Reviews of Pokemon Untold [2023] by FleetingClouds - Webnovel

The plot development is good, as well as the way you describe the things happening. The grammar errors are minimal, so that's good as well. All in all, I say that this fanfic is 👍👍👍. Nice job author!

I like it a lot. But I've been up for more then 30 hours at this point and just finished an exam. I'm tired and this is too complicated for my brain right now.

All five stars because i like the story and have stuck around for the past few months. I thought I already reviewed but oh well. I like how the Pokemon aren’t all fun and games in this, and they are more like actual animals that are potentially dangerous.

Story is very slow paced. Many unnecessary info being brought which can be said later when it will be needed. Theory wise and story wise it's great.

👌 quality stuff Need more chapters tho as story is still starting Character limitCharacter limitCharacter limitCharacter limitCharacter limit

Found your novel in royalroadl And came here to show my support! Great work here. Asasasasasasasasasasasasasasasassaasas to complete the minimim caracteres

This fanfic is the best pokemon fanfic I've ever read! The novel brings up the grown up main characters from the series and manga that we all love. So don't fear fellow pokemon fans, this novel has them! This novel isn't a very kid friendly version of pokemon like the show and it does mention war, but this brings color into the novel. The pokemon are also great in where they have personality and they don't say their names as a sound effect. The people in this novel also aren't weak and just stay behind their pokemon. The mc is a bit ignorant about the world and so he learns throughout the story. The author is doing a great job in pacing in where he brings up his mc first before just going head first into his journey. Adding to that, all the characters have personality and flesh. This novel also brings up a few misconceptions and the difference with the game knowledge and in world knowledge of how Pokemon would be, which is very interesting to read. It is very appreciating in how much time and effort the author makes for this novel. He/she is doing a great job and thank you for your hard work, it really shows. Shall be waiting for more novels~ (╯✧▽✧)╯

=) thannnxxxx Bulbasaur Fushigidane 231 – – – Ovo 002 Ivysaur Fushigisou 232 – – – Bulbasaur 003 Venusaur Fushigibana 233 – – – Ivysaur 004 Charmander Hitokage 234 – – – Ovo 005 Charmeleon Lizardo 235 – – – Charmander 006 Charizard Lizardon 236 – – – Charmeleon 007 Squirtle Zenigame 237 – – – Ovo 008 Wartortle Kameil 238 – – – Squirtle 009 Blastoise Kamex 239 – – – Wartortle 010 Caterpie Caterpie 024 – – – Ovo 011 Metapod Transel 025 – – – Caterpie 012 Butterfree Butterfree 026 – – – Metapod 