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****ty MC he goes for the fist girl that hits on him wtf is dis SHITTY MC๐ฟ๐ฟ๐ฟ๐ฟ๐ฟโ๏ธ like WTF DUDE u game cool skills now start huty on some random girl LIke WTF WTF bruh ๐๐๐๐ is MC stupid or wut but story good I just hate the MC like some random fucker cuz she cute and hits on hime SHE IS A FUCKING STRANGER FOR GODSAKE Omg
One of my favorites and I only have two of those, I hope you change your mind, I really really do, it's so sad that you have to drop it, ok I want to post this but I don't know why does it have to have at least 140 characters.
I like the story, I like how the main character uses his overpowered system,
I also liked the planets(not the last one tho), I just hoped he would go to the world magic and swords, but well...
Too op and hypocritical. Too easy, too convenient .......................................... You get the idea. If you are looking for wish fulfillment, you came to the right place.
The first two world's were amazing! They were the best,didn't like the romance but I just don't like romance period. It started going down hill when the MC went to the third world. It's like the author stopped caring at that point because he just sort of left it and the "ending" was just crap,like he got all three of his wives together and was like,"All of you are my wives and I want use to live in this mansion with all of these women bodyguards in the dimension I made ok?" And the wives were like,"As long as I'm with you." Kind of crap like that. The author was like im getting bored of this story so I'm going to make this crappy ending for this story, there done now to never touch it again. I was done at that point,wish you made the story longer or at least made a better ending.
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This is one of the book which I couldnโt wait to finish it!! For fact, I finished it in 1 day!!!!
Love the plot!! Love the MC!!!
Do you love OP MC?
Do you love generous System?
Trillions experience points?!!!
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historia jest ciekawa
ciekawie sie rozwija fajnie sie czyta postacie sa przejrzyste tylko trzeci swiat zostal zle opisany zaczol nudzic bohater ciekawie sie rozwijal oraz ciekawe mnial historie
Honestly the story is full of plot holes, but i loved it. I didn't like the ending though. Well it's good enough for a first work. I hope there was more action in all the individual worlds. Sure hope the author's next work is even better than this.
Salut,mi-a placut foarte tare aceasta novela.
Imi este trist ca este un roman scurt....
Astept cu nerabdare mai multe novele de acest gen !
Autor respect
I don't know why this novel is so overrated. It is not even good. I recommend not to read it. This is litarely one of the worst one i have even read. And after 68 chapter the translator ended there saying that he realised that how ****ty the story is and it is full of plothole.
I dropped this novel before and i was bored and found it again and decided to give it another try but I just couldnโt...
First of all you meet someone and ask the person to join without explaining to detail what you want him to do and he just agrees and then you go ahead and give everything to him for free and he asks no questions whatsoever and just went ahead with it...
Secondly you meet a girl who is older than you and she gave you her number and hit on you , ok I understand the fact that because itโs your first time you would want to go on a date with her but to ask her to marry you on your first date when you are only 17 WTF who does that and there are far more beautiful girls out there and also you no nothing about this girl...
This novel just seems like itโs the authors wet dream and how he wants his life to be so he just write everything down without thinking that it wouldnโt be him reading the novel and also you put the restricted pa but all i see is a na*ve kind hearted boy who is an id*ot....
I like this novel very well if you can just add more chapters . the story is one of the most unique one i ever had the chance to read . If the writer can only mass some more chapters . I wish this novel can toppel over the ranking
Leading system, Do I need to comment? was it supposed to be a comedy? --------------------------------------------...........................................................................................................................................................................................
damn this novel is so good my ratings for this are 11/10..you get it? It's so good it surpassed the limit...yeah and I like this novel because the mc travels to other worlds everytime he conquer the world hes in....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Lol dude, I like your synopsis. It kills me when you said (why does he do that? Cause he lead or something) not very accurate on my part
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It's pretty interesting but it's good enough for me to read it a few times because the MC is very overpowered and i hope it updates faster because i want to see where he will go next
Writing quality criticism:
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Character design criticism:
Readers will appreciate it if you describe how the main character looks, what he wants to do overall, and what his favorite things are. Favorite things as in hobbies, quirks, etc. In other words detail! Give me something to help imagine the scene.
Word background criticism:
What year is it? How does that time period differ? Has peoples fashion sense changed? Describe the environment in the planet. Anything else about the human culture different? Is KFC still on the downturn in the United States?!! Is the United States now called The Colnel Confederacy?
Thanks
at first glance it look like a good novel with lots of potential.
But this novel is very shallow and the characters have no life in them.
everything comes too easy. first system gift: 10000000000 sys points.
first guy he recruits gets everything for free, he asks no question on how there is a gravity chamber on earth or the time dilation training chamber or the teleport bracelet with storage space, its treated like the most ordinary stuff in the world, no surprise no emotion.
i would go crazy about any one of those things.
Romance? how to describe it: see--> like-->wifey during the beginning of the date.
the concept is good though, and it can be expanded.
what i wanted to see when i read mercanary group on earth and then world travel was not the mc finishing on earth and then moving on, but more the likes of an interdimensional mercanary group with the headquarter on earth portals to different worlds.
that'd be cool(i have only read to chapter 8 so i don't know if its going in this direction)
It's one of the best story I've ever read I had to read it twice maybe three times cuz the author won't match release the chapters even though I gave them power stones now I'm going to have to read it again while for chapters
Just kidding is a passable novel
I give 2.5
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The cultivation levels, they can easily find replacement of those typical brain. I am sure if you are new to make a mess of the game is really fast paced world of the game time travel. I am a restaurant and many other novels. Is quite the government.
If one can spam fake 5 stars reviews,
Does it mean is ok tk spam one stars as well?
Im am taking that logic as a yes....
Shameless author just how many accts you have?
Of course excluding the fresh bloods
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