I wrote this.....
I cannot help but like it...
A lot......
More seriously, it is a harem fic where I try to keep the characters more believable. It isn't perfect but I have found my feet somewhere after chapter 40.
This is a truly good book. One of my favourite authors for sure. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤. Keep it up
I find this to be one of the best original novels on this site. I feel the only thing stopping it from rating higher on the power ranking is the recent slow down in release frequency.
Background development is quite interseting with characters having their own persinal space .The story is a breath of fresh wind with setting borrowed from around the world and hilarious situations have certainly been created aptly.
I found the story fantastic with a great vibe.
I thank the author for the great effort and look forward for new updates.
I have been reading this book on Wuxia until I got this app for reading. It is a little behind compared to that site but I still like this app. Maybe in the future it will catch up to everything else.
I find the continued reading a bit disturbing as the perspective often swaps without indications, making it hard to follow the storyline. The characters themselves have a lot of depth to them and show an interesting personality developement. The power of the MC doesn't grow too fast, so the story is rather well paced. The world is complex and intersting as it ties many regional myths and histories of the real world together in a fascinating way.
All in all a very interesting story that is well enjoyed, but sometimes a bit difficult to follow.
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Maybe I haven’t read far enough but I’m not invested yet. The background is practically nonexistent, the author continually switches from 3rd person to first person, the MC already has 2 harem members at the beginning. Their relationship was told, not shown. The possible villain really should be the MC since at the point I’ve read to, he is fleshed out better. So many ppl are praising this novel that I went in with high expectations...well everyone has different tastes. While the novel is not horrible, it’s not a masterpiece either.
This novel began with a "plot"
When the "plot" ends, you're satisfied and want to leave.
The plot bashed you back to the novel with great world background, charac-- well all of those glittering stars.
Mmm..how to say it...oh, your writing makes your characters alive.
P.S. I rarely give a novel all 5 stars, you are the first if not the second novel to which I gave 5 stars.
the story is very good and serves both audiences: male and female. The writing is very detailed, but what impresses me the most is the background and the characters. This is a harem novel and in the early chapters has an intimate scene, but this novel has a differential. The intimate scenes are not the focus, but the feelings of the characters in that situation, there are stories where the intimate scenes are just to please the female audience, but in this story there is something more, and people, especially MC wives are not heads of wind that does everything he wants. They have their tastes, their personality has a personality. give a chance for this story, I recommend you read the first 3 volumes to get a good overview of it, it will not be wasted time, and you are a girl who likes romance with action and some intimate scene gives a chance.
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I read it till end of vol 3 but it's just disappointing, author keep writing abut side chapters too much, and this time it become like those indian drama movies
This novel, honestly, is one of the most underrated stories I have read so far. Its writing is on par with the great Korean web novels, and dare I say, so far it is even better. The language used is sophisticated, a refreshing change from the norm, and tropes are often undermined. Even when the author does use somewhat cliched ideas, it’s done in a way that doesn’t tire the reader (for me at least). This is a book that isn’t just about smut, but gives something very very enjoyable in the form of a complex story. I look forward to the ongoing success of the author and any future works 🙂.
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Worth the read. One of the best original stories I've been reading by far. It at times takes a bit of time for the story in a certain arc to come together and sense but it's not boring reading.
I'll go in more detail below but in short, this is a really enjoyable story that includes interesting characters living in an expansive world with an awesome magic system and has plots and intrigue that'll keep you interested in what might happen next.
The main characters are likable and interesting but more surprisingly the support and background characters are three dimensional as well which really adds to the feel of the story since it seems that the world is populated by real people instead of 3-4 and an army of NPC's giving them quests.
The MC also actually has a relationship with the love interests instead of them being body pillows or damsels for the MC to show his awesomeness with which I appreciate.
My favorite part though is the magic system and the overall lore and how it is gradually expanded on instead of being info-dumped about everything immediately, it adds to the mystery(or magic) of the world since it means that I don't know how strong the characters can become or what magic their enemies will use against them.
Nice, here comes a harem novel without the the irritating usual things (at least till now): one dimensional girls, idiotic antagonists, uninteresting side characters and swarming the MC with loads of women witout personality.Keep up the good work, I love reading it.
if you are reading this, what are you doing here? Just go and read the damn novel it's worth it. So be a good person now and listen to me and read the novel!!!
Honestly one of the best novels I've read so far. The author really is great, albeit the fights aren't that amazing(at least until where I've read), the way the author builds the world and the characters is truly showing his skill. Love the story so far, and I hope this hidden gem will eventually make it up further in the rankings, it truly deserves it.
I wonder who's copying who because this is the exact same novel the Sensual Tamer Chronicles on machine sliced bread right down to terminology except this has less chapters
I love this novel. Normally I tend to stay far away from harem storied but this one is really well written. The love and relationship between the husband and wives is extremely heartwarming. The world and characters are so well developed. The update schedule is okay (even though I selfishly wish for more). I really enjoy reading this novel, it is one of my top 3 original novels. I can't wait for more chapters!
I love this novel. Normally I tend to stay away from harem storied but this one is well written and the love between the husband and wives is heartwarming. The world is well developed as are the characters. I can't wait for more chapters!
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I have not made it threw it all but i just dont want to stop. I get lost in the world of Beisties and the images that are created are outstanding. I dont want it to end. I am waiting for more with every page i turn.
It gets 5* for creativity and originality. Moreover, the mature elements only complement the story and are not the whole story as in other harem novels (after the first few chapters).
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