Reviews of Reincarnated as a Footballer by rhcharan - Webnovel

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PROS >This is the BEST SPORT NOVEL ON THIS SITE, period. >GOOD GRAMMAR >The author seems to have a general idea and make GOOD TRANSITIONS BETWEEN POINTS to make the story flow more smoothly. ********************************************** CONS >A LOT of foreshadowing. Of the 6 Chapters 4 have meaningless foreshadowing between chapters. > INCONSISTENCY OF THE SYSTEM. On chapter 4, he trained for 1 month and gained a total of 15 points. It took him 5 years to gain 45 points that's an average of 9 points per year. Even if you took 1 or 2 years off for baby stuff he gained in 1 month what was equal to a year of training. > FAMILY? The father is mentioned to be the CEO of one of the most important companies of the country but he could take a lot of days without batting it eyes. No interaction what so ever, only with the grandmother. The other children didn't' get jealous for the attention they gave it to him? > MIND? Sometimes he behaves like an *****, and other times he goes and behave like a little kid. He was suppose to have the memories of his past life. And I don't mean in front of another people, I mean in general. My advice is to stop the foreshadowing so much, it gets annoying as hell. And maybe add as an exception of that training as a "one spurt of abilities" every 5 years until he reach 45 years old or something like that. If you could tackle the other 2 issues it could be better. Anyway, I hope you recover and post more chapters to see your growth.