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Leylin_Farlier
You can’t do that much work tomorrow but if you’re going into a little girls get that money 💰 should we do that I don’t know 🤷♂️ I wanna is that day and I’ll just let them go have to
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SleepingOtter
The horrendous grammar and vocabulary is unbearable. If I have to read a sentence multiple times to understand, what the author wants to convey, I wil never be able to immerse myself in the story.
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PyCode
Tooooo bad it was dropped. It was a pretty fun read. I don't know if it will ever be continued, it's likely it won't be. If you are looking for a quick read with an evil mc try it out, just don't get too invested.
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Orazon
Writing Quality 4.5/5 - It's excellent, but there are some mistakes here and there, nothing incomprehensible though.
Stability of Updates 5/5 - Well... it's true that this novel is on a hiatus now, so giving it 5 might not be convincing, however, I gave it 5 because the author stated that they will return once they're done with university, and it had a good update schedule before that.
Story Development 5/5 - The flow of the story was excellent, not too slow nor too fast, giving him setbacks sometimes. The most important thing may be that the system is not for free, although nothing is clear about its true for now, its obvious that someone it to him and is trying to use him, this creates a sense of urgency and a feeling that the MC isn't in full control which is very good. It's also worthwhile to mention that the MC is capable of learning from past experiences unlike other MCs.
Character Design 5/5 - The side characters aren't morons. There are quite a few shrewd ones, but even the others aren't simply talking dolls. As for the MC, well, from the start he's decently developed, and throughout the story undergoes further development when performing some 'actions' to increase his power further. I also like how evil the MC is, it's quite rare to find evil ones.
World Background 5/5 - The world is developed throughout the story, from geography, politics, history, power levels, etc. The information is slowly dosed instead of an info-dump which consolidates it. The author also succeeds in maintaining the readers interest by hinting at some mysteries.
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FelipeMontel
Very good, wonderful novel for who searches for a devil MC ;) ;) ;) ; ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)) ;) ;)
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Lucien7
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The_Unholy_One
Gotta say this novel surprised me especially with the breaking the damsel in distress cliche when he killed her to leave no witnesses other than that im really loving this novel, keep up the good work
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Looking4aGoodName
I am not the type to write a review. Im a silent reader, occasionally voting and most of the time reading. But, this time I can't help but to write because I f*ck*ng love this book. But you're not updating anymore. I just want to know what happened.
And by the way, this is a new account coz, I don't have enough spirit stones.
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shabbeer
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Don’t bother
It’s a nice story of Mac not afraid to go on devil path to get stronger but author gave up so it’s no longer updating so don’t bother reading
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Arise
It's ok, nothing special. Read this if you want to read a story with an evil mc doing whatever he wants to get immortality. Honestly, it is a timewaster.
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Animar
Great story. Evil MC to the likes of Fuan Yuan or Leylin Farlier. But the author abandoned it because "no one read it".. Odd that hebdidnthis just a few days after creating a website for it. Oh well.
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twigthe1st
I really enjoyed reading this. At time writing this, Author has stopped writing which is disappointing. I still recommend it, interesting take on a system. I just hope the author comes back and see how many people read their novel
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Ultimate_Biased
This story is really good and as far as I read. Tge only downside that i found (other that THE MC MUST HAVE A PET, HE MUST FIND ONE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...just joking... Or not?) is that the grammar is not really fluent and, even tought english is not my first language, I found some errors that can be asso iated with lack of attention.... The author sould find a proof reader or something. GO GO evil path.. And the pet uwu please XD
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Minkoy
Hahaha bulgarin kak se mu6ki namerihta absoultno sus kusmet mnogo hubava kniga prodaljavay napred mnogo e interstna knigata i izglejda 6e chte budi za vampiri
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Doc_Quack
Amazing, one of my favorite novels. The writing quality is above average, just minor errors. While it needs more chapters and a stable update schedule, everything is perfect. Keep it up!
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Dechet
Great story, with an amazing and inovant world building and system. And seem very legit in the action and thinking of all the people. A must readto all locer of dark fantasy and evil mc
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Saskej123
Great story but good luck with your studies I hope someone takes over this one.
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Kneki
Is good and good luck..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Thefirst12
This is one of the best original novels ever read.
It's refreshing to see a protagonist that his only desire is to get stronger for immortality no matter what. I recommend to read this novel aspishely because of the writing quality. Have fun!!!!
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memberberry
silly, if you are more picky, or like a more ***** story, do not read that.
I would not offend children of twelve, they could write a better novel.
If you liked it, congratulations you are special "SPECIAL".
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Drthrottlejr
The author is one sick puppy, but i like it and the book is awesome. Do not recommend for those who have a ***** heart or are just ***** in general or have yet to develop a steady moral compass.
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Justin1994
I really like this book hope you can have more chapters soon.................. ............................................. ............................... ..................................................................................... .......
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GraveWalker
It's a great story with a interesting system.
But the mc isn't really smart everyone around agrees with what he says to easily, there's a lack of info in abilities of paths and environment.
Example of being agreed with to easily
(Mc which is 8 years old asks father, if he can go out into the world to become stronger, the father agrees easily to him)
I could go on, but I'm going to be ****** and straight forward.
This is just one persons opinion, feel free to give the book a try.
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ABSenior
Buddy make him cruel and stronger slowly .
Romance part should also be there but don't introduce too fast . Ok
Make it like warlock of Magus world.
It is one of my favorite novel.
Keep up good work .
I love this novel
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undead2146
It's a story about your typical wuxia/xianxia novel but the catch is, the mc is evil/indifferent. He doesn't go around saving maidens in distress but rather kills them if it is convenient for him. It's a first for me to read about an anti-hero type novel, so if you want a change of pace, I'd recommend reading this novel.
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Golden_Prophet
Novel has been drop😪..........
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H4ves
Aaaaand with this novel i'm sure,i have no more patience for goody mc's.
If you are in a world where the survival of the fittest is the rule(VAST majority of the novels out there) it makes no sense to be binded by earthly morals,all those good mc's who kill only when is convenient for them are just hipocrytical,sure you don't need to be some psycopath maniac(even though i like them huhuhu) but don't go spilling bs about mercy or goodness just cuz the author makes it seems rightful.+1 author, evil mc's are the best
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Thunderage
This story is the type ive been looking for, where the mc is a ruthless and logical person. He dosn't just go killing every thing he set his eyes on but he won't blink when he does kill. So please don't cuy this webnovel short like other great webnovel authors do
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TheRedMoon
Awesome !!!!
The MC personality is the besssssttttttt pure Eviiiiiiil
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Kepp it going author :)👍👍💯
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