013 Weedle Beedle 027 – – – Ovo 014 Kakuna Cocoon 028 – – – Weedle 015 Beedrill Spear 029 – – – Kakuna 016 Pidgey Poppo 010 – – – Ovo 017 Pidgeotto Pigeon 011 – – – Pidgey 018 Pidgeot Pigeot 012 – – – Pidgeotto 019 Rattata Koratta 017 – – – Ovo 020 Raticate Ratta 018 – – – Rattata 021 Spearow Onisuzume 013 – – – Ovo 022 Fearow Onidrill 014 – – – Spearow 023 Ekans Arbo 050 – – – Ovo 024 Arbok Arbok 051 – – – Ekans 025 Pikachu Pikachu 022 156 104 – Pichu 026 Raichu Raichu 023 157 105 – Pikachu 027 Sandshrew Sand 048 112 – – Ovo 028 Sandslash Sandpan 049 113 – – Sandshrew 029 Nidoran♀ Nidoran♀ 095 – – – Ovo 030 Nidorina Nidorina 096 – – – Nidoran♀ 031 Nidoqueen Nidoqueen[1] 097 – – – Nidorina 032 Nidoran♂ Nidoran♂ 098 – – – Ovo 033 Nidorino Nidorino 099 – – – Nidoran♂ 034 Nidoking Nidoking 100 – – – Nidorino 035 Clefairy Pippi 041 – 100 – Cleffa 036 Clefable Pixy 042 – 101 – Clefairy 037 Vulpix Rokon 127 153 – – Ovo 038 Ninetales Kyukon 128 154 – – Vulpix 039 Jigglypuff Purin 044 138 – – Igglybuff 040 Wigglytuff Pukurin 045 139 – – Jigglypuff 041 Zubat Zubat 037 063 028 – Ovo 042 Golbat Golbat 038 064 029 – Zubat 043 Oddish Nazonokusa 083 088 – – Ovo 044 Gloom Kusaihana 084 089 – – Oddish 045 Vileplume Ruffresia 085 090 – – Gloom 046 Paras Paras 070 – – – Ovo 047 Parasect Parasect 071 – – – Paras 048 Venonat Kongpang 109 – – – Ovo 049 Venomoth Morphon 110 – – – Venonat 050 Diglett Digda 134 – – – Ovo 051 Dugtrio Dugtrio 135 – – – Diglett 052 Meowth Nyarth 138 – – – Ovo 053 Persian Persian 139 – – – Meowth 054 Psyduck Koduck 140 158 043 – Ovo 055 Golduck Golduck 141 159 044 – Psyduck 056 Mankey Mankey 136 – – – Ovo 057 Primeape Okorizaru 137 – – – Mankey 058 Growlithe Gardie 129 – – – Ovo 059 Arcanine Windie 130 – – – Growlithe 060 Poliwag Nyoromo 072 – – – Ovo 061 Poliwhirl Nyorozo 073 – – – Poliwag 062 Poliwrath Nyorobon 074 – – – Poliwhirl 063 Abra Casey 089 039 020 – Ovo 064 Kadabra Yungerer 090 040 021 – Abra 065 Alakazam Foodin 091 041 022 – Kadabra 066 Machop Wanriky 142 073 040 – Ovo 067 Machoke Goriky 143 074 041 – Machop 068 Machamp Kairiky 144 075 042 – Machoke 069 Bellsprout Madatsubomi 064 – – – Ovo 070 Weepinbell Utsudon 065 – – – Bellsprout 071 Victreebel Utsubot 066 – – – Weepinbell 072 Tentacool Menokurage 164 066 136 – Ovo 073 Tentacruel Dokukurage 165 067 137 – Tentacool 074 Geodude Ishitsubute 034 057 031 – Ovo 075 Graveler Golone 035 058 032 – Geodude 076 Golem Golonya 036 059 033 – Graveler 077 Ponyta Ponyta 206 – 090 – Ovo 078 Rapidash Gallop 207 – 091 – Ponyta 079 Slowpoke Yadon 080 – – – Ovo 080 Slowbro Yadoran 081 – – – Slowpoke 081 Magnemite Coil 119 082 178 – Ovo 082 Magneton Rarecoil 120 083 179 – Magnemite 083 Farfetch'd Kamonegi 160 – – – Ovo 084 Doduo Dodo 204 092 – – Ovo 085 Dodrio Dodrio 205 093 – – Doduo 086 Seel Pawou 