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ThirdLegSwordsWuMN
Hi. I like Compote. But this novel is sour. Very trash. Much garbage. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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OttoKuusniemi
To me this novel is very enjoyable for 2 reasons. 1. The MC will to survive and the indefference that follows because of it. 2. Overall nice way of using souls and corpses as a necromancer. The only big detergent I don't like is the way MC just learns spells and skills. I know, it's a system but still. Learning, modifying and implementing spells and other skills is what makes mages so enjoyable to me. Other than that nothing negative to talk about. I recommend giving this novel a try.
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shimofurineko
Recommended for those who want a very, i mean VERY EVIL MC! WAHAHAHAHA. Kidding aside, its a good read, though it only has 51 chapters so far. But those 51 chapters are so lit i felt myself in a rollercoaster ride.
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DaoistCrazy1122
I love this nove it is one my favorites it has really good quality and is addictive Please make this novel have at least a 1000+ chapters (I would prefer a lot more though) and try to add multiple realms or dimensions or worlds and have him take over all them become the ruler or king
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Knossos
The classic double, reincarnation cliche with an added "isn't this cliche?" Dialogue, yep reeeel promising.. but it has guns so at least it's semi original.
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ezstep
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ezstep

What a marvel!!! This novel reminds me of some epic works of western novel like mistborn trilogy or the way of kings... What lack in the most webnovel is the lack of satisfaction when reading a chapter, they were just to short, with a minimum meaning going on inside, other than that is the lack of mystery happening inside the story... Now this marvelous author here mrdojo, present us with such good reads, such detailed information on every characters feeling, thinking, and perceiving is what a novel about, so that we as readers could picture up what is happening exactly,... Now, what i hope most for you is to finish this stroy without any meaningless story going on inside, like how most anime different from their manga... Ooh, and i want to read about other characters in this story, especially tigress olga, hehe, keep up this good story...👍
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Farmy
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Farmy

Good Story and lots of potential, while the MC is mentally unstable lots of fighting some ***** content everyone should give it a try. faster new chapter release would be nice.
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Zentoraus
I super love the idea of a Necromancer System. Primarily because I see so little of it since Necromancy is a western idea but it's so hard to keep reading eve though I do like the characters. The writer writes as if he is a bad translator translating a Chinese novel and it's s jarring me out of the story and I keep having to tell myself to continue reading. I do like the concept but again the style and grammar of writing is pulling ne away from my enjoyment.
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giancarlo812
dam good story ! this would make for a good manga , a better anime or an awesome movie series . i'm glad this novel doesn't have a cliche hero as i'm so sick and tired of those , keep up the good work
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Khanx
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Khanx

I hate to write reviews but for this novel I will make an exception. First of all, right now i have just finished to read the first volume. When you rate a book, the first thing that you have to do is answer some questions. What does it counts? (Story) How does it counts? The book counts the typical story of reincarnation with a system (cliché) :( 4/10 About the second question... Write: 6/10 (for me 10 = name of the wind) i little dense, i think that in the way that you write you should focus more in details & world background that in the character, but not too many. I have fidden some minor mistakes on some words / names but no more than 4 in 40 chapters. Congratulations, without an editor thats is a great achievement. Story development: 7/10 start with a cliché but continues with "political" developmet i cannot comment too much this part without the futher development of the story. Main Character: 9/10 yes, *****!!!! I was looking for a villain character Secundary: 7/10 I think that could be more development in this area, some characters seem a little plain. World background: ?/10 i cannot say too many about this part, the first volumen dont tell too many things... I expect more in the next one. And now an important coment, i would like that the author read it. I'm afraid about two common mistakes made by authors when writes: 1- Loop: Always happens the shame thing, like always appear a new enemy stronger, or a contest after another. Remember that a larger book doesnt mean a greater one. If you make "loops" readers will be bored. 2- OP: A MC too op who kill whatever he wants without problems is also annoying, he will always win his matchs and will not have any loses. Sorry for my english, it is not my main language.
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DarkDaoist
This isn't for faint of heart or goody two shoes, the MC is a heinous evil person. MC is remorseless, heartless, merciless, cruel, cunning, manipulating, rapist, sodomite, torturer, necromaniac and other evil things. He's a kin-slayer who plotted to kill all of his family and allowed the death his own biological mother too who he hates despite her being innocent and cared very much for his well being. I cannot bring myself to even relate to the MC but scum like them exist so it's a good read to see a rise of an evil villain.
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GoneMad
This novel just blew past the competition and became one of my favorites! It's so dark and ******** there is nothing like it, if you are looking for something dark this is it, this MC is one of my favorites. Despite some little things that anoy me i love this novel and i hope the author doesn't stray from his path because of people's comments.
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Naxrow
Awesome book but not recommended for faint hearted people , Awesome mc development ... Although one must read .. Generally when new chapters are uploaded ??
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Voltics
One of The best System Novels I ever read. I especially like The Mc psycho character. The Storey has Some bloody Events With DETAILED explanations Which can be quiet Disturbing But Addictive. And the Chapters Are super long With Rapid Release. Long Storey Short I LOVE THIS NOVEL
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A_Certain_Tickle
Would recommend this to pretty much anyone that likes a dark MC. A good read, in my opinion one of the better originals on this site. So far I have enjoyed this novel a lot. This is one of the few novels that made my heart start physically pumping, faster that I have read in a long time. It isn't like it doesn't have a few problems though. There are a few mistakes in the names of people, such an example is when Damien is used in place of Edgar.
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xBluebird
OK overall, but all the characters personalities and ideologies are weak. Again, not a bad webnovel, but it could be better. Would reccomend if bored and nothing to do.
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Cosmic_cutie
It's a well written story. The story grabs you in and makes you want more. While this story is not my cup of tea; For those who like excessively violent and sociopathic MC then this will probably be a favorite.
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soloneko
Didnt read yet but i think it's a good novel. I hope it's a dark and has a evil protagonist and a smart mc hahaha, because almost of the MC in other novels are like hypocrites, claiming to be good and smart, pwe! and i hope also the mc is like the mc in reverend insanity . sorry, i really like evil protagonist, thats all and thank you. Update more chaps plss :)
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jebrodrick
If you like gratuitous *** and violence then this story is for you. If not, you'll want to pass........................................................
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Ahriman92
Glorious torture ****. I haven't read any LN this raw and gory before. It's incredibly refreshing to have an all out evil character without ANY moral qualms. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes though.
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Poche
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This is the best necromancy web novel I've read. With a dark, bloody and well-planned style. Read 4.5 Waiting for more scenes that make my teeth tighten when I read it.
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mazlog
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mazlog

