Chapter comments on the chapter A Hero Trapped? of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

I would try to create a detect life spell or something like that, you can't hide from that by simply not showing yourself

crackle

huashuashuas the two most coward heroes in a fight of hide and seek

[1]Rumbling (more intensity), crackling (less intensity), spluttering( intermittent noises, seperated by distance, could be useful for a detection spell, I guess)

Booming, thundering, crackling noises? I hope it's not chidori it wouldn't make sense :v

for someone sent to die and retard -> for someone sent to die and delay ?

If you mean onomatopoeia of it they could be "Bzzzt, Bzzzt, Bzzz- KRAKOW" Eh.

What is sleek casting? Can u guys guess it?

Good novel. Very interesting to read.

what works... what?? is this cliff... my god.. but it's a complete translation... 😐

💀 Thanks for the chapter!! 💀

Well that's a let down... I was expecting the comments to be full of nothing but "BZZZZTT" or "ZZRRRPPTT" like noises 😝

Oh by the way. Sleek s'gonna get a new random ability if he kill Salazar's hero *—* and a huge reward maybe ?

The eoc really confused me till I read the comments lol

"Weird noises of lightning, I have no idea how to write this! Comment on that, please! " Haha, I read that in story and couldn't make sense of it for 2 minutes xD

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