178 – – – Ovo 087 Dewgong Jugon 179 – – – Seel 088 Grimer Betbeter 117 106 – – Ovo 089 Muk Betbeton 118 107 – – Grimer 090 Shellder Shellder 171 – – – Ovo 091 Cloyster Parshen 172 – – – Shellder 092 Gastly Ghos 058 – 069 – Ovo 093 Haunter Ghost 059 – 070 – Gastly 094 Gengar Gangar 060 – 071 – Haunter 095 Onix Iwark 062 – 034 – Ovo 096 Drowzee Sleep 087 – – – Ovo 097 Hypno Sleeper 088 – – – Drowzee 098 Krabby Crab 166 – – – Ovo 099 Kingler Kingler 167 – – – Krabby 100 Voltorb Biriridama 121 084 – – Ovo 101 Electrode Marumine 122 085 – – Voltorb 102 Exeggcute Tamatama 105 – – – Ovo 103 Exeggutor Nassy 106 – – – Exeggcute 104 Cubone Karakara 208 – – – Ovo 105 Marowak Garagara 209 – – – Cubone 106 Hitmonlee Sawamular 146 – – – Tyrogue 107 Hitmonchan Ebiwalar 147 – – – Tyrogue 108 Lickitung Beroringa 180 – 161 – Ovo 109 Koffing Dogars 115 108 – – Ovo 110 Weezing Matadogas 116 109 – – Koffing 111 Rhyhorn Sihorn 211 169 186 – Ovo 112 Rhydon Sidon 212 170 187 – Rhyhorn 113 Chansey Lucky 222 – 097 – Ovo/Happiny* 114 Tangela Monjara 182 – 181 – Ovo 115 Kangaskhan Garura 210 – – – Ovo 116 Horsea Tattu 190 184 – – Ovo 117 Seadra Seadra 191 185 – – Horsea 118 Goldeen Tosakinto 078 050 078 – Ovo 119 Seaking Azumao 079 051 079 – Goldeen 120 Staryu Hitodeman 169 143 – – Ovo 121 Starmie Starmie 170 144 – – Staryu 122 Mr. Mime Barrierd 158 – 095 – Ovo/Mime Jr.* 123 Scyther Strike 111 – 195 – Ovo 124 Jynx Rougela 155 – – – Smoochum 125 Electabuzz Eleboo 157 – 198 – Elekid 126 Magmar Boober 153 – 201 – Magby 127 Pinsir Kailios 113 167 – – Ovo 128 Tauros Kentauros 150 – – – Ovo 129 Magikarp Koiking 076 052 023 – Ovo 130 Gyarados Gyarados 077 053 024 – Magikarp 131 Lapras Laplace 224 – – – Ovo 132 Ditto Metamon 092 – – – – 133 Eevee Eievui 184 – 163 – Ovo 134 Vaporeon Showers 185 – 164 – Eevee 135 Jolteon Thunders 186 – 165 – Eevee 136 Flareon Booster 187 – 166 – Eevee 137 Porygon Porygon/Polygon[2] 220 – 192 – Ovo 138 Omanyte Omnite 225 – – – Ovo/Helix Fossil 139 Omastar Omstar 226 – – – Omanyte 140 Kabuto Kabuto 227 – – – Ovo/Dome Fossil 141 Kabutops Kabutops 228 – – – Kabuto 142 Aerodactyl Ptera 229 – – – Ovo/Old Amber 143 Snorlax Kabigon 230 – 113 – Ovo/Munchlax* 144 Articuno Freezer 240 – – – – 145 Zapdos Thunder 241 – – – – 146 Moltres Fire 242 – – – – 147 Dratini Miniryu 246 – – – Ovo 148 Dragonair Hakuryu 247 – – – Dratini 149 Dragonite Kairyu 248 – – – Dragonair 150 Mewtwo Mewtwo 254 – – – – 151 Mew Mew 255 – – – – 152 Chikorita Chicorita[3] 001 – – – Ovo 153 Bayleef Bayleaf 002 – – – Chikorita 154 Meganium Meganium[4] 003 – – – Bayleef 155 Cyndaquil Hinoarashi[5] 004 – – – Ovo 156 Quilava Magmarashi 005 – – – Cyndaquil 157 Typhlosion Bakphoon[6] 006 – – – Quilava 158 Totodile Waninoko[7] 007 – – – Ovo 159 Croconaw Alligates 008 – – – Totodile 160 Feraligatr