Your plot is going good bt a little slow which is a bit irritating. Keep it up with the same plot bt just maintain a flow, don't drag the story too much. That's all.
I appreciate your hard work and your optimistic approach to take our comments.👍👍
Haha I thought the man talking to the creepy mans wife was mu liang until I read "green eyes". Then I knew that it wasnt out liang liang who this girl was In love with 😄
Keep it up author the story line is very much amazing it's just that o as a reader is very greedy for the story .that your 2 chapter are just a sip of water when there is thrust of full bucket of water
Hehehe .I love ur story. keep going
While I think that this obstacle is reminiscent of the previous one, I would like to say that some circumstances are different. The trust that our main couple have with each other is different first of all. We also have a better look on Mu Lan's intelligence and her mindset. I believe this obstacle serves more to get closer to the main conflict with President Li and his bastard brother. With each confrontation, little by little, Mu Liang can no longer hide his wifey from the rest of the world.
no. really!
i really love the story, and how the story process up until this point.
it just that.. um.. i.. i really hope that.. that.. you will increase the in-intimate sc-scenes..
forget it then! so embarrassing! please forgive this pervert reader!
Why it seemed that everything falls into Liang’s lap pretty easy. Andreas Wagner could never defeat the Mu clan this way or any other way. It seemed that there is no antagonist that could get away with anything...I guess I might echo similar things with other readers here...this arc is quite predictable...
I wish hope and pray that this time liangs plan are smealess... I hope his sucess... I hope this before your holiday? Sorry I really cant get iver I miss tgem togethere so much... And liang... He suffers a lot huhu he does everything and anything i hope he'd be blessed.
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