Reviews of Second Life by vegetassj2 - Webnovel

hello readers i would shamelessly give a 5 star review to my own novel.Please comment your view on my novel so that i can understand if i am going in correct path or point out if i make any mistakes.Again thanks for reading

Good start ,but take it slow don't make him too overpowered too fast ..... Just my opinion so don't mind me. So 140 characters,,,,.............................,...............................................................