Reviews of Necromancer System (Book 1) Unedited

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SkylosTheAdorable
One star because there was no story.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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TwistedMind
Came looking for a good novel and left with utter disappointment..the author is shameless and there's no novel in here except him advertising you to buy his ****.
5mth
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PrinceofSin
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GraySerpent
This is not a story, it's an advertisement. So you got a rating to reflect that. Shame on you for taking the space of a novel that could actually be on the site, in the ranking spot that you've taken over. Probably going to go pirate your books on google now just to spite you. ,|,,
11mth
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TeraSv
The main caracter is a psychoogical unstable kid solidier who got revived in another world due to the last will of an ancient blackmagican for unknown reasons. He finds himself in the body of a boy in a noble family in political strugles. There he tries to survive using his ruthlesnes and the necromancer System a legacy gifted to him by his "summoner". Positive: + Actions have consequences. bad descicions of the main char come back to hunt him later instead of everything magically falling into place. + No Plot armor + Descisions of caracters including minor ones seem mostly reasonable Negatives - unstable updates
11mth
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georgeatk10
Ok and great genre of LN but need s’mores updates faster ( I understand that you have lives outside of writing but we need MORRRRRRRRREEE) so in total it’s pretty fucking epic
12mth
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CultivatorMark17
Akala ko pa naman ay may story na hindi pala paasa hahahaha pero titignan ko nalang sa website mo para naman ma basa ko pero sa synopsis mo ay talaga namang maganda
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Joe_Bigmac
Where is the book? Its just an update here. With no mention of the book. Please it sounds interesting. I want to read it. Filler filler filler filller filler filller
1yr
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Trojianmaru
There's nothing here. The "2nd book" is on WebNovel, but if you want to read this, if you want to know what happened to lead up to the "2nd book", you need to buy it on amazon. So this is basically just an ad to buy their book on a different site. Waste of my time, n should be removed from the site.
1yr
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dlwhitaker4
Is there a way a can read this book? I’m dying😩 ..........................................................................................................................................................................
1yr
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Kile
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1yr
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HainaQ
The plot is quiet interesting. I really like the power that he has. I just want to know more . What gonna happen to the james . What he gonna do at black land , what going to happen next . I hope the author continue post the stories and update more . I actually like the story
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GloomyGod
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Megan_Green
I loved thr first book, and the second is getting really good! I love the characters and the development of their magic. I can't wait to see if anyone who isnt ancient can put James on his toes. The only issue i have is I want more chapters, but I have that issue a lot.
1yr
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superduperdude
This is a pretty amazing book as it blends the best elements that a story can have (In my opinion) An evil MC a great world to give MC a big area to grow and NOT HAVING A BUNCH OF STUPID GIRLS FOLLOWING HIM AROUND WHILE HE IS STUPIDLY GIVING THEM RESOURCES.
2yr
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Zedsdeadbaby
Okay so. I love this story. As in, with all my heart. This story is beautiful. Slight grammar errors at pints, but I couldn’t care less. Only thing I could wish for is MOAR CHAPTERS but I get that the authors already doing the best he can, so good! Be warned though: this story is violent and gruesome(and I love it)
2yr
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Zedsdeadbaby
A+++!!! This is the best story I’ve ever read! Bewarned, though, this story is not for the faint of heart! It has heavy fire and violence! (Just the way I love it!)
2yr
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Zedsdeadbaby
Literally one of the best stories I’ve ever read, if not THE best!!! Sort of sad about the author going through hard times, but seriously! READ THIS BOOK!!! but maybe read book one first and also go donate to mrdojos patreon because he needs more money to motivate more WRITING!!
2yr
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SnowGod
MUAHAHAHAHA... *COUGH* AHAHAHAHAHAHA *COUGH* AHAHAHAHA... Perfect evil, love it. Suggest 100% that you read this fantastically gruesome story of (IMO) a sociopathic **** with darkness...
