,i love to read your fanfic,great idea and interesting story. I think u can try to improve the conversation of all the characters it's feel too rigid,and some chapter feel somewhat being too rushing away,so the story development feel like jumping too fast. Overall i love your fanfic though,fighting bro.

This one off my favorite novels at the moment so i really hope this doesn't get dropped and its a shame people hate on the timeline its for fun anyway

I'm really enjoying this story it would be such a shame if it gets dropped pleaaaaaaase release more chapters ;D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I like this story but it has not been updating for 3 weeks. Cam the author tell me whether this is temporary or is he dropping the novel???????????

another one in hiato? Sadness!!!!...........................................................................................................................

I like this novel,i don't get why this novel is rated so low.Its true that that the translation quality is bit poor but still its great.Thankss author for such great story.It will be great if you could release more chapters

I’m really enjoying this fanfic but it’s seems like the author might have stopped releasing any updates. Can someone let me know if it’s permanent or just temporary?

Nice novel bro keep.up the good work but I suggested the bring more chapters hahaha i want more oh it ughhh hahahaha xD so pls bring more chapters and ignore all the normies they don't know what real fan-fiction is hahaha ...

Even it is readable, but the writer brutally destroying original timeline, as if didnt respecting original work, as fan of naruto original work, even fan fiction all creation of writer, i hate some one who write fan fic like this, who look like didnt care a bit of original work just free writing story as long as have connection with Naruto story, although will crossover to fairytail, if beginning story already chaos, next story arc will become sour in my mind. it better you making up character to integriting Naruto world story rather forced your character mixing in story and destroying original work timeline, also better get more information for original work first before making fanfic.

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