Chapter comments on the chapter of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

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Innovation
Who is happy to see one of our oldest friend?
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junior2729
good to see sleek showing little by little who is boss! can't wait to see Aria crying over her dead world!
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raptorfalcon
And now....here comes the ratman spirit to say "be my ally! I just kind of caused everything to go to hell during your battle but oh well...BTW I wanna kill all humans ;)"
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True_Idiot
Ah the best things in life, To crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentation of the women!
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GreatMt_Big_River
had a hard believing hard--hard time*
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GreatMt_Big_River
during the battlefield--during the battle battlefield is a place, sentence is structured for an event. if you mean the battlefield all the time, sentence needs restructuring.
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Ezraa
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Ezraa

No way will the humans agree to allying with him, after all, it was his massacre of Atria and defeat of Aria that lead to the defeat of the allied forces. Maybe he can attack the Ratman city whilst theyโ€™re busy playing Simcity at Ronta and attacking the dwarves?
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facholyn
Thanks - Gracias
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Montcultivation
BURN ! baby burn !
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SkyAzeroth
๐Ÿ’€ Thanks for the chapter!! ๐Ÿ’€
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Acluduo
thx for the chapter
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Titivillus
Waiting for sleek apareance
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