Reviews of Endless Universes - Young Master Path - The 1368th

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Daoist1rvBov
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6mth
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The_F00L
This novel is literal garbage, pure Shit. No harem. This MC is below Delta he's so stupid no character development ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
10mth
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Mannypearl
Best book ever Master rabbink you the best Trevor has been free leaching as your student, lazy boy... Do continue... Really waiting for the joining with trevor
1yr
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Gh0st_Writer
It's a really bad novel is childish so is his cousin It gets annoying after reading it.
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1yr
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LV 6

Me gusta la sino**is, no e leído la novela pero la sino**is me encanta, 5 estrellas XD, por cierto sabían que el atún sabe muy bien con el arroz?, Yo los mezclo y les agrego mayonesa, y lo llamo arroz con atún y mayonesa, no se copien de mi idea, es la próxima revolución de la Gastronomía, jajajajaja es broma solo escribo esto para tener las letras necesarias para publicar, lo siento a los que me creyeron, el arroz con atún y mayonesa ya existe :'(
2yr
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DonHit
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2yr
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rhui_m
A salute to Master Rabbink!!! This is a hilarious story. Just had some laughs rolling on my bed. It just kept on coming. Not that the MC is stupid, no!!! He's brilliant. Practically brilliant.
2yr
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Zackking
Promise: NEVER DROPPED (detailed promise in Introduction). Sorry, it enter hiatus state. This Rabbink will never change the 1st line. BYEEE!!
2yr
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someone22
It's a little confusing, but it's also very funny . McAuther is a pervert "Hewhewhew" and don't judge a book by its cover even though it's alluring, it's a would in sheep's clothing 😂 I do recommend reading it though, always interesting when you're board
2yr
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RaiNxD
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2yr
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SenpaiMore
what a ****ty novel this is. i thought it is was good novel base in the synopsis but then when i read this ****ty novel... argggggh.. it becomes all nonsense...
2yr
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nothinsnew
gonna start reading now XD ..............................////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////.........................//////////
2yr
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DarkDaoist
instead of calling young master, it would be better to call him japanese anime hero Path, perverted, forever virgin and bullied by girls. he only knows how to bring trouble to his family and not sure how author made him so talented in cultivation when he's mentally dumb and an idiot.
2yr
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likeasumbudi999
Wtf with this mole on girls...author mention them too much omg ... I think mole make girls ugly why tf did author keep mentioning them fakkk it ruin the beauty
2yr
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7sins_Lord
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2yr
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DragonEmperors
I leave the reciew and novel As my final farewell. And my final ** fir this story. I've like and interest to read but that Damn Rabbink in the story just make me lost interest to continue more. I'm afraid to read even more screwing MC.. Author, are you acquintance with the person name Trevon? Because I can feel great hatred and enmity from the way you write the story. Oh well I'm looking for good not to read own MC being screwed by the author... Babye..
2yr
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freakmedic
does any one know why master rabbink isnt updating ??? i cant wait to see young master trevon to get wrecked in the story 🤣 cant wait for master rabbink to update. or something happen to our cute god rabbit ???
2yr
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Sabide
The personality of the MC he is pathetic. The truth I just keep reading by Master Rabbink makes he makes me laugh, without him I would have left the story
2yr
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Kojikazz22
I hate the mc and how he always gets baseless rumor around him how he's a sissy and stupid He's bassicaly just running away from child of God's Not killing them while weak and they call him a pervert but always stops at the last step The sypnosis says that he embraced the young master path but he's behavior with women is not like a young master why go for hard to get women than those that's easy to get with money It's inconsistent with the most of young master I've read about he's not living a life of debauchery like most young masters so he's a fake just a coward And stupid no braing insatiable guy I really hate this guy
2yr
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Wamblytoaster
I have nothing to say except you could have done so much better you had a good thing going for the first 20 chapters then it just went downhill.....
2yr
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Throgar
I have read thousands to tens of thousands of books in my life time. This is something unique. This is a rather interesting story and good fun. Please take the time to read this one. I have a strong suspension you will like this too.
2yr
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PhAntom25
One of the best original story's on webnovel. This novel makes the celestial readers feel they them self are in it and watching what's going on from birds eye view
2yr
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rajanaziraa
Good.. Nice story, i give 5 star because the story is so interesting, every day i'll read and finish only in 2 days because i was so excited to finish the story..
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2yr
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JavaSprings
This should be a satirical novel right? Too bad it couldn't make me laugh. The purpose of mocking the troupes on bad novels it to make fun of them while making yours look like an absolute masterpiece (i.e. One Punch Man), but this, this is just a shift in POV.
2yr
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Darkdelusion
May the baby master rabbink grant the poor young master with super beauty harem😔. Poor young master has suffered enough. Mc needs to have 'fierce fights' with Aya, raina, luna, etc. so that he can remain motivated. Baby pure love is also fine. May the wish made in welling tree be fulfilled😔.
2yr
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ShinRyu7788
this is refreshing. if you are bored with some linear cultivation storyline. try this novel. hilarious and unpredictable MC. shamelesness to the max !!!
2yr
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Carter
this is not a serious novel, just another clumsy novels who write it for fun or for some other reason, this story doesn't have much potential, the MC brain functions in a weird way, the MC got only one track of mind, that is harem harem harem which takes out all the good things in this novel, the author makes it sound like the MC is one of the greatest young master, all I can see is a wimpy pervert spoiled brat who would lick a women shoes to get her thigh, the MC brain is so dense that he cannot understand anything outside of pervert women zones.
2yr
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readerofstories
Ouch my eyes. The plot itself is barely followable and is just a mashup of tropes, while the writing itself is nigh incomprehensible due to the lack of grammar and structure. I can easily get the gist of what is going on due to the 1-D nature of the characters, but that doesn't forgive any of the egregious flaws.
2yr
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rameez
MC character is pathetic.......................................................... A....................... I. And..... I..............................................................................................................
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2yr
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Conqueror1
I havent read yet becoz its a habit of mine to read sypnosis n comment first bfore reading ,, but just reading the sypnosis makes me wanna read it immedietly
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2yr
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