Reviews of The War That Transcends Timelines! by Chaos_Overseer - Webnovel

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Love this story, and I hope that you're not permanently taking it down but are instead working on a rewrite to fix a few of the grammar issues that were in a few of the chapters and overhauling and enhancing the story as whole with new ideas you may have had After you originally wrote the book.

I tried to read this novel but I just seam to quit. Like really this is my second time trying to read this novel I just can't get into it. Also it feels author SPOILER ALERT: Makes MC get capture to make plot which doesn't make sense to me. Chapters are also to short. Also feels a little rushed.

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I haven’t finished reading the whole story yet, but so far the story has been really great. I also really like the authors writing style, it’s pretty interesting. Hope he can continue to write great stories like this

Appreciate the author tackle this genre of war and military. It is an original story (i.e. not something that is "copy and paste from other similiar stories). I give credit to the creativity of the author. (For the first arc - world war 2) However, there are some things to work on, 1) The grammar and the vocab of the story is reasonably bad. It will be good if author can get an editor, or work on his grammar. That will enable a more engaging experience for readers. 2) The characters apart from the author seem to be 'dumbed' down. Rudolf seems to believe in the MC too easily to follow his instructions, just on the basis of 1 incident. It seems too unbelievable. 3) The MC is too young to inspire trust in others. (If author had stated that MC was at least 25 years old and above at the beginning, it would sound more credible. Or if author had stated in the novel that people in the future era are far more developed cognitively, it would be more credible. Final comments This is a story that has lots of potential, but author has to tidy up some of the these weaknesses.

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This is an amazing read. It revisits the realities (probably) of world war events. Though war I think It will give you a good read if you are bored. This book gives me insights on how to write better very amazing keep up the good work author.

È il miglior libro che abbia letto: sia per i contenuti, per la qualità della scrittura, per la cura dei personaggi, ci sn troppe cosa da dire per un grande libro. In poche parole è semplicemente magnifico

Yahalo, hi writer, I just want to say that the novel you wrote is very good, even though I don't like it because I prefer to make it 4/6 per paragraph, but it is a character drawing organization, an organization that was created, and an MC that is not very OP , and here I hope that during the Christmas holidays you can continue to update the latest chapters, you know that making people curious is not okay hehehehee greetings my new readers!

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Well why why why? I mean its so good why does it have only 150 chapters damnn it sucks. I was really immersed into this novel but it ended. I mean is it on haitus or what? It should have more chapters. Author writing skills are good and story is really good as well. I dont know why this has only 150 chapters while other shitty novels have 1000 chapters.

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More chapters pleassssse.

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Thought I reviewed this but guess not. This novel is a masterpeace, if you love anything kingdom/army building you will really enjoy this. The plot is very well thought out and has surprising turns. And has potential for an insane amount of chapters/content. The author is a cool dude , and it seems like he wont abandon this novel since he had just left the hiatus and is back to writing I guess. Ive enjoyed this novel so much when it was in writing, and I hope to enjoy it again now. And if you haven't read it yet, then do so, you won't regret it.

a w e some story definitely a good read

I don't actually have much to say besides read the story because it is divine script from the Realm of the Gods. The best modern and military story that I have ever read. Can't say how much praise I have for you Author and your story. I read in another review on this website how some authors aren't that. They are more than just authors and writers, they are storytellers and I believe you truly fit this word in all of its glory. Thank You for telling us such a great story!!!!!!!

Story you need to read, even if you are a fan of different types of stories. Story by itself is catching you in while are reading, lots of well written emotional moments and all the time when you finish the chapter you wanna know what is in the next. Who ever finds it and read this, Cheers and have a good day.

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This really looks to be a very interesting story I think I just might end up liking it very much just by reading the reviews and summary. It’s definitely a story I will read for sure from start to finish! I wonder which characters I will end up hating and loving.😜 Great job translating or writing the story!!

So this is a new review on the book as my last one is over 7 months old, after seeing the Author grow and advance it seems to bring me as a reader satisfaction. The story and plot are great, with the world ever expanding, factions, scheming, large scale battles all the way to Technology Vs Magic! And let me tell you this, this Author does it in a good way and is only a side arc. If you are hesitant try to first few chapters, and guarantee that the once after keep getting better!

This story is a masterpiece. Sadly it had to be a bit rushed for the first volume, but damn am I excited for the second timeline and what is to come with it. I am so glad that this author is writing and hopes he continues to write

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words? Exactly? One of the novelties of the Internet era is that journalism has been freed from the constraints of the printed page. Instead of conforming to the conventions of the column, the quarter page, the half page—limits that often meant unfortunate last-second cuts—the writer could now make the story as short or as long as seemed right. But what is right? A regular reader of The Guardian online, I often find its featured articles tiresomely long and rambling. You scroll down, imagining the piece almost over, and instead it goes on, and on. There should have been some warning at the beginning telling you how many words lie ahead. So, no sooner does the Internet give us oceans of space than we realize that length was never just a problem of column inches. As with the editing process, which I discussed in a previous post, there is the question of an understanding between writer and reader about what kind of reading experience is being offered. Readers like to suppose that their favorite writers—journalists, novelists, or poets—are absolutely independent, free from all interference, but the truth is that if an author indulges his own private idiolect or goes on for too long, he can at best expect to divide readers into those who admire him slavishly, whatever he throws at them, and those who set him aside in desperation. At worst he will be left with no readers at all. Is there a relationship between a writer’s respect for these conventions and the content or tone of what he writes, the kind of opinions we can expect him to have? I have recently been re-reading Dickens, who published his novels in weekly or monthly installments with strict limits on both the number of words in each installment (around 18,500 for a monthly and 4,700 for a weekly) and the total number of installments (twenty for a monthly, thirty or more for the weekly). Many other novelists published in this way of course, but few relished the form as Dickens did. His contemporary Trollope would write an entire book before allowing its serialization to begin, so anxious was he to stay in control, while Thomas Hardy intensely disliked working for the popular magazines, with the propriety they demanded, and reserved the right to publish an uncensored version in a single volume when the serialization was through. By contrast, Dickens did not worry about having the plot entire in his head before he started, and enjoyed the constant feedback from readers, which arguably influenced the shape his stories took. Only once, on the death of his wife’s

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Love the story, and the unique genre it is using, as well as the plans for future content makes room for plenty of chapters ahead. The Haitus is done as of the time of this writing, but before that there was plenty of time of waiting, so that kinda sucked, but now the planning phase is over, and now we get more chapters hurray