No need to describe her humiliation, instead tell in brief about her getting free from those drunkards and also make that idiot AW loose all the shares.
We want more details of Lan-Liang.
Um, was it Klaus’s intention to let her get captured? No way he couldn’t have prevented it. Of course they were just using her to get Mu Lan back, but to have her go through that? A bit too much, no point in dwelling on it however. Liang however following Lan while she’s having her fun was cute, wonder if she’s really obvious to him being there, or just playing along while he indulges her.
Don't elaborate on her humiliation. We don't want the story moving away from the male and female leads. Do we? Also, with single chapter updates, it'll be hell for us readers😥 A simple mention about the incident and her physical and psychological state after that would be sufficient.
No need to elaborate however it would nice if she is saved by the love of her life tht way the pain and suffering Wagner would go through would be massive. Broke and nowhere to go.
I think you will need to explain it a little bit, otherwise it will feel too rushed. But also is it important for the plot? You could brush over it like klaus went to liang for help to bring down Andreas after Blair was captured and held.
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