Ordile/Ordail[4][8] 009 – – – Croconaw 161 Sentret Otachi[9] 019 – – – Ovo 162 Furret Ootachi 020 – – – Sentret 163 Hoothoot Hoho 015 – 106 – Ovo 164 Noctowl Yorunozuku 016 – 107 – Hoothoot 165 Ledyba Rediba 030 – – – Ovo 166 Ledian Redian 031 – – – Ledyba 167 Spinarak Itomaru 032 – – – Ovo 168 Ariados Ariados 033 – – – Spinarak 169 Crobat Crobat[10] 039 065 030 – Golbat 170 Chinchou Chonchii 176 181 – – Ovo 171 Lanturn Rantern 177 182 – – Chinchou 172 Pichu Pichu[1] 021 155 103 – Ovo 173 Cleffa Py[10] 040 – 099 – Ovo 174 Igglybuff Pupurin 043 137 – – Ovo 175 Togepi Togepy[11] 046 – 173 – Ovo 176 Togetic Togechikku 047 – 174 – Togepi 177 Natu Neiti 161 162 – – Ovo 178 Xatu Neitio 162 163 – – Natu 179 Mareep – 053 – – – Ovo 180 Flaaffy – 054 – – – Mareep 181 Ampharos – 055 – – – Flaaffy 182 Bellossom – 086 091 – – Gloom 183 Marill Maril[12] 132 055 125 – Ovo/Azurill* 184 Azumarill Marilli[10] 133 056 126 – Marill 185 Sudowoodo – 107 – 093 – Ovo/Bonsly 186 Politoed – 075 – – – Poliwhirl 187 Hoppip – 067 – – – Ovo 188 Skiploom – 068 – – – Hoppip 189 Jumpluff Watacco[8] 069 – – – Skiploom 190 Aipom Eipam[6] 123 – 063 – Ovo 191 Sunkern – 103 – – – Ovo 192 Sunflora – 104 – – – Sunkern 193 Yanma Yanyanma[8] 101 – 183 – Ovo 194 Wooper – 056 – 117 – Ovo 195 Quagsire – 057 – 118 – Wooper 196 Espeon Eifie[13] 188 – 167 – Eevee 197 Umbreon Blacky[13] 189 – 168 – Eevee 198 Murkrow – 213 – 074 – Ovo 199 Slowking – 082 – – – Slowpoke 200 Misdreavus Muma[10] 219 – 072 – Ovo 201 Unown Unknown[14] 061 – 114 – – 202 Wobbuffet Sonans[15] 108 161 – – Ovo/Wynaut* 203 Girafarig – 149 164 121 – Ovo 204 Pineco – 093 – – – Ovo 205 Forretress – 094 – – – Pineco 206 Dunsparce – 052 – – – Ovo 207 Gligar Gliger[13] 193 – 153 – Ovo 208 Steelix Haganeil[4] 063 – 035 – Onix 209 Snubbull – 125 – – – Ovo 210 Granbull – 126 – – – Snubbull 211 Qwilfish – 163 – – – Ovo 212 Scizor – 112 – 196 – Scyther 213 Shuckle – 168 – – – Ovo 214 Heracross – 114 168 062 – Ovo 215 Sneasel – 218 – 144 – Ovo 216 Teddiursa – 198 – – – Ovo 217 Ursaring – 199 – – – Teddiursa 218 Slugma – 216 103 – – Ovo 219 Magcargo – 217 104 – – Slugma 220 Swinub – 195 – 203 – Ovo 221 Piloswine – 196 – 204 – Swinub 222 Corsola – 173 180 – – Ovo 223 Remoraid – 174 – 132 – Ovo 224 Octillery – 175 – 133 – Remoraid 225 Delibird Delibird[16] 194 – – – Ovo 226 Mantine Mantain[17] 202 – 141 – Ovo/Mantyke* 227 Skarmory Airmd[6] 203 115 – – Ovo 228 Houndour – 214 – 176 – Ovo 229 Houndoom – 215 – 177 – Houndour 230 Kingdra – 192 186 – – Seadra 231 Phanpy – 200 165 – – Ovo 232 Donphan Donfan[15] 201 166 – – Phanpy 233 Porygon2 Porygon 2/Polygon 2[18] 221 – 193 – Porygon 234 Stantler – 131 – – – Ovo 235 Smeargle Doble[13] 159 – – – Ovo 236 Tyrogue – 145 – – – Ovo 237 Hitmontop – 148 – – – Tyrogue 238 Smoochum – 154 – – – Ovo 239 