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Gamercat
Super disappointed the author just abandoned this. I waited for 2 years hoping he would continue it, but he just started writing a new novel instead. After no updates for 2 years we just get an apology update chapter??! Sorry, I'm not interested in reading any of your new works. You could just disappear with no notice after I walk and grow with your main character. It's not nice to ghost people dude.
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omnigamergt
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Lokthrys
I love how he adapts to killing the people who do evil things as well as how he adjusts his own mentality, I also love how the system works and how he can use skill and gain upgrade points from saving people.
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DKYMuffinman
Man really enjoying this. Sucks to be left on a cliff hanger. Seeing the character grow iui s nice. Very refreshing since he is not instantly OP. Can't wait for more.
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AsianLadyBoy
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FengLin
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Really amazing, but would love to see it start up again. When I personally look on how the system does things it gives me a little similarities to "The Gamer" novel.
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toondragon
[Ding! This Story is Dead!] Or at least this Story feels like it is dead. Still is a very good Story and I would advise reading it, since it is very well writen and has only very little in the form of Grammar mistakes.
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Steven_Beck
This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t put it down I think it’s so good that I think it should have a sequel or 2 sequels to this book
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Steven_Beck
When are you going to write the next chapter for this book I can’t wait for it to come out it’s that good of a book so please write the next chapter for this book
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Steven_Beck
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it and I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out it’s that good so I also think that it should make a sequel or 3 other sequels
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IdleMoonlight4444
this book is possibly the best book I have ever read, they way the words flow from the page it practically paints the story in front of your eyes
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IdleMoonlight4444
This book is well written and the characters are simply the best. There are so many good scenes like the ones at the elf kingdom, they were so good, or all the s battle scenes they are so well written and staged. but one thing that needs to be improved is the lack of A) a harem or B) a love intrest
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MasterSystem
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Lee_lin
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Lee_lin

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BillyJack
Badly written, but a brilliant story! I’d recommend this story for those who don’t mind about the quality of the work. However, it is still one of the best system novels I’ve read.
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confucius
What happened to the updates and the author..... Just disappeared and never turned up again? Boooooo. Not cool. Seriously. It was getting good
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Maekellen
Excellent story so far. Main reason for hit to quality is the numerous grammatical errors. All are easily attributed to being a translation and are minor enough not to derail the story.
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hallo_kim
Love the novel much except the update................................................................................................................................................
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snowqueen340
So far I find the story really enjoyable to read. Not to rush, not to slow. the pace is just right. keep up the good work. Looking forward to more release
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dhousley0624
Good story. Good characters for the limited number of chapters. Went down hill when release of chapters stopped. Has the author dropped this story? If so I'll be disappointed. Different way of doing a "system" that I like, but chapters just stopped abruptly and that effected my rating tremendously. Even if it was 1 chapter a week or a note from the author saying he was going to not release anything for a month or 2 would have given a better rating then an abrupt stop of chapters when the story was getting interesting.
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Errolstrom
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IcyP
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IcyP

Love the quality of this novel but the stability of updates is low. I hope everything is going well on your end and hope that everything gets better if so.
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Hoeyke
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Hoeyke

i like it allot .... to bad no new chapter in a while.....hope its gonna keep on going , i am really curious how the story goes................................................................................................................................................................
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KuroDino
I like it the story and this novel has a unique different novels so far I have read ( in novel about " system " ). I hope novel can make it to top 15 or 100 reviews.............
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ShadowMoonDragon
I love it so far, funny story been reading this since it had 3 chapters or so out just went through the reviews only to see dun Dun DUN I apparently didn't do one XD
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ShadowZ
Really like the novel so far. Hope there will be a mass release soon for the number of reviews soon. 140 characters 140 140 1 4 0 c h a r a c t e r s
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DigBick
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Asd54
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Asd54

Great story so far. I really like the sensible "Hero System" and the motivation of the main character. As positive criticism, I would say: Be careful with the title of each chapter to avoid spoilers, explain a little bit the objects and persons (for example, how big is the Deception Mirror) and I would find very helpful to put the gain of the stats respect the last time so the upgrade is clearer. Keep going!
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The_Unprofessional
So far, so good! The story progresses nicely and is a smart mix of basically some of our favorite novels and plot lines. I like that there are more than a few things that motivate the mc to go forward!
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