Chapter comments on the chapter Of gods and men of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

I hate when you're out for a walk and you get hit by a random death ray.

First rat mc i have ever read about

Rip Marc owned by a random stray death ray.....

Ticket? don't you mean note?

Some minor errors, but funny👌🏻

There is no way the hero survive this spell -> insert "could" in between hero and survive

It’s funny and all that until you realised that this small fight between the gods is basically going to destroy one of the two worlds. Countless lives are being wiped. I don’t mind those that are “bad” dying by the thousands but those poor , poor innocence mobs.. I like it!

The attack that can kill a god should not leave anything from him...

Shamelessly respond -> shamelessly responded Feel free to correct my correction if its wrong XD

Im just commenting as i read along sarcastically say Aria -> Aria said sarcastically

Say calmly Aria -> Aria said calmly

Oh, great! Gods these days!!!

Nice

Is this a play of words on the book "of Mice and Men" by John Steinbeck? - Just wondering even tho it has no relation to this story.

Here I go again, adding to my growing addiction

Shit his character really is demon god materials

is english your second language?

Haha I think I'm gonna love this.

Hell yes you are making corrections to it! I will be voting stones again and I’ll be looking forward to a second read.

Sounds like the MC isn't unique with an rpg like system, sounds like that's how the worlds function.