Elekid – 156 – 197 – Ovo 240 Magby – 152 – 200 – Ovo 241 Miltank Miltank[16] 151 – – – Ovo 242 Blissey Happinas[4] 223 – 098 – Chansey 243 Raikou – 243 – – – – 244 Entei Entei[14] 244 – – – – 245 Suicune – 245 – – – – 246 Larvitar – 249 – – – Ovo 247 Pupitar – 250 – – – Larvitar 248 Tyranitar Bangiras[4] 251 – – – Pupitar 249 Lugia† Lugia[4] 252 – – – – 250 Ho-Oh† Houou[4] 253 – – – – 251 Celebi† Celebi[19] 256 – – – – 252 Treecko Kimori[20] – 001 – – Ovo 253 Grovyle Juptile[21] – 002 – – Treecko 254 Sceptile Jukain[17] – 003 – – Grovyle 255 Torchic Achamo[20] – 004 – – Ovo 256 Combusken Wakasyamo[21] – 005 – – Torchic 257 Blaziken Bursyamo[17] – 006 – – Combusken 258 Mudkip Mizugorou[20] – 007 – – Ovo 259 Marshtomp Numacraw[21] – 008 – – Mudkip 260 Swampert Laglarge[17] – 009 – – Marshtomp 261 Poochyena Pochiena[21] – 010 – – Ovo 262 Mightyena – – 011 – – Poochyena 263 Zigzagoon Jiguzaguma[21] – 012 – – Ovo 264 Linoone – – 013 – – Zigzagoon 265 Wurmple Kemusso[22] – 014 048 – Ovo 266 Silcoon – – 015 049 – Wurmple(50%) 267 Beautifly Agehunt[17] – 016 050 – Silcoon 268 Cascoon – – 017 051 – Wurmple(50%) 269 Dustox – – 018 052 – Cascoon 270 Lotad Hassboh[23] – 019 – – Ovo 271 Lombre Hasubrero[24] – 020 – – Lotad 272 Ludicolo Runpappa[13] – 021 – – Lombre 273 Seedot – – 022 – – Ovo 274 Nuzleaf – – 023 – – Seedot 275 Shiftry Dirteng[20] – 024 – – Nuzleaf 276 Taillow Subame[15] – 025 – – Ovo 277 Swellow Ohsubame[17] – 026 – – Taillow 278 Wingull – – 027 119 – Ovo 279 Pelipper Pelipper[17] – 028 120 – Wingull 280 Ralts – – 029 157 – Ovo 281 Kirlia Kirlia[17] – 030 158 – Ralts 282 Gardevoir – – 031 159 – Kirlia 283 Surskit – – 032 – – Ovo 284 Masquerain – – 033 – – Surskit 285 Shroomish Kinococo[25] – 034 – – Ovo 286 Breloom Kinogassa[13] – 035 – – Shroomish 287 Slakoth Namakero[6] – 036 – – Ovo 288 Vigoroth Yarukimono[17] – 037 – – Slakoth 289 Slaking Kekking[13] – 038 – – Vigoroth 290 Nincada – – 042 – – Ovo 291 Ninjask – – 043 – – Nincada 292 Shedinja – – 044 – – Nincada 293 Whismur Gonyonyo[26] – 045 – – Ovo 294 Loudred – – 046 – – Whismur 295 Exploud Bakuong[1] – 047 – – Loudred 296 Makuhita Makunoshita[15] – 048 – – Ovo 297 Hariyama – – 049 – – Makuhita 298 Azurill Ruriri[6] – 054 124 – Ovo 299 Nosepass – – 060 155 – Ovo 300 Skitty Eneco[21] – 061 – – Ovo 301 Delcatty Enekororo[17] – 062 – – Skitty 302 Sableye – – 068 – – Ovo 303 Mawile Kucheat[17] – 069 – – Ovo 304 Aron Cokodora[17] – 070 – – Ovo 305 Lairon – – 071 – – Aron 306 Aggron – – 072 – – Lairon 307 Meditite Asanan[10] – 076 086 – Ovo 308 Medicham Charem[15] – 077 087 – Meditite 309 Electrike – – 078 – – Ovo 310 Manectric – – 079 – – Electrike 311 Plusle Plusle/Prasle[15][27] – 080 – – Ovo 312 Minun Minun[15] – 081 – – Ovo 313 Volbeat – – 086 – – Ovo 314 Illumise Illumise[28] – 087 – – Ovo 315 