I love this novel. It’s pretty good other than the fact that I can’t really visualize the characters that well maybe I read too quickly but overall a very good read.
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Novel hooked me up right from the start, binge-read all them chapters.
I love the characters, are all likeable and really feel like real "undead" and not generic in the slightest.
I also really like the romance. It grows naturaly and isn't forced or anything, I saw them literally fall in love each other. (and it only grows stronger and gets better).
Comedy is also, again, really nice. love the jokes about undead and living and stuff...
The plot progresses nicely, I see in what general direction it leads to (at least I think i do), and their are a ton of things, which i didn't see or expect at all.
A great novel and I can't wait to see new chapters popping up, seeing this story unfold.
Hello.
1) I enjoyed reading this novel.
Well, this point is the most important I suppose. ^_^
2) This novel is a strange mix of Grim Fandango, Planescape Torment, Chronicles of Amber, and few other not so well known things (for example, series of books: Ruby of Karahasher, which is about wandering of 2 divine beings in other planes)
It is hard to say if author knows about such works but I had a feeling that he does not thou. (he had a reference to Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy thou, it is nice ^_^)
3) Also I have a feeling that author does not really understand how his world is working so due to that almost nothing is explained.
This is actually quite bad thing. If you want to make world complete mystery - do it, if you want to make a world understandable and more real - you explain it. This world is somewhere between.
4) Some scientific stuff.
If you want to write something mixing science, put formulas and real facts like:
The formula for concrete mix is one part cement, two parts sand and three parts gravel or crushed stone.
Cement is manufactured by crushing, milling and proportioning the following materials:
Lime or calcium oxide, CaO: from limestone, chalk, shells, shale or calcareous rock
Silica, SiO2: from sand, old bottles, clay or argillaceous rock
Alumina, Al2O3: from bauxite, recycled aluminum, clay
Iron, Fe2O3: from from clay, iron ore, scrap iron and fly ash
Gypsum, CaSO4.2H20: found together with limestone.
And even this is hardly satisfying because there are many different types of cement for different purposes. So if you really want to give some real knowledge you shall write it at least like this or better with formulas and explaining. It would take only like 2-3 sentences. Also author did not even tell why undead know chemistry but can not create ****** things. (and if they do not know chemistry how the hell they would get ingredients, some random engineer would not remember ways to synthesize them from nature, And does is this world even have our nature!? It was not explained at all...)
Another thing is 700 qubits quantum computer. What the hell is this thing doing in this world? One of the developers of Quantum computers from IBM was a lecturer in my university. This thing can not do mathematical calculations or anything close to things described there, even in theory. It is against its architecture + how the hell some random person would know an architecture of quantum computer!? I have a degree in quantum physics, I had a course in QC for over a year during my master and even I have only a brief idea how to model this thing.
5) Romance and character description/development is messed up.
I can accept that author complicates it, but do you really have to explain how they lay in bed for basically half a chapter and on the other hand give there inner feeling and thoughts in 2-3 sentences!?
Conclusion:
The story is good and enjoyable, but it gives an odd feeling that author is writing without proper understanding how world is working and what characters are thinking, It gives a strange vibe...
Thank you for your time.
This story is something very unusual. While in many ways it is a typical transmigration tale, the average man grows into something interesting in his new undead life. It is not just a story about being clever and becoming powerful. Jack is neither a perfect hero nor a viscous villain but and interesting evolving character in a fascinating world with equally interesting other characters as friends, enemies, allies, and romantic interests.
Seems interesting so far. We will see if it can hold the quality. Can't say anything about story development as I've just started, so we'll see how it goes.
i m in love with this novel, this one of the best novel i have come across so far, i have read this novel again and again while waiting for the update, guyzx believe me tht u won’t regret reading this novel...
i m in love with this novel, this one of the best novel i have come across so far, i have read this novel again and again while waiting for the update, guyzx believe me tht u won’t regret reading this novel...
Honestly 5 out of 5 personal enjoyment ,characters aren't bland and boring and there is a harem but not done badly to turn u off ,who says harems can't be done. Currently there's like 4 girls interested in the MC up to the point 150 chapters l personally hope there's no more but if author can pull off more in a good way then l don't mind. The world building/kingdom build is definitely there, I came to read a good story and l stayed cause it was a great story.
Fantasy aspect is also 9000/10 l like it what more do you u want, a ruthless ruler that isn't a wimp it's got it all
I am not very good at writing reviews so i won't try, but all you gotta know is that this novel is Fucking great.
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This novel is amazing. That's the short version of this review.
The novel has characters which stick to their own persona along the way. There exists enemies, allies and much more with different personalities that varies.
The world building is growing more as time passes by while Jack (MC) grows stronger.
The quality is good and I don't know the release schedule yet, but I guess it is also good.
This is close to Overlord.. I absolutely enjoy this novel! The MC is amazing and is very clever and intelligent. This novel also keeps you in suspense! There is amazing "character building" and "story progression"! I can't wait to see how this novel turns out. It is definitely a hidden gem!! and I highly suggest to read!
Keep up the great work!
Great Story I really enjoy reading this book. Love the characters and it keeps getting better and better never a dull moment. It is a lot of action but not to much at one time. The pace is good the writing skill is excellent and the the overall plot is pure genius. You must read this story if you like undead. My hat is off to the author. Thank you.
Sssssssssuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggoooooooooooiiiiiiiiii. Awesome novel ben king is awesome just get him a bit more aware of all around him a want a war
Very Overlord like, if you enjoyed that, you'll definitely enjoy this. Anyway, I'm not good with these reviews soooo just read this hidden gem and give your powerstones.
Well I have to say from all my binge of the chapters I can't say much about the updates that it receives but they seem good while the characters actually have depth which is nice while there is foreboding to great world building so overall this is a good read and should be in your library
I need more of this good read. The action is so good and it just keeps getting better and better. When you get out of the drama it moves on to the next. Great cliffhanger. Really good story and awesome pacing.
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I accidentally find this gem yesterday so just finished reading till the latest chaps now(ch. 109), but hey first impression with this novel for me is actually great, the story behind the scene and world building around the MC already hooked me to read this novel from chapter 1 to 109 in one go.
I really like the antagonist because they actually have a brain and reason why he do that and hate it because he's still lingering around from early chapter till the latest.
Writing quality is so-so, but the story is pretty good. I love the main character, he is quite funny. It's worth the read, add it to your library and give it a go.
Haven't really read much of it only until chapter 14, but untill now it has been an enjoyable story. I like the concept of undead that are trying to be holy, I also like the world setting that it is taking place. There are many interesting concepts here that you normally don't see very often. All in all, I can only recommend it to who ever likes the undead. Untill now it almost reminds me of overlord. The only "bad" thing is the grammar, but that could be my imagination. Still very enjoyable and I hope that it continues for a long time.
Good writing, original world, interesting characters, and a good ol' Supreme Undead Pontiff to top it all off, amazing.
Also, the story line and plot twists are good, it's not like some stories where you read chapter one and know what chapter 500s gonna say, it's unpredictable, but doesn't just pull plot twists out of it's ass, it makes sense.
I love this story it keeps me on the edge of my chair. The more I read the more the characters come alive. Verruca is a real pistol even when she isn't loaded LOL. Keep up the good work. Well Done!!!!
Almost perfect writing
Amazing stabilty
A horrible story progression
Amazing character design
Amazing world background
Every fukin event happens in the following way
Problem-peopletrytosolveit-everythinggoeswrong-mcsaveseveryone-repeat
Love the story, it’s a great twist on an undead novel, there are a few minor grammar mistakes every now and then but nothing serious, this novel should be in the top 100
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