Chapter comments on the chapter Sins of the book Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy

“We’ll see eachother again” Seriously? Hate it when an author breaks immersion. What’s with the fkin plothole? From what we’ve read, the mc hasn’t been told in detail what the “experimental” spell the demon lord used on him was for. The demon lord alluded to it in one comment but the mc is too stupid to catch on that quick, especially to say it with such confidence. It’s the little things like this that ruin a novel for me.

This chapter should be redone. Lots of holes. Why are they not chasing after demon lord? Why did they kill Mc if he hasn't served his perpose of killing lord? It's fine if the questions aren't answered, but Mc should at least ask them and have them be mysterious. As of now it just seems like author forgot or couldn't come up with good reasons to have Mc die right away so ignored it.

I wish there was more detail on the hero's thought process, wich would show his emotions on his final moments and give us insight on the begining of his fall to an anti-hero

This ended to fast. Jap beta trash need at least a few more chapters of torture because he is who he is.

I only find two stories in this application that is pleasing to read, that is released that witch and this one.

Well given the tags, the description, and the length I thought I was going to be spendingcoin on this. That's not likely to happen now. I'll give it a few more chapters to improve though

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Ah, I see where this is going. But I expected the Demon Lord to have died uh.

Thanks!!

🦄Soy trying to be beta believing he's an alpha turn of events, now a55hole alpha will grow up or just beta in a delusion he an alpha😈

now the writer put me in the mood. I want to see revenge and blood. Race doesn't matter, human nature really can't tolerate injustice. This is why Kazuya was deceived though, so ironic, isn't it?

Despite all the other questions and whatnot, I think the MC's attitude can be completely justified. I mean, just imagine, as a ****, being summoned into a world of magic and being lauded as the hero from the get go. Sure everything wouldn't have been smooth, but without your knowing, everything would have been orchestrated in a way that you came out on top. You served justice. I think that would shape anyone's mind into a naive and righteous individual. I'm not saying I like characters like that, but I think it's very believable

The cringe is giving me shivers....

Why are people not liking this? Judge one novel by standards you have from another and you'll only ever have 1 novel you like. there's no plot holes, only unimaginative people would think there are, the mc isn't an idiot just naive and foolish, and the MC's last words are foreshadowing. anyone who read the synopsis can guess what it's for.

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Inn guessing he wasn’t summon from an earth that knew about black glasses not about the terminator “I’ll be back “ 🤣🤣😂🤣

Nice chapter