The grammar in this chapter is atrocious. It was fine up until this chapter and now I see run on sentences with incomplete structures and way too many adjectives and a few places where the tense shifts aren’t logical.
Why does it feel like the mc can only complain instead of observe and plan. Even though in the end the mc does the right thing but it always have to be dragged out of him. Is this the writer or the translator's fault? If it is the translator than please please please do a better job at making the mc look a bit smarter and braver. The constant 'surprises' for the mc make it look like he really is a rookie with no ability to learn from previous experiences (why else would you be so surprised at every turn)... I mean he should have realized by now that the system is not fair and is out to kill players, why is he still surprised at that at lvl 39?
Thank you very much for the chapter. :'D
I was kind of surprised since I was unable to access the free chapter I downloaded then I found it was locked.. I will still support you guys. Haha
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