I would've continued if you didn't do all this separation arc shít. I'm very sensitive about relationships so them getting separated really turned me off. Its still a great story but I'm really not into separation
When reading about the MC’s background I felt like there is a lot of evil in this world but I felt happy that he was able to find someone who has had a similar experience with him. I just think that what he does is a little bit contradictory because he doesn’t like people who only care for looks and he ends up falling in love with her because of looks.
Well, where to start?
if you read till chapter 6 and dont drop it, good work. beacause the mc is an idiot.
he got some powerfull cheats and does nothing with them. he kill monsters for xp but does not steal their stats and skills. (thats his parasite power)
he farms lvls not stats and is wasting his time. he shouöd go to the next city and use the graveyard to power up. but no he is a stupid sh it.
laster he gets necromancy and does not use it. a horde of mobs to farm for you, that will bring you coroses to steal stats. noooo he doesnt use it at all.
his fist powerup is not through hard work, its dumb luck in finding a cave with op items, skillbooks and a corpse.
our mc is braindead and useless.
well thats it for the first 6 chapters.
i read on till chap16 and it does not get better....
he found a town some bandits and kiöled them. no stat steal again. ohhh he found he city. and we all hope he uses his abilities and uses them on the graveyard. he didnt even think about how to use them properly or how to power up.
idiot buys a slave for 2 million gold makes a nobel his enemie and later kill him. and again he steals no stats or skill from a fu ck ing nobel. he wasted any opportunity he gets.
a and he makes the chruch his enemie, but so what.
most important. for someone betrayed and killed by his wife he damn sure trusts his new freed slave pretty easy. tells her his skills, his race (parasite) and i dont want to know what else after not a week together and about 20 sentences exhanged betweem them.
2 star just for chapter lenghts and writing.
this story will kill you braincells and mood. stay away from it.
So do you remember when in ALADDIN Jafar was looking for the diamond in the rough well that's this book in a nutshell it start s off pretty bad but when you see what the author has in mind it grips you for sure
buena trama, esenarios detallados , personajes algo monotonos y muy similares, alto nivel de comprension literaria , podria mejorar el echo de desarrollar la historia, hay muchos momentos en la cual se estanca por mucho tiempo argumental
I've once rated this novel once before. I gave it an overall 4 🌟. but I only gave 3 🌟 the writing quality and story development. I only gave it an overall 4 🌟 because of the long chapters which I love and also the fast pacing. but it was actually just a 3 🌟 novel from a story perspective. but now I'm at ch 306 and the writing quality and story development have become soo much better. so I think it deserves 4 🌟 for them now.
it's sad that many new readers stay away from this novel due to low rating and bad reviews by people who only read the initial 10-20 chapters. for their defence, they were right about the first 100 or so chapters being very bad with a lot of plotholes, forced romance and stuff. but the author has improved a lot over writing this novel. And I firmly believe this novel deserves a way better rating than what it has now.
for the new readers, I recommend that you ignore the negative reviews for now and read atleast 100 chapters before deciding to drop it. Hey, it's just a suggestion. I believe you won't regret it.
And lastly, thank you author for writing this while make it improve a lot amidst facing constant insults and bad reviews. I would've never expected this much from a 4 🌟 rated webnovel.
I gave this book a try because the author of "shadow emperor in another world" ( check it out. awesome book btw. just have to keep in mind the later chapters get shorter) recommend me this novel when I said I love novels with long chapters. I saw a lot of negative reviews here and I was quite sceptical about the quality of the book. but I still gave this one a go. yes, they were right about the hypocrisy and stuff in this novel and the power levels are a mess. but this by no means deserve a 1 ⭐ or 2 🌟 s. this one has long chapters (I saw one over 60 pages long, so yeah it has long ass chapters), op mc, an average story, forced romance,etc. the typical stuff. so now you know what to expect.
Don't forget visit "shadow emperor in another world". the author is a really nice guy. and the story is better than this one.
While the writing quality and some of the Mcs descions arnt the best, I none the less love this book and is among my favorite Stories ive read. A few things can be done better, however i am by far not complaining, as I know personally how hard it can be to develop a story and any author who puts in Time, effort, and especially their blood, sweat, and tears, has my wholehearted and unconditional love and support.
-From an Aspiring Author
The sentences in this novel are convoluted, but still readable. The pacing is okay, and the story as a whole is still enjoyable. However, the romance is way too rushed and the characters become so out of character once the romance starts. It's as if Author-san wants to force the ML and the FL to be together, and the results are so cringey to read. Objectively speaking, after being tortured by his wife for months, I wouldn't be surprised if the MC had some sort of hidden trauma towards women, so it was very shocking to see the speed that the MC and the FL got together. But ignoring the romance part, the story as whole is still extremely good; it's just the romance that ruins the whole experience.
Not a bad story line, but the English and typos are really significant. For that reason I stopped reading before getting to far. I liked the story, but because of the typos I decided it wasn't worth paying premium for it.
So, I really think you have to proofread it better or get someone else to proofread it. Like please. There are way too many run on sentences. PLEASE USE PERIODS. So far, what I’ve noticed is that, pretty much every single paragraph, IS one sentence. It shouldn’t be that way. Break it up and make multiple sentences. Thank you. I know you’re busy author and I don’t blame you for having a life, but please make sure to fix that sooner or later. It makes everything seem long and tedious to read, making me not want to read it and just skip over everything. Also, the character development shouldve been slower. Because a man who has been tortured for months by his wife, would not feel anything towards a girl so soon. And the demon girl too! She definitely would’ve felt a lot of distrust towards the MC still, even if he did all of that for her. She has also been betrayed after MONTHS of a dude trying to get her to trust him. So she should feel at least a bit more apprehension in trusting him and hold more suspicion towards him. Her distrust towards him just fades a bit too quickly in my opinion. It’s been ok so far and there IS potential in this. It just needs to be cleaned up and fleshed out a bit.
Good luck author in whatever you’re doing now and I wish you well.
There's some problem in translation but still bearable. Although it's a pity that the romance is too early and still missing the feels, it still turned okay okay and became better after that, also their love is too fast paced that I started to missed their simple and honest love from the early chapters. The progress of story is good too, but some people may notice some nonsense at some point, but I think almost all of them is just minor things. This novel really has a lot of potential, if only that the author has chosen the right direction at the start of the novel then all is good, but maybe we can just say that the author is still learning(it's not really that disappointing because the result is still okay. Overall, the story is interesting for me because i'm hooked already and because of the side stories that's being frequently shown, I became more interested at what will happen in the future chapters. Well I hope for the best to the author and a thumb up for him👍 Goodluck, I have a high hopes to this story.