Reviews of Time.Travel() by Onch - Webnovel

A lot of people are going to be in the same boat as you are in the first place and you have to be able to be a good person and be a good person and be a good person and be a good person and be a part time person to help with your family life in a way that's really good person to you but not a lot more people who have been involved with you than your parents or children in your area for years to be with them in a very good person who has been a great person for you for the first couple months in a row because it has to have the same level and respect to be the same people that have the most and the most likely

Writing Quality: Good, to understand clearly what is going on Stability of Updates: good Story Development: too fast, uncreative and several rule breaks ... 50 ~ 60 chapters he faces a demon (lord of the flies) who is very powerful incarnated in the body of a dragon who is very powerful, and protagonist without being able to use any special power (he can not use magic does not have a strong body, back in time) kills him, and the protagonist says that the power to turn back in time is not invincible but he is never defeated, and after that event he stops using power extensively equal to how he used it so far ... forcing " mistakes "in it. Character Design: are good, but do not develop and are only to leverage the story forward or make it more convenient for the protagonist, such as the girl who lied, she is apprehensive to several chapters behind (about 20 ~ 30 ), to arrive at the progonista and become a slave dedector of lies, and the half-dragon? slave attack force and causing "problems" to the protagonist solve World Background; big, immense and interesting but poorly presented, badly planned and the reactions of the world as a whole were bad, but the arrogance of the "noble" was very well made and was very believable. basically the work is bad, but because the author did not have the patience to develop the characters and the world and the ideas of the author are good but poorly executed, the author needs to plan better there are 2 good works that are good examples of how to do this: the same mistake but not as big as this: Steampunk Apocalypse and this one that does it very well and when you arrive in the current chapter and look back to feel the evolution of power and personality: Reborn: Evolving From Nothing

I like it. This novel has most of its viewers on royal road it seems. The novel is interesting although I don't get why no one has used bombs or anything so far, they pretty much just sling spells even when its not all that optimal. The character has an interesting power and I'm pretty sure a split personality disorder. From what I've seen it may just be his soul teleporting back in time when you think about it. It would sort of explain why his regeneration gets stronger and he has thousands of chanting voices in his head.

I really enjoy this story, what sets it apart from the others is how the MC really struggles and the pain he goes through. What I find interesting about it is the fact that the MC cannot really die, however, as a result, he can go crazy and I am looking forward to seeing how it develops as well as when he will find his nemesis that can counter his one true ability. MC has also shown some growth and has become more driven. What I would like to see is the MC acting instead of reacting all the time. I sense this will change soon. All in all the writing is good, the premise unique and the world interesting. Looking forward to more chapters Mr. Author.