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BookGuardian
Just finished reading the latest chapter, I found this on royalroadl, left a review or two there and found there was another chapter here that wasn't there, read the author note on how you wanted some more feedback and here I am. So far there hasn't really been much for me to give ratings on I suppose so it's just a 3 for now, maybe when we get further in there'll be more world building, character development, etc etc. The dynamic between the Zaro and Amro (I think thats how you spelt it?) is kinda cool, I like how he isn't completely submissive or reverent to him because he doesn't know his identity and is kinda snarky lol (Even though it'll probably have dire consequences from what I can tell from the foreshadowing?) Honestly I really want to see more of the world so far and the impact of the gods death at the beginning and how the world will be impacted by a lack of a deity of death now, looking forward to how this story will go because it seems really interesting and has a lot of potential, although maybe the first few chapters could be edited since their quality doesn't seem up to par with the later chapters? It was actually kind of off-putting and I almost give up on this hidden piece because I thought it would reflect on how the rest of the book would be.
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Fialnir
Hell yeah F F F F F F Ff F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F Ff G G G G G F F D S S Dd F C C V V V G G G Gf F F F F R R R R T F
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DaoFatherCriticism
The story follows the journey of a young hunter who is to rise in power until he can avenge himself and avenge the death god whose legacy he obtained. The death god himself has a pragmatic character while the hunter is a bit on the ***** side. Unlike other stories in the original section, this story is actually readable. The number of mistakes I could spot was very low which is a lot to say compared to others I've read in the original section. Overall everything is great but I'd love to see the release rate go from 5 to 7 weekly.
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FluffyPandas
Overall, this story seems pretty good. I skimmed through the last few, but the plot, character design/development, writing quality, etc. was all pretty good. There were some minor grammatical mistakes, most of which were comma splices. From what I could tell, the author uses a lot of dialogue tags, although that could just be their style. InkBamboo also tends to have long sentences with a lot of commas. So, in conclusion, this was a pretty good story, but the author sometimes abuses commas when they're writing. I'm going to assume that the update stability is good since you only started writing this two weeks ago and there's... 12 chapters out? 11? I don't remember.
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Ninjacya321
Good story, and the Webnovel reviewing categories is quite strange. Character Design? (•_•) Anyways, very good but that stated one is a 3 star in my opinion. The characters are great, well the two main ones I know of so far. Amro and Zaros. The stories good with it being set in the fantasy medieval era being awesome. Sorry I can’t give it 5 Stars in every catagory. I can’t even recall what either Amro or Zaros look like, and I’m writing this review directly after I finished chapter 8. But ignoring those minor flaws of how I can’t imagine the characters, the story is still the most important part along with the writing quality. It is indeed a poignant story of revenge. So far emphasizing what greed can do to many. Great work and I hope you continue well!
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AutumnBreeze
The story has very few grammatical mistakes which is reflected by the slower update speed from the author. However, if the quality of the work can be kept up to this standard, then I wouldn't mind the wait. Haven't seen too much development but the story has just started. Hope for more!
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amro4games
I am giving this five stars because I am the main character, and any story with me as the main character is definitely a 5 star story! If I am not the main character, author can let me know so I can revise my review to 1 star :)
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InkBamboo
Hello, this is your dear author speaking. This is a side project I'll be doing on the downtime for my other novel. Feel free to leave reviews/comments/message me regarding what could be improved. Thanks for reading; remember this is a side project and not one I'm getting paid for, therefore I'm just able to do it during my free time. Thanks, everyone!
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