2yr
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ath3l
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ath3l

How do I get back to the first book? There was some error and app skipped all content from Lucian and James fight. Anyone able to help? I would gladly appreciate any help
2yr
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Hakai69
This is a pretty cool novel! (I wanted to post this but since it needs 140 words I guess I shall sulk in the corners of my mind and gradually think about things)
2yr
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Devious55
I can't wait for Mrdojo to get better and resume this very interesting story which follows a genuine evil MC and I do mean EVIL, most other evil MCs pale in comparison to him. The story has some spelling issues in the beginning but it gradually gets better around chapter 7-10 and the quality keeps going up from there. I love the POVs of the other characters in the story showing their motives and thoughts on events happening around them. My favorite thing amongst all, however, is how the MC actually has a brain and creates an information network with his souls and uses that to plan out what he's doing instead of just leaving it all to luck like a lot of stories sadly end up doing. The world background could use a glossary to compile all the information about levels, countries, beasts, magic, and characters.
2yr
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Static_Knight
First I will talk about what I like about this story -it has great pacing and it flows out of the page - it’s believable characters has realistic motivations (except the mc he just hates everyone or doesn’t care) - it’s well set up no unexplained actions ( other than what’s happening when I left but I’m sure that will be explained in the future) -it’s a great story to read (and I mean you understand everything that’s happening and are unlikely to miss stuff) Now for what I don’t like Everything about the mc I liked him at the beginning but when he had the SPOILER two dark wizards kill a bunch of his stalkers and maybe some of his guards so no one would know what he’s doing was the turning point for me and what pushed me over the edge was when he killed the only good people in the family because he can In short the world is dark but the mc is something else who you would have to have some dark thoughts to connect with at any level This story makes you feel dirty for reading it The mc would be a great villain if the author desides to make a kind story and needs a absolute evil Also didn’t like the finaly of the first book felt a little forced
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Lazy_Magus
For now (c52) story is good. But we have close to 0 world background. P.s Autor tell use that now this volume 3 will have a lot of wolrd background but for now i just don't see it.
2yr
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LightKingNoctis
Shed your mortal coil and reveal unto us your true Divine Form so that we cause gaze upon it in Wonder and Awe so that you may inspire us to also break through the bottleneck called Life. Hope you get better soon.
2yr
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BravadaCedavra
I'm so waiting for next chapters. I really love this book. I love the brutal reality of the world and characters. I do understand that maybe this is too much for many people, but hey this is actually how you'll be surviving in such a world, or be a good boy and die.
2yr
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Karyehs
I wish I could like this novel. Really! I like necromancers and I like systems... And I also like "true neutral" MCs, which some people may describe as "evil"... But I can't enjoy this novel. - The author keeps repeating his informations sooooo much... He is basically 'showing' the scene, and then he 'tells'/explains it to us again.... Sometimes this would be fine, but it happens waaaaaaaay too much. - Sometimes he is not only showing & telling us the scenes, but also let his characters react to the scene, without missing the opportunity to repeat it again. Sometimes less is more! - He is writing about the genital of a 13 year old boy in a 'mildly' sexual way. (I wonder for how many people this is a plus :/) - MC is ALWAYS "widely grinning" like a idiot.... Not in a social situation, but for random mildly positive things.... He is "widely grinning" at least 3 times per chapter... I didn't really care in the beginning, but it seems to be the only mimic/facial expression he is capable of without acting. - I don't like when the MC acts like a retard. Like his walking style, etc.. You could say he has a reason, but to be honest it is a retarded reason. - World background is at least in the beginning very weird and contradictory... A continent, which enjoyed thousands of years of peace, random villages get wiped out in rituals and nobody is really surprised. My opinion. I probably would have cared less, if I didn't hope for something good (necromancers <3). *Grins widely with a scary light in his eyes, which would everybody shiver who recognizes it, but nobody even notices.*
2yr
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sacrificialsoul
I think that it does berserk proud in writing a brutal MC with a tragic back story, some minor mistake in grammar but nothing hindering you imagination as you picture the MC'S adventure
2yr
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MysticHeartDemon
This has become one of the few novels i wait with glee for an update. Hope you get well soon! 😸 Also you have become one of my favorite authors!
2yr
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ThirdLegSwordsWuMN
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