Roselia – – 094 026 – Ovo/Budew* 316 Gulpin Gokulin[17] – 095 – – Ovo 317 Swalot – – 096 – – Gulpin 318 Carvanha – – 097 – – Ovo 319 Sharpedo Samehader[6] – 098 – – Carvanha 320 Wailmer Hoeruko[21] – 099 – – Ovo 321 Wailord Whaloh[29] – 100 – – Wailmer 322 Numel – – 101 – – Ovo 323 Camerupt – – 102 – – Numel 324 Torkoal – – 105 – – Ovo 325 Spoink – – 110 – – Ovo 326 Grumpig – – 111 – – Spoink 327 Spinda – – 114 – – Ovo 328 Trapinch – – 116 – – Ovo 329 Vibrava – – 117 – – Trapinch 330 Flygon Flygon[15] – 118 – – Vibrava 331 Cacnea Sabonea[21] – 119 – – Ovo 332 Cacturne Noctus[20] – 120 – – Cacnea 333 Swablu – – 121 171 – Ovo 334 Altaria Tyltalis[15] – 122 172 – Swablu 335 Zangoose Zangoose[16] – 123 – – Ovo 336 Seviper Habunake[21] – 124 – – Ovo 337 Lunatone – – 125 – – Ovo 338 Solrock – – 126 – – Ovo 339 Barboach – – 127 080 – Ovo 340 Whiscash Namazun[20] – 128 081 – Barboach 341 Corphish Heigani[21] – 129 – – Ovo 342 Crawdaunt Shizariger[17] – 130 – – Corphish 343 Baltoy – – 131 – – Ovo 344 Claydol – – 132 – – Baltoy 345 Lileep – – 133 – – Ovo/Root Fossil 346 Cradily – – 134 – – Lileep 347 Anorith – – 135 – – Ovo/Claw Fossil 348 Armaldo – – 136 – – Anorith 349 Feebas – – 140 138 – Ovo 350 Milotic – – 141 139 – Feebas 351 Castform – – 142 – – Ovo 352 Kecleon – – 145 – – Ovo 353 Shuppet – – 146 – – Ovo 354 Banette – – 147 – – Shuppet 355 Duskull – – 148 189 – Ovo 356 Dusclops – – 149 190 – Duskull 357 Tropius Tropius[16] – 150 185 – Ovo 358 Chimecho – – 151 083 – Ovo/Chingling* 359 Absol Absol[21] – 152 209 – Ovo 360 Wynaut – – 160 – – Ovo 361 Snorunt – – 171 206 – Ovo 362 Glalie – – 172 207 – Snorunt 363 Spheal – – 173 – – Ovo 364 Sealeo – – 174 – – Spheal 365 Walrein – – 175 – – Sealeo 366 Clamperl – – 176 – – Ovo 367 Huntail – – 177 – – Clamperl 368 Gorebyss – – 178 – – Clamperl 369 Relicanth – – 179 – – Ovo 370 Luvdisc – – 183 – – Ovo 371 Bagon – – 187 – – Ovo 372 Shelgon – – 188 – – Bagon 373 Salamence Bohmander[13] – 189 – – Shelgon 374 Beldum – – 190 – – Ovo 375 Metang – – 191 – – Beldum 376 Metagross – – 192 – – Metang 377 Regirock Regirock[4] – 193 – – – 378 Regice Regice[16] – 194 – – – 379 Registeel Registeel[4] – 195 – – – 380 Latias Latias[21] – 196 – – – 381 Latios Latios[21] – 197 – – – 382 Kyogre Kaiorga/Kyogre[10][30] – 198 – – – 383 Groudon Groudon[15] – 199 – – – 384 Rayquaza Rayquaza[31] – 200 – – – 385 Jirachi† Jirachi[6] – 201 – – – 386 Deoxys† Deoxys[31] – 202 – – – 387 Turtwig Naetle[32] – – 001 – Ovo 388 Grotle Hayashigame[29] – – 002 – Turtwig 389 Torterra Dodaitose[33] – – 003 – Grotle 390 Chimchar Hikozaru[16] – – 004 – Ovo 391 Monferno Moukazaru[1] – – 005 – Chimchar 392 Infernape Goukazaru[34] – – 006 – Monferno 393 Piplup Pochama[29] – – 007 – Ovo 394 Prinplup Pottaishi[34] – – 008 – Piplup 395 Empoleon Emperte[29] – – 