Its starts off okay but if the author gave a little more detail for the Mc personality and of the area he is in. It will a little bit more immersive so people will be more inclined to read it and want more. It really is good I still want to read more now with how the author is writing the storyline I just wish there were more updates.
Great story worth reading and enjoyable . The character introduction is marvellous and their journey sounds so interesting and amusing at the Sam time. It is a story that one can dedicate their time for to read and enjoy
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
I need MORE CHAPTERS!!
Come on man more chapters where did you run πββοΈ off to its a good novel donβt leave us hanging πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
He might as well officially announce this but this novel is dropped completely and utterly. If we suddenly get more chapters out of nowhere, I will take back this comment because this novel has potential
It seems that a lot of you want to have a continuation of this novel. Currently i am writing two other novels and one being relatively similar to this called "The Child of Void". I will be publishing one chapter per week, thanks for understanding!
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Update please!!! I am dying to know what's going to happen further in the story can you please give me an update I can't wait anymore please please update
Mooooooooooorrrreeeeeee ccccchhhhhhaaaaaaaappptttttteeeeeerrrssssss pppppplllllleeeeeaaaasssseee!!!!!!!!π£π£π£ I want more, I need more I can't give any judgement because theres only 2 chapters but it's interestingπ€ nice plotπ I can't wait for the next update hope it be soon as possible π π
Intresting story but needs more chapters to better see how story will developt.
I would like to know MC personality better.
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A really great storyy and also very interesting well let us just see how far it will go, but first if all let's hope that it will not be like number 1 under heaven toooo much ,since what i think most of us want to see in this one is a little bit less harem and all those weird fan stufff ( personal servant ) . But pleaseee more chapter
It would be nice if I get more updates till now the story is pretty unclear though the story seems interesting but we get to know after reading a few more chapters wether it really is worth the read. I would hope there would be further development with the characters I'm still waiting for more updates
Well I think this novel has a potential this is all I can comment for now let's wait until it reach 100++ chapter
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