Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 4 of the book FeralHeart

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Shoto1003
From the beginning of the story the author followed this rhythm, for example the copulas themselves tend to be rather slow, but did you realize that he skipped the whole process of locomotion to communication tower from one chapter to the next ?? This is repeated several times, unless it is important, the author tends to skip several scenes that would be just fill and focus on the scenes if you have something important. Aside from this example others have, for example when they left the fort when they discovered that the father of Phobos died, the other chapter begins with Phobos trying to talk to his mother, when Epione tried his promotion, did not show all the details of his locomotion, only showed the agreement with Lieutenant Nerra, and many other situations.
Vicentin: too slow, but thanks for the chapter
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sloksingh
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Shoto1003: From the beginning of the story the author followed this rhythm, for example the copulas themselves tend to be rather slow, but did you realize that he skipped the whole process of locomotion to communication tower from one chapter to the next ?? This is repeated several times, unless it is important, the author tends to skip several scenes that would be just fill and focus on the scenes if you have something important. Aside from this example others have, for example when they left the fort when they discovered that the father of Phobos died, the other chapter begins with Phobos trying to talk to his mother, when Epione tried his promotion, did not show all the details of his locomotion, only showed the agreement with Lieutenant Nerra, and many other situations.
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bavieca
thanks for the chapter.
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Vicentin
too slow, but thanks for the chapter
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