Chapter comments on the chapter Defeated of the book Duality

I see why you said start on chapter 17, it flows a lot more naturally compared to the earlier chopped style. Love the use of ideas stemming from the horrors of colonialism.

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Wow wow wow! The visualization is flawless, the heart break, the sorrow, the ugh oh my god she didn't moment! 😀😀😀 Great job!

Oh my