Necromancer System is a well written and well designed story with a lot of action and scheming without a ton of explanation and filler. The MC is evil and talented and the characters, in my opinion, are reasonably well designed. Overall I would say that anyone interested in stories where the MC isn't a goody two shoes or some weird pervert then this story is a must. My only suggestion is that if you have a bit of apprehension towards some explicit scenes then skip the chapters that the author states warnings at the beginning. These chapters are mainly character build or filler and can be skipped so rather than potentially disliking and turning away from the novel because of those chapters just skip them.
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picklericks
Pretty dam good, and also very dark which I like. I would prefer if author would only use one *ding though when the system does its thing. Other than that the story is fantastic and I look forward to reading more
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BloodMoonMonarch
At the end of First Book I decided to write this review knowing what I'm standing on. As name suggest it's a system novel but it's diffrent than most of them, it's "interaction" with host so far is at the level of those from LoHP. MC himself is progressing as story goes on. At the beginning he appears as slightly ruthless and cunning person, as story progresses he turns into cold-blooded, cruel and slightly insane protagonist (and rapist). Story itself is intresting, with good plot and world building, the only downside I can notice at this point is lack of side characters or ones that could pull MC into more action. Author's grammar is very good and only sometimes errors appear. Some moments may be disturbing for readers but they're not being overused. I'm giving 4.5 stars for lack of side characters whose names would be worth remembering (most of them die in 3 chapters) and occasional grammar errors. Other than that this story is a masterpiece and I'm waiting for book two. Good luck and keep up nice job Author.
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Reisgem

The only thing that I ask myself reading this novel is why our mc despite being a mage only have one attack spell? Why no fire balls and variants,anyway I want say 2 things: just take my power stones and I would love see an anime made from this story(no filler and downgrade on ******** parts)
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unIReap

This novel is not for the faint hearted people, Its not your heroic and fair Mc but the opposite is bloody, gory, twisted, dark. A new look at how our mc builds his strengt and the journey he takes. The story is very good written and the story is very stable format and the mc is not op at the start but use more his head which most other novels involving a system that mc relying on all the way. But not in this one so far. The mc he plans each step he takes. I would recommend u take a look and read a couple of chapters and see if u like this type of novel 5stars from me.
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Gemiae
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Gemiae

I love this novel and everything about it. For any fans of evil protagonists, calculating protagonists, blood and gore, and dark magic, this is the novel for you. This novel always keeps me wanting more and I believe the story progresses at a good pace, with several chapters being quite long so you feel like you’ve received a good fill of the story for the day. I love the characters involved and the plot that is included throughout each arc, and it always surpasses my expectations. It also has some funny moments that caught me by surprise and I enjoyed a good laugh, which helps you appreciate the story and the fun the author had in writing it. It’s by far one of the best novels I’ve ever read and the author really deserves to be applauded for his writing and dedication to the fan base.
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