Chapter comments on the chapter True Power of [Death Ray] of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

HAHAHA HA HAHAHA! In your face stupid goddess! Now let's see that evolution~

Evolution: God of the Plot Armor ^_^ Tx for the chapter :)

And it’s at that moment that the Gods knew, they f*cked up.

the system is working just there is a virus called hades running around messing with the algorithms

Damn, those Gods are corrupted. Not doing there jobs at all, acting like incompetents Kings that arbitrarily kill people because they fear for their precious thrones, I'm pretty sure they shouldn't be Gods, let's hope Sleek goes full God of War and kills them all ^^ Nice by the way, he isn't under the sea, but meh, under the earth, so it counts, and the zombies are just like Splicers, doing his biddings :D

In the store shopping and saw the last part. And startes laughing while people looked at me like I went crazy

Hahahahah well done, If the gods are afraid of him they should have killed him right that instant they discovered him, now he Will probably evolve beyond a level they can supress him. P.S: Aria is stupid. P.P.S: also, good use of a bug, well done.

Let's play the guessing game! 1. "something" of "something 2." something" "something" 3. "Something"

About everyone wondering why he can see and kill Aria. See it is (ethereal vision lvl Max), kill explanation during fight with Prophet of Krieg

Spamming the death ray was so funny.

Haha can't help but laugh

And at that moment she knew she f#¢®@d up.

next chapter > Sleek FART > END of WORLD .... sooooo BROKEN ^^

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA GOTCHA BITCH 10/10 best chapter ever.

well, with this the evolution will be random but later can you show what were the options ( the ones he did not ''choose'') the evolutions possibilites is one of my fav parts

I hope everyone here can see this link at 1:17: https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=dowSfa-gkcE

you could say clap of thunder, roaring, rumbling, crackle as I previously said, or boom or something more generic when describing the sounds of lightning

Pu Pfft PUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Yeah take that you b

WOW thst was the most unstatifaing reveng i erver saw realy??? baaam and dead thats all ? **** that boring as FUCK