Reviews of The Obscene System(Dropped)

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The_Papi
He should post more often because people get tired of waiting.. I do love his story build up though Please release the book soon. Thank you very much.
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Tr3bs
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Tr3bs

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Deku46
Fap/Fap, would fap again. Gw author, if you could make another crappie, that would be nice for my companion, cough cough dick cough cough. Thanks g.
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mikatzki
Its okay... Every writer has its own way of thinking.. I respect you . I'am hoping for your good works in the future. Do not let negative comments of others who do not understand your passion on tis kind of stuffs. Just think of them as DOGS WHO BARK'S AT YOU, because they dont know you, right? Hahaha...
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SecretBarone
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
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Vanadhi_Lucia
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Jayred
15 Spreading Mom“s legs apar  The Obscene System turn off the light Eye Protection     Font:Big Middle Small Previous Index Next Add Bookmarks Not knowing what to do Sakura could only hope that Kazuma wouldn't notice it. But how couldn't he?  Not long after Kazuma rested his head on his mom's lap, he could smell some kind of fishy thing. At first he didn't know what it was, but after a while he saw a clear liquid dripping down by her thighs which made him realize.  His mom was so turned on that her juices very leaking, and they had even covered her thighs.  It was now time to go all in!  Making up his mind, Kazuma decided risk it all. While his right hand went beneath Sakura's waist, he brought his right hand and put it on top of her thighs.  "Ummmmmm... Kazuma...."  Feeling his touch, Sakura couldn't help but met out a small moan.  Feigning ignorance, Kazuma acted like he didn't notice anything, "What is it mom?"  "Ahh.... Nothing."  Hurriedly answering, Sakura was still not able to understand why she was suddenly feeling like this.  Until today despite how handsome her son was, all she felt was happiness at how he turned out. But suddenly today she started having all wierd thoughts about being more intimate with her son.  'No... No! Kazuma's my son! There's no way I could do something like that with him!'  While Sakura kept on trying to reassure herself, Kazuma started turning more and more brave.  He used the hand that was below her waist to move downwards so that it would be right below her perky ass, and his other hand began moving upwards little by little.  Feeling her son's hand which was now below her bathrobe and inching closer and closer to her pussy, Sakura wanted to stop him but at the same time she wanted to wait and see what would happen next.  Slowly Kazuma's hand made its way all the way above her thighs and was now very close to her pussy. He could feel it due to the sudden presence of hair near his hand.  As Kazuma's hand felt the silky hair, even his breathing turned fast. After all this was his first time touching a woman's pussy as well.  Taking in a deep breath he pressed his hand against against the mound of hair he found. Soon he felt a warm and sticky sensation surrounding his hand.  "Ummn...."  At the same time Sakura felt a hot hand pressing against her pussy which caused her breathing to quicken.  "No.... Kazuma.... We can't do this...."  Somehow regaining her sense, Sakura tried to stop her son, but that blushing expression in her face coupled with those teary eyes only further turned on Kazuma.  Ge decisively used his other hand to open the rope which of her bathrobe, he also got up.  Slowly spreading his mom's legs open, he used one hand to run through that silky hair which was covering her pussy. As he repeatedly kept on brushing her pubic hair, Sakura who saw his fervent expression felt embarresment creep up.  Biting down on her teeth she decided to push Kazuma away, but before she could, Kazuma brought his face close to her pussy and started sniffing like a dog which made her further embarrassed.  Smelling a musky scent filled with fishyness, Kazuma could no longer control himself. Using both of his hands to spread apart the hair covering her pussy, he brought his face close and used his tongue to give a long and sloppy lick all over.  Despite the hair that was disturbing, Kazuma could taste a wierd but addicting taste from his mom's pussy.  'Ummm, it doesn't taste too bad.'  No longer holding back, Kazuma kept on licking repeatedly like a dog drinking water. Which caused Sakura to repeatedly let out moans, but he suddenly stopped when he found her hair inside his mouth.  Not wanting to try anymore of her hair, Kazuma pulled the mobile out of his pocket.  Under the dazed eyes of Sakura, he quickly typed in what he wanted.  <Remove all hair from my mom's pussy.>  As the divice once again shone, Sakura's pubic hair had all dissapeared and he also kept his mo
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CrispyCr
Nice development, but detail of girl and MC need more development. I cant really imagine their face and mimic each character. If author can, please post fixed time for each update. Thanks
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bdamsel
This is a very intriguing novel....I can't wait for updates to be posted. The storyline from the beginning will have your interest piqued....if you are a lover of magic and action plus intense s*x scenes, then you are on the right track here....winks 😉😉😉😉
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Lordzed
Kazuma is a goal getter, I appreciate how well the writer describes each scene since it makes it easier to comprehend and understand, there are little issues with the words though probably the writer wrote too fast but every other thing is awesome so far
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saulanki
No more updates seems the author is too moody. I agree with the fact he has his life and *******. But what about ending something which you started.
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Axissun
cant wait for more was hooked after the first few chapters keep up the great work interested in seeing how it plays out by the end of the story
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slayerfan
The new chapters are awesome and easy... I guess more is reqd for the stuff so Pls publish as many as you can.... Let's wait and see how this boy goes on with the gadget.
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DarkGrimoire
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dr673210
Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Now that's a perverted MC. Can't wait for more. Please make it more obscene. Hope there are certain twists. Will the MC be bisexual???
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jm14620
good this novel is just right perv and i liked it since chapter 1 so please more and more aslo you chould update reguliary pls 00000000000000000000000000
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davulururamayya573
Please continue this novel it's very interesting so please continue.it is very interesting story so I would like to humbly ask to continue this
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Okie_dokie
Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ But where is the F*cking the extreme should start, BDSM & NTR even R*PE should happen, also exibition play will be a good one haha... Just More~More~ More~More~~ MOOAAARRR~~~~!!!
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Cubbe
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Cubbe

Okay so theres no huge problems with the grammar so on that point author is bettet than many, but I personally hate it when author who writes of the birth and growing up of a baby while he/she doesn't have basic knowledge on the physiology of a baby. Firstly, a baby suffocates if he/she/it doesn't cry on birth and this is why doctors and nurses will pay attention on this. Baby not cry = dead baby. Second, mothers don't just suddenly stop produsing milk if they don't have health issues. They stop produsing milk 1-3 weeks after they stop feeding or using brestpump. Third, you need teeth to speak fluently and baby starts teething between 4-8 month and it can take up to when they are 3 years for them to have a full set.
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Angel_McPhail
The story is yery slow. Why does the male lead need to be 12years to be able to have *** and why should he force himself on others if he is supposed to have *** with them. The story is just boring.
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