Chapter comments on the chapter The Truth about Atria of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

Who is happy to see one of our oldest friend?

good to see sleek showing little by little who is boss! can't wait to see Aria crying over her dead world!

And now....here comes the ratman spirit to say "be my ally! I just kind of caused everything to go to hell during your battle but oh well...BTW I wanna kill all humans ;)"

Ah the best things in life, To crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentation of the women!

had a hard believing hard--hard time*

during the battlefield--during the battle battlefield is a place, sentence is structured for an event. if you mean the battlefield all the time, sentence needs restructuring.

No way will the humans agree to allying with him, after all, it was his massacre of Atria and defeat of Aria that lead to the defeat of the allied forces. Maybe he can attack the Ratman city whilst they’re busy playing Simcity at Ronta and attacking the dwarves?

Thanks - Gracias

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BURN ! baby burn !

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💀 Thanks for the chapter!! 💀

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Waiting for sleek apareance

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