Chapter comments on the chapter Young Xuanyuan Wentian of the book As If Not The Main Character

Good finally someone with working brain cells

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Good thinking Xuanyuan wentian😁😁😁😁

Some grammar issues here and there. In one of the sentences it said that the number of Nascent Soul Cultivators in the city could be counted on one palm. I suggest you change it to hand instead, because most people only have 2 palms. If you don't have an editor then I suggest you use Grammarly.com. It helps a lot in writing.