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Ken_ringdomstory
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JordanVega
I just love were the story is I don't know much about books but if they interest me it's really rare for me so I am just intrigued and I hope one day I can make a book like this if I ever have a chance.
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Lomyril
I feel a bit odd saying this, but I'm enjoying this a lot more than I expected.
I like stories where the main character is pulled into a video game. I will also admit I like harem stories. Yet, reading about a person being pulled into a dating sim just felt like it would be something cheap and badly written. This story is anything but that.
It feels a bit like a standard transmigration story where the main character gets pulled into the body of someone who is already living. He tries to meet or exceed the expectations of everyone around him, but there are certain things lurking in the background that start to touch his life.
There is drama, excitement, plot, mystery and a bit of "choose your own adventure" going on.
It is a surprisingly compelling story that draws you in and makes you wonder what is really going on... and what will happen next.
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NihilisticBeauty
Hey author, the girl in the cover looks a bit creepy (mostly just her eyes), and her eyes are a bit different feeling, drawing style-ish than the rest of the body. Just wanna tell you that.
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I_A_I_A_N
well, i like this .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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SoraHatsune39
I love you, arata and all the girls... You three make such a nice combination...........................................................................
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JamBasic
This story turned to what I expected from Neet Recieves a Dