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Cato_Faison
I absolutely love this novel and if there’s anyway I can compensate you money wise so you can continue to develop this terrific story I’d be happy too. I recently just gifted you 1000 coins because I’m so interested and enjoying this novel so far. If you have a PayPal or Venmo or any type of payment method I’d like to send you money for the terrific effort you’ve put into this novel as compensation. Keep these chapters coming because I can’t get enough of it I love his novel so much.
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YoungMaster_MtTai
The story is certainly interesting but not my cup of a tea.
The writing os also good and the characters are not bland or boring. Definitely recommend it.
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It contains ntr which most people hate but it's only in a single chapter and probably not the focus of the story.
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Daoistunderlord
NTR enough said ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Ayomide_Faith
This novel is one of the best ve read so far. Will like to know the title of other novels written by anone cause am sure twill be captivating
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PajamaPhil
Ok so they story is pretty good but it takes this huge sci-fi turn that feels super unnecessary like I mean not just guns and grenades but like one of the big bad guyz gets out of a VR gaming pod on a space colony cause alarms go of and he thinks a starship might be attacking. And frankly it seems completely stupid to from a fantasy novel with classes, level system, magic, elfs, dwarves, and dragons and going to a sci-fi just seems unfocused and out of place. I mean I get he wanted to expand beyond just one world but there a lot of better ways to do it while staying in genre and not adding weird sci-fi setting to what in almost every other aspect a fantasy story. It just feels like it doesn't mesh together right. But I love the MC as person cares about more than just himself and he is actually funny.
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Venerable_Daniel
A great book................................................................................................................ Thank you for writing this
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itachibones
i love the story. It definetly i just love vampires. And i haven't reached far but i like how it is developing. though i hope it does not get too cliche
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BobThaGod
Brilliant stuff brillain stuff thats all i can say read it or forever regret it beutiful trully a modern art work ** im only writing this for my daily rewards lol
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Charles_Csco
The storyline development is wonderful and the characterization as well is on point.
Well done and keep up the good work I'd recommend this book anytime anyday
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Kallus
Definitely a good read so far. I like system cheats so a big plus. A good refreasher from the cough up blood scenario. Start was shakey but in less than 50 chaps it gets good.
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WolfTheLion
Pro: good start.
Interesting world
Dark feel
Cons : forced romance
Ntr
And the biggest one : the mc
Honestly it's more of a personal taste
But i can't root for the mc in fact i began
To dislike him lol, way too naive and
Foolish , similiar to japanese mcs.
In conclusion : read with caution, there are a lot of dealbrakers but if you don't mind them it will be a good read.
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Azrael4355
I tried to really like this book cause everything but the stupid plot hole was great. English is great, descriptive writing is great, world background superb, character design super, but that stupid idiotic plot hole of """ I KNOW WHO YOU ARE AND I'M YOUR SUPER LOYAL RETAINER BUT FUCK YOU I WON'T TELL YOU FOR YOUR OWN GOOD""" plot hole is just too idiotic, juvenile and too dang overused. If you really think about that plot hole from any common sense angle it does way more harm than good and would've been better off as not being added from the start. It totally ruined the whole start and the whole book. Anyways gluck hope you don't add this kind of plot hole in the future. Totally ruined your great work. Just a really bad way to setup a book. The amnesia was already enough then i would've just sprinkled in bits of clues for him to do a self discovery of sort no need to add that stupid retainer. He was totally pointless to the plotline and only serve to demean the whole start of events. You could've used him to add emotional impact by having divulge some semi super important info being he got caught and then killed. Adding more questions than answers and furthering the plot deeper. Not that stupid i know who you are but I don't want to tell you bull****.
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Leon07
Netotare, that word should be enough for most readers to know why they shouldn't read this. I was interested in the novel at first, but it started showing signs of NTR, and then it just threw it all out onto us ( within first 50 chapters ). Quite disappointed
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ddz1rt
The only decent thing about this waste of time is interesting and unique world setup. Otherwise annoying, plain and boring read. So, if you're interested in something to just waste your time this one fits the bill if not - just skip.
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666Vampire_Vamp
This is the single greatest Vampire Novel I've ever read.
It's everything I've ever wanted.
Gory, Gritty, Badass, incredible fights, well designed power system, and a huge fantasy world.
Vampires feel like real monsters went they're angry.
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Leobanky
I have nothing to say, but I think I will enjoy this novel because of the title that alone will attract many people to want read the novel Pasay ........
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Prosperous
So first off, not my cup of tea so take what I say with a grain of salt...
To avoid spoilers, lets just say that this story is missing some tags. Like "Tragedy", "Blackmail", "Betrayal", "Slavery", "Extortion", "Rape" and "Grimdark". Lots of trigger warnings needed.
The summary made me think this was going to be a story where the MC gets a "system" or uses "game-like elements" to quickly become OP and face slap the people who made him a vampire and enslaved him but that is not what happens... at least not in the first 50 chapters. I tried to give the story a fair shot; the author himself admits the first 4 chapters are not great and that this is a repost of his first ever story but I got to 50 chapters and had to quit.
Its hard to give examples without spoilers but any one of my suggested tags would have been a deal breaker for me normally so I cant reccomend this story.
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The MC is also reborn from modern Earth so he makes a lot of references but since the setting is a fantasy world it feels real jarring and destroys any chance of immersion. Usually I dont mind if the reincarnated MC invents pizza or makes an anime joke but in this dark fanatsy setting it feels awkward.
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tclearwa89
Um kind of slow going but the story is interesting. Medieval but also sci-fi? Fun. Harem but the author controlled themselves.........recommended.
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slothyhuman
Welp, great novel. If your looking for something that seems interesting and has good english and doesnt make you rethink life while reading then this is for you, but.. i ended up stopping at around chapter 40 because the mc gets ntr'd and is then like"its fine, she has loyalty" and takes her back. So because of thatm im dropping the novel. But it does have promise and if you can get over the ntr i reccomend giving it a try
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dylan_poe
Had a rough start but one you got past the beginning chapter you can tell where the writer finally got a good rhythm going and the story took off well written and ties in all the side stories/characters nicely can wait to read more chapters overall enjoyable even though theirs a few grammar and misspellings but you can get enough from the rest of the paragraph to put together what the writer meant in those cases as the story progresses it gets better
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Dao_Crusher
A story with great world background was butchered by inconsistent writing and over the top preferences. Better to rewrite with new perspective and better well taught new story. It could become a great one if it did
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DragonKiss
If milk is for free, no man wil bother to buy a cow. How big the ocean is it can't swallow a fish. Is not waiting for the storm to pass rather its about learning how to dance in the rain. Bravo to u Mr writer u deserve some accolade.
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Sharonmyoui
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XenonDerMico
I hate and love this novel. I love the story and plot. And hate the author as the sadist he is. I instead of the MC would be already broken. I would be fall for the dark side. I would became a demon, a Vampiric demon. Full of hate, carving for vengeance, ready for violence and so one.
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WPOmega
Usually I like to completely catch up before leaving a review, I'm gonna change that on other novels. I made it up to 269 and black did what black did, and now everything I feel towards this novel is entirely dependant on the reason behind the action. But now I don't want to read forward because if I can't accept the reason it's going to make me hate the novel that up until this point I've been enjoying
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kjkjjkjk
So having read past chapter 80 I feel fully confident in giving my review. This book is not enjoyable to read, and the reason why is somewhat hard to spot. The biggest flaw is that I, as a reader, actively want Kael to die. He is a whiny, crybaby who got what he deserved.
He says that he suddenly has trust for women again after his mom had stepped out on his dad...but why? He trusts two women, one of whom had a child with another man.
None of the reasoning seems to hold together very well. The dark elements are done really well, but they don't seem to ever be in the forefront.
The universe itself is fairly decent, a good story could definitely grow from these basic story roots, but it never does. While it is possible that Kael eventual grows a set of testicles, I find that very unlikely. Even if he does, these 80 chapters are not salvageable.
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SlowLiam
This book is extremely irritating to read, why I used that word is because the beginning of the book is good but as you keep going, the story plot gets so bad that it'll become annoying to keep reading, the mc is also trash, basically the whole plot sucks, I can't even continue to keep talking about it cos im annoyed for wasting my time reading it
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