Reviews of Immortal in Naruto World - Discontinued by Ezukejyll - Webnovel

An idiot MC who can't use his advantages. MC knows only how to destroy the story and other characters. Many things doesn't make sense and after a while it makes you angry. No fun.

This Novel doesn't make any sense at all,i'm sorry. MC was 40 in his past life,he still has his memories,he watched the Anime.. So why is he so dumb??? He reincarnated as Haku's brother. We all know what that means,right? Haku is from the Yuki Clan. The Yuki Clan has a Kekkei Genkai and Kiri hates Kekkei Genkai. So the Yuki Clan will be exterminated.. Haku's mother is from the Yuki Clan while his father is a normal farmer. Haku has the Kekkei Genkai from his mother's family. When his father finds out he's terrified! Instead of protecting his family hiding this secret he brings people to massacre them. Haku's father kills his mother and then tries to kill him. Haku releases his Kekkei Genkai and kills his father in self-defence. The MC watched the Anime and knows all this. NOW he's reincarnated in this family but doesn't do anything to prevent the tragedy. He doesn't warn his mother and brother that his father will go **** crazy and will try to kill them or that Kiri will exterminate all Clans with Kekkei Genkai like theirs... NO! MC just acts like a bored kid all the time instead of taking precautions for the future. When the tragedy happens he's SAD and CONFUSED!!! Didn't Author said he knew the plot??? SO why is he sad and confused? He could've prevented all this to his family... But the most hilarious thing is that AFTER the tragedy MC acts cool knowing all the plots and characters when 5 minutes before or during his 3-4 years in Naruto World he didn't use his advantages. Does it make any sense??? The Author created a Dumb MC who can't use any of his advantages because he's too stupid. Only after the tragedy happens he rembers it!!! It doesn't make any sense! I will probably drop this Novel. Author said: ''MC has his memories,he watched the Anime.'' Yeah,right. ''Knows the plot'' my ass. Author gives MC advantages but doesn't use them at all. Why even give them to him then??? Well,if you read this Novel and you've seen the Anime then you will know what i'm talking about. You will probably get angry as well. I'm saying all this because the fact MC has memories and has watched the Anime but doesn't use his knowledge doesn't make any sense. It ruins the plot and characters. It's not fun at all... So i can't rate this Novel highly.

One hidden gem out here, its a little different than "naruto" themed novels. I hope the storry progresses futher till the actual war. Anyway need 140 charc. Soo..........................