Reviews of Reincarnation That Everyone Desires by Old_Skin - Webnovel

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I want to give it a one star but I won’t since i only read a couple of chapters sorry if you don’t like that. The main attraction for the hunter x hunter world is it’s nen power as it’s just so versatile and can become extremely powerful if trained well and till now we have no idea how powerful one could get if he got to end on the path of nen. And for you to just throw that away for bleach powers is super disappointing to me as I honestly haven’t seen enough or any one who was actually interested in nen despite how incredible it is. Oh and a lot of reviewers say that your fanfic is full of grammatical mistakes which means that you’re super lazy to review your chapters which doesn’t bode well for the future of this fanfic so that’s another problem you should put in mind.

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Really good work THX for the hard work... Will you update more or are you dropping it? P.S please don't drop i m looking forward for more chapters 😫

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So I binged the entire series this afternoon, greatly enjoyed it. So my next question is, do you have a proof reader or editor? If not, and you want one, let me know.

Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter...... hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Although there are some grammar issues, overall it is an enjoyable read and I look forward to more releases. Please keep up the good work! I found the god logic and rules stuffed in there kinda doesn't flow well with the story though.

Ótima historia mais esta em falta na frequência de atualização fora isso 10/10 Acredito que ira atrair mais fans se atualizar a frequência pra 1 ou 2 por dia. Desde já agradeço

God I am going to drop this if he goes to jail. He should just escape and develop his powers and take his father with him. I really don't like novels where they go from happy to sad in a jiffy. Man don't dissapoint me by taking him to the jail or other **** like that.

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This story might have some mistakes but it has great potential and you can see how the author improves himself from chapter to chapter. Plus it is one of the best hunter x hunter novels mit there and trust me the most are crap.

There iş not much hxh and you are doing well pelase Continue this novel good job..................................................................................... ..................................................................................................

I just read the first couple of chapters and did not like it. The Mc said he wanted to be born at the same time as Gon but the author just skips over that and he is some age idk. Then five years pass randomly and I still don’t know how old he is or where the DUCK he is. Also there were a couple sentences that just made no sense

I can tell that the story will improve as it goes, for now the writing quality is a bit iffy but the story seems to move in a good direction, hope for more updates

so many errors...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Hello its your beloved author Old Skin. An old man like me will shamelessly give my novel 5 stars and as for the ones who simply like to troll please don't rest if you don't like, ok?

Here to balance the ratings, this does not deserve 4,5..................................................................................................................................

It's good at first I thought that I wouldn't like it after having read the synopsis but, after giving it a shot I found it to be very enjoyable.

Please proofread your chapters. I often find extremely ****** grammatical errors like writing "wad" instead of "was" or "sigthed" instead of "sighed". These errors are much too ****** and could easily be fixed with little to no effort, all you need to do is proofread your chapters after writing them. Other than your grammatical errors the rest of the story is fine.

awesome story just release more chaaps pls pls i love u thank u <333333333333333333333333333333333333 :DdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I have yet to read a single word of your story! You get my support just because it's Hunter X Hunter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i like this :D * * * * 140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.140.

Well, I really like hunterxhunter, and I find it sad that not so many persons write fanfiction about it. The story good so far (13 chapter), and the MC isn't totaly a cheat for now. I hope the autor can balance the MC power with the world he's in since if he doesn't the story will probably go to fast to really enjoy it.

Though I see few problem here and there, I can’t disagree that it’s a impressive Novel. Hose who have not read is should try it. Though it may confuse you at first you will understand Mc powers as the chapters progress.

Very good, I look forward to the continuation. character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140

This is great!!! I love Hunter x Hunter but sadly not to many people write fanfic of it that's not some yuri BS so keep it up can t wait to read more.