Reviews of Honey, Your Mom is now a System Goddess by Bunny - Webnovel

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Such a great book. Please continue. If you need help, I can do my best to help you. This story has really great potential. If you continue, you could become one of the best original novels. Please give the book a chance.

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I love the story so far. Good story line it's original and new and I haven't read or seen something like this before. I like the main character, she's different from most main characters in this genre. Keep up the good work!

Ah now this is fresh. A mature female protagonist that's not a young lady, but a woman who's experienced the joys and griefs of life. Give me more!

Exceptional storyline original content creator first one of its kind Titled Sorry I’m a little impatient when it comes to update I guess some of us have our corks

I just love the idea of the novel, its definitely a much better novel than mine, better grammar, better plot, and all. So she's got my vote.

Exceptional base quality. Grammar and sentence structure are both on point, leaving readability without a hitch. That meets a standard considerably higher than a good chunk of original works here in my opinion. The premise mixes both the novel and the expected with a mother operating as a system goddess, which lends itself well to separating from the regular fold of system-based stories. In a story like this, the main character is what truly has to stand out as she embodies everything that makes the story unique (being a mother placed as a system goddess). Towards that end, the author has done a respectable job with the first chapter, humanizing her and fleshing out her background. I do still think it could have been spread out over multiple chapters to really build up who she was, but I also understand that getting to the meat of the story (seeing the MC operating as a goddess) is also important. All in all, a promising start so far. Looking forward to new updates.

I'd love feedback, and any actual typos pointed out will be fixed asap! If it isn't a typo I'll reply to you and explain. Naturally, if I get sick, busy, or die I won't respond as quickly... (or ever if I'm dead. But that probably won't happen!) ANYWAY, this is the first story in this style for me... I'm trying to make it more webnovel-like! I don't think it is working, however! If it gets to the point where I can't stand it I'll just go back and update it and move on with my life. Any macro-story questions can be asked as replies to this review! If you have micro questions that should be as a comment in the relevant chapter. Happy reading! <3 The Eastern Fantasy elements naturally start to kick in about the end of chapter 2, mid-chapter 3! As a heads up! So worry not!