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CharlotteH
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
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CriticalReader
Too many cliffhangers
Too much drama
Story is dragged out i.e: what could take 2 chapters takes 5
Mc becomes dumb for suspense and to show he is human i.e: too sappy
Ultimately the novel relies too much on suspense and drama : enemies being alive for over 100 chapters, mc hiding his power all the time, mc letting emotions ruin his plans despite his character development (this is the sappy part)
If only the author did not rely on cheap gimmicks to keep readers interest but allowed events to flow naturally
This novel will test your patience so i advise that you don't hold expectations i.e: there are too many novels to read instead
A rant because i expected too much from this, either way not good enough for me to wait for updates
Good luck, not everyone can be a fan
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Lord_Farquaad341
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Laven_Suacse
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Trazors
I don’t know what i am reading, nothing makes sense. The novel starts of just weird and no explanations are given so I don’t know what is going on it seems like I’m expected to know the plot and what is goin on. And no I won’t read a few more chapters because i would get an explanation i will just find some other novel that will be more entertaining than this one. Hard to write an accurate review when nothing and everything is happening.
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Lord_Farquaad341
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Lord_Farquaad341
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Crimson_Assassin
This story is an absolute masterpiece, the author is extremely responsive, and it has beautiful writing, it’s sad that the only reviews that I saw that weren’t 5 stars were the spam comments
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deanbunter88
Thanks for the novel 😁😊😁😄😆😄😐😉😐😯😑😯😕😆😈😆😂😁😂😀😁😀😄😆😄😆😐😉😐😯😯😑😆😑😈😆😁😈😂😁😂😀😂😀😆😅😆😅😑😅😑😐😇😆😇😁😂😁😀😂😆😅😅😆😅😑😈😆😁😈
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Rahul_Kiro
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Lord_Farquaad341
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shansevi
In my points of view, this novel have the best story eventhough i just read the epilogue. I want to give it a try.and also, i love the cover
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Hender
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leech_
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Zaver
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AT_Nou
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dkennedyb1988
Thanks for the novel 😄😗🤨😥🤗😥🤣🤔😉😁🙂😶😍🙂😍😊😃🤐😥😉😆😑😥😉😎😍☺️😃😄😗😚😎😥😐🤣😮😥😉😎😶😂😘🤐😃😍😊😶🙂😶🙂😉😋🤔🤣😀😉😎😶😗😍😙😂
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Hender
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Lord_Farquaad341
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Gacha123
A beautiful artwork.
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spicysmok
I like the book and am looking forward to future updates. Its a good entertaining way to kill time easily. I really wasn't expecting a 150 word minimum on the comments but whatever i found filler words lol
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validusername11223
Really good story, very well written, and with characters that feel much more real than any other story I've read here.
Big thanks to the author for putting in the time to write this.
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