009 – Prinplup 396 Starly Mukkuru[29] – – 010 – Ovo 397 Staravia Mukubird[34] – – 011 – Starly 398 Staraptor – – – 012 – Staravia 399 Bidoof – – – 013 – Ovo 400 Bibarel – – – 014 – Bidoof 401 Kricketot – – – 015 – Ovo 402 Kricketune – – – 016 – Kricketot 403 Shinx Kolink[16] – – 017 – Ovo 404 Luxio Luxio[34] – – 018 – Shinx 405 Luxray Rentorar[18] – – 019 – Luxio 406 Budew Subomie[35] – – 025 – Ovo 407 Roserade Roserade[34] – – 027 – Roselia 408 Cranidos Zugaidos[34] – – 036 – Ovo/Skull Fossil 409 Rampardos Rampald[20] – – 037 – Cranidos 410 Shieldon – – – 038 – Ovo/Armor Fossil 411 Bastiodon Torideps[20] – – 039 – Shieldon 412 Burmy – – – 045 – Ovo 413 Wormadam – – – 046 – Burmy(♀) 414 Mothim – – – 047 – Burmy(♂) 415 Combee Mitsuhoney[34] – – 053 – Ovo 416 Vespiquen Beequeen[29] – – 054 – Combee(♀) 417 Pachirisu Pachirisu[36] – – 055 – Ovo 418 Buizel Buoysel[6] – – 056 – Ovo 419 Floatzel – – – 057 – Buizel 420 Cherubi Cherinbo[37] – – 058 – Ovo 421 Cherrim Cherrim[1] – – 059 – Cherubi 422 Shellos Karanakushi[38] – – 060 – Ovo 423 Gastrodon – – – 061 – Shellos 424 Ambipom Eteboth[29] 124 – 064 – Aipom 425 Drifloon Fuwante[39] – – 065 – Ovo 426 Drifblim Fuwaride[20] – – 066 – Drifloon 427 Buneary Mimirol[34] – – 067 – Ovo 428 Lopunny Mimilop[20] – – 068 – Buneary 429 Mismagius Mumargi[1] – – 073 – Misdreavus 430 Honchkrow Dongkarasu[16] – – 075 – Murkrow 431 Glameow Nyarmar[40] – – 076 – Ovo 432 Purugly – – – 077 – Glameow 433 Chingling Lisyan[29] – – 082 – Ovo 434 Stunky – – – 084 – Ovo 435 Skuntank Skutank[18] – – 085 – Stunky 436 Bronzor – – – 088 – Ovo 437 Bronzong Dohtakun[18] – – 089 – Bronzor 438 Bonsly Usohachi[21] – – 092 – Ovo 439 Mime Jr. Manene[10] – – 094 – Ovo 440 Happiny Pinpuku[41] – – 096 – Ovo 441 Chatot Perap[6] – – 102 – Ovo 442 Spiritomb Mikaruge[34] – – 108 – Ovo 443 Gible Fukamaru[20] – – 109 – Ovo 444 Gabite Gabite[1] – – 110 – Gible 445 Garchomp – – – 111 – Gabite 446 Munchlax Gonbe[31] – – 112 – Ovo 447 Riolu Riolu[29] – – 115 – Ovo 448 Lucario Lucario[15] – – 116 – Riolu 449 Hippopotas – – – 122 – Ovo 450 Hippowdon Kabaldon[16] – – 123 – Hippopotas 451 Skorupi – – – 127 – Ovo 452 Drapion Dorapion[29] – – 128 – Skorupi 453 Croagunk Gureggru[29] – – 129 – Ovo 454 Toxicroak Dokurog[16] – – 130 – Croagunk 455 Carnivine Muskippa[42] – – 131 – Ovo 456 Finneon Keikouo[43] �

Awaiting more chapters. 140 more characters 140 more characters 140 more characters 140 more characters 140 more characters 140 more characters

Author -san unique way of introducing transmigration. Nice explanation of Pokemon world so far. Old keep writing. QP all qertuikgfdsdfhjihdsaasdgbxxbnjjk

Liked the story so far....not sure why author decided to stop updating. Definitely worth a read if more than 20 chapters. thats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats allthats all

