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This book is awesome I started reading it on wattpad I came here as soon as I found out by the way author thank you for writing such awesome book
please update
I really really dislike how slutty the main character is. The acceleration to the plot was rapid not to mention confusing sometimes I asked myself why and I reading this?! Well, overall this story is a meh.
Overall might not be full points but thatβs because of the little grammatical errors and how Iβm waiting for an update. However, when this book is complete I will give a full on score of how I enjoyed this book. I hope to see more in the future, good luck.
it is vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvverrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy interesting except the death part but keep it up and more black bellied and badass please
I really like the story plots and it really good love the character and everything and can't wait for the new chapterππππππππππππ
I really enjoy This tyle of novels being written however the updating of it is quite slow which makes me a bit sad since this novel is really one of its kind!
I feel like this book has a really nice feel to it, I really like how the characters are described and how good the overall story is. I cannot wait for some more romance between the MC and ML
Love this book. Can't wait for more updates. Hop they are coming soon. Plus what about the second world is that all the chapters? Are at less let him repeat it.
The story is one of the those quick transmigration novels, which is why I started to read it. The story is not bad but it needs a lot of work, it does not flow very smoothly.
Author-san, I might rude but please be more careful next time when you write a plot. There were things I find it weird in the first arc and because of that I was like 'Wait... What? Why? How?' then stop. There were also times when you used first person then the next paragraph was third person.
About characters... Well, all I see is 'a world only about us'. Maybe because it's a fast pace story.
It was interesting (as a rotten girl wants to find more and more BL story), but was a little disappointed. So, I hope it would be better when I come to read it again.
Do your best!
When is this story updating??? its been so long :'( its this and another story i think by the same author has not been updated in so long =( can someone tell me if this is dropped or something??? what is the status ???
Why is every book i want to read are either dropped or not updating???? :( someone please tell me if this book is updating soon or dropped coz its very entertaining to read ;)
Honestly one of my favourite bl novels, the arc backgrounds and overall background of the system are really well thought out and the mc character development is extremely well written. The stability of updates is a 3 just because I havenβt experienced any but Iβve already re-read this novel several times so a definite read!
Its Good, I also saw this on wattpad and I'm satisfied on the progress of the story but the thing is the update was slow although maybe its the writers block,
I love the story and the characters I can't week we'll write more to really great story until then I'm gonna check up your other ones not keep giving me my thumbs up and My votes
1. He is average, not powerful like most usual smart schemer main
character
2. have 3 arcs for now, so I don't know what the author wants to show yet. -eternal love? adventure? about protagonist survival skill? -there are bits of all above, I think it's all above. well, it basically about the main character journey through the worlds. fantasy, abo
*soooo, I can't wait for more chapters. Keep it up, author!*
I have liked this novel for a long time.............,.................................................. ........All the characters are very well described.........................
This story is well written, except for a few spellinh mistakes here n there, but it happens. I like how you sometimes throw in unexpected elements, like how in the second arc, he dies, it shows that even the main characters can experience big failures. Keep up the good work!
Hmnm i liked the first arc most till now........its a little fast pace........and like ah i saw you n i love you...which is a little hard to............but thank you for the chapters
I love how the story of your book develop. But I just wish author that you will not stop updating with your book. I love it so much. I'm a fan of bl. That's why author please please continue to update your book... ππππππππππππππ
There are several flaws that reduce this story from being great, to just being mearly decent. No story build up, zero romance, no measured story progression. You meet the ML pretty much as soon as you arrive in the world and then they're almost in each others pants by the third or forth chapter. It feels like a one night stand rather than a love that lasts lifetimes. There's not enough info when introducing the world and any side characters you meet that are not the MCs opponents are one dimensional, they feel like they're cut out from cardboard and are only there to fill a role, after which you quickly forget them. The writing and grammar, however, are great. The storytelling is what needs more work. If the author reads this, please do not be discouraged. I'm writing this review because I believe with more work this story has what it takes to be absolutely fantastic. I hope you can please take my comments as constructive criticism.
It's such a good read. Very interesting and exciting. It's very thrilling and makes you want to read on the storyline is great. Ever time he goes into a new world and body they link what happened to him in the previous world allowing it to make sense. The book jumps in time a bit making it a nice short story
I actually really really like this. Sure the arcs end quicker than in most novels, but that's exactly what makes it so refreshing. You get to see the MC experience different worlds rather than seeing the MC dragging on in the same world for 50+ chaps, sure while those novels are also really fun to read but after a point the anticipation and thrill one feels slowly dies down. This novel is a great read if you ask me, there's only one thing, Author-sama please update more chapters π£π£π£π£π£π£
I am fan. So please beg you author to release more chapter. ππππ each arc itβs own story but it also connects with the other arc. So you see your fav mc how he grows and becomes a little more awesome π π and you root for him ππ
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