Chapter comments on the chapter Lucia of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

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WeavingSpider
Ayaya i still love to read your novel and Sleek still trys to find out what God Oslo is:-)
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Innovation
For example here, a caravan, he use plague because he can't train his skeletons.
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Mistborn
You need a better editor. The current ones English proficiency leaves much to be desired
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Azathothgrim
Thanks for the chapter
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Ezraa
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Ezraa

I don’t understand his obsession with killing humans, they’re bound to have spread news of his exploits in Ronta already. Why not go after the Vamps or join the other Undead?
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Sythcake
so I don’t get it? Is everyone alive a believer of Aria?? or only people of the kingdom?
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Mad_Lazarus
MC blames Gods for lack of imagination in their works. Then uses a noisy attack to kill sleeping people. The one who is lacking in imagination right now would Definitely be the author. I mean, I see it. Others see it. Plague for killing many people would've been effective, after taking out priests in each camp. Dumb.
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Evil_God_Zarakh
I think create plague has been underestimated, how can a disease potency reduce with out a cure and it should continue to spread from one person to another, the author should have really given a thought into it
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GhostZero
Ghøst wasn't here
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ArcaneOverlord
what if he is God of love and peace
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GreatMt_Big_River
"While Lucia is probably in charge with a lot of farms" with->of*
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Senseisan
Special reward...I'm intrigued.
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Titivillus
Oslo is an old god and the race that believed in him were snakemen right?
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SkyAzeroth
Thanks for the chapter!! 🤗
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Alfz
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Alfz

Thanks for the chapter
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PotionMaker
Thanks for the chapter~!
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Iskandir
Thanks for the chapter
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