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Hm i don't know what i should start by saying in my review as their are just to few chapters to make a decision as to weather the story is good or bad. I like some of the ideas put into the story. Such as main character crossing over to the pokemon world from our world. Also the idea he posses some type of system and that the pokemon world is not all unicorns and butterflies like what we see in the anime and games. What i wasn't particularly found of but i wouldn't say i hate it is the main character kind of seemed stupid to me. In chapter like maybe 2 or 3 i don't remember which. He jumped at a pokemon that clearly wasn't their and expected to touch it and this is just one of the examples of him acting stupid. He was even questioning weather he was imaging it all. So why in the world would you jump and literally try to grab it? As far as grammar goes for this novel it's alot better than most fanfic novel but I'm not saying it perfect ether. For example in ch 2 the MC says that ( no one would buy me this story) but what he clearly means to say is ( that no one would believe this story if i told them not even a drunkard) when he said the later it maid it sound as if he was going to try to send someone to a book store to buy him a story and they would not do it for him. Which make no sense. But i also don't expect good grammar from fanfic and do not grade them heavily on their grammar. But more so on their idea's and how their executed. Now the idea's that went into the novel. The fist idea i would like talk about is the other world transfer. At first it seemed that the mc was going to be sent to the pokemon world with his physical body. But then the author seemed to change his mind at the drop of hat and made this summons novel into a reincarnation novel. In which the mc for the first five chapters sort of becomes like Kami from Dragon Ball Z when he fused with his other half piccolo. In the sense he sort or exists in the subconscious of this boy Arthur. Which kind make me feel like he killed off main character from the first five chapters as he doesn't exist as the main ego of the body he is in. But this could change in future chapters and i hope it does. On a another note sort of related to this subject is when the author changed this from a summons to a reincarnation transfer to the pokemon world. It felt like he is still trying to the make the novel into a collection of short stories like he originally intended. But at same time it make it seem like he can't make up his mind. Also as far as the other ideas in the story their has just been to little development with them to really say anything about them.

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