Hello ms. Author. You said that we can tell you if ever you have any mistakes in your novel. I would just like to inform that you keep using vein not vain in your sentences. Vein is part of human anatomy but vain is an expression in which you used if you are helpless, or vain can be used in a sentence as a self-indulgent individual. But anyway you just have to put vain not vein. Thank you. Spread love. Not hate. 🤗
Indunil