Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 11 of the book FeralHeart

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wonder what type of metal she likes? power? death? melodic? melodeath?

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Being an R18 novel, I could have said.... Mars: once you experience my “sword”, you well never find pleasure without it! Artemis: Oh no! It’s power is over 9000! ##drools## drops her sword, and reaches for “his”

with that statement makes it very clear. I really do not know what Mars will want to marry her, the personality of Mars is very passive (I really wanted him to create a little more motivation, so far he just picks up and licks the wounds in the story, someone like Artemis would do well for him.) Mars needs an abjective besides wanting to fix things, everything is being he fixing the mess, it was so with Ceres and geas, it was so in the forbidden zone, it was so with Phobos's mother, and it is being so even in the capital. he needs some initiative.

Mars: uhhh I don't want to either 🤷‍♂️

well she cant he shouldn't bother, there are other things he has to take care of.