Nice man this story seems like it can turn into something great make sure you just give more background about this world and why archery is such a big deal over all I hope you will continue this.
hmm well im rly big fan of archery there is just too much of sword saber and spear out there so even when a novel tells you it's about archery the mc barely used it later like HJC which is too bad so i rly hope you can write some great story
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