Chapter comments on the chapter One Planet, Four Gods of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

Aria is so dumb. Even if she hoped he would die she shouldn't lose track of him. Now she can't have another hero and he will instead destroy her world. Reaaaally dumb

I wonder if he is going to train up a army... for example a bunch of mutant turtles

He became double agent

Blood for the blood god......oh wait wrong group

i really wish that he didnt have to kill the ratmen too cause a huge ass ratmen army waging war against all the worlds would be so badass you know like him being ratmen emperor ruler of all rodents

So this is gonna be a one ratman army?

There are small mistake but it's ok

So far I haven't seen anything that stumped whilst reading so I guess he did a good job

kill every servant of salazar, but not every servant of salazar in this world?

He creats an army of turtels next. [Sleek changes name to. : spinner ]

Great job! The grammar is improving so your proofreader is doing a very good job.

Plz don't drop the novel, I'm quite liking it

well, this got a whole lot more complicating

I' sad that he won't interact with the ratmans

I felt a chill crawl my spine

I had hoped he was going to kill those damn sand people

Meh, I’d prefer him working with the ratman instead

This chapter was fucking confusing.. please fix

Another pawn for the gods play...!? 😞

Hoped for his to command the ratmans instead of destroying them