The FF started great, but quickly the MC dies to give way to another character who gets all the advantages that our MC should have.
There is a lot of information in the chapters,
If the subject is ... I do not know... Daggers!
The author begins to explain everything about the daggers from the way that they are used, which materials are the best for their manufacture, all in one or two chapters, to the beginning is fine since it introduces you to the world, but after many chapters it becomes heavy, apart from that they throw the MC in the dark to introduce you to another when he was already dead, if he is dead, leave him like that, the one who called my attention to read the FF, it was the first MC not the second and I just kept reading with the hope that he would dominate the body and Arthur would disappear since he didn't interest me.
It became desperate for me not to see Atiqo anywhere and when him appears it is not satisfactory... Author you should decide, keep Arthur or Atiqo, or change the first chapters and sipnosis to erase Atiqo and just be Arthur's adventure as You're showing
All five stars because i like the story and have stuck around for the past few months. I thought I already reviewed but oh well. I like how the Pokemon aren’t all fun and games in this, and they are more like actual animals that are potentially dangerous.
This fanfic is the best pokemon fanfic I've ever read!
The novel brings up the grown up main characters from the series and manga that we all love. So don't fear fellow pokemon fans, this novel has them! This novel isn't a very kid friendly version of pokemon like the show and it does mention war, but this brings color into the novel.
The pokemon are also great in where they have personality and they don't say their names as a sound effect. The people in this novel also aren't weak and just stay behind their pokemon.
The mc is a bit ignorant about the world and so he learns throughout the story. The author is doing a great job in pacing in where he brings up his mc first before just going head first into his journey. Adding to that, all the characters have personality and flesh.
This novel also brings up a few misconceptions and the difference with the game knowledge and in world knowledge of how Pokemon would be, which is very interesting to read.
It is very appreciating in how much time and effort the author makes for this novel. He/she is doing a great job and thank you for your hard work, it really shows.
Shall be waiting for more novels~ (╯✧▽✧)╯
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Hm i don't know what i should start by saying in my review as their are just to few chapters to make a decision as to weather the story is good or bad. I like some of the ideas put into the story. Such as main character crossing over to the pokemon world from our world. Also the idea he posses some type of system and that the pokemon world is not all unicorns and butterflies like what we see in the anime and games. What i wasn't particularly found of but i wouldn't say i hate it is the main character kind of seemed stupid to me. In chapter like maybe 2 or 3 i don't remember which. He jumped at a pokemon that clearly wasn't their and expected to touch it and this is just one of the examples of him acting stupid. He was even questioning weather he was imaging it all. So why in the world would you jump and literally try to grab it?
As far as grammar goes for this novel it's alot better than most fanfic novel but I'm not saying it perfect ether. For example in ch 2 the MC says that ( no one would buy me this story) but what he clearly means to say is ( that no one would believe this story if i told them not even a drunkard) when he said the later it maid it sound as if he was going to try to send someone to a book store to buy him a story and they would not do it for him. Which make no sense. But i also don't expect good grammar from fanfic and do not grade them heavily on their grammar. But more so on their idea's and how their executed. Now the idea's that went into the novel. The fist idea i would like talk about is the other world transfer. At first it seemed that the mc was going to be sent to the pokemon world with his physical body. But then the author seemed to change his mind at the drop of hat and made this summons novel into a reincarnation novel. In which the mc for the first five chapters sort of becomes like Kami from Dragon Ball Z when he fused with his other half piccolo. In the sense he sort or exists in the subconscious of this boy Arthur. Which kind make me feel like he killed off main character from the first five chapters as he doesn't exist as the main ego of the body he is in. But this could change in future chapters and i hope it does. On a another note sort of related to this subject is when the author changed this from a summons to a reincarnation transfer to the pokemon world. It felt like he is still trying to the make the novel into a collection of short stories like he originally intended. But at same time it make it seem like he can't make up his mind. Also as far as the other ideas in the story their has just been to little development with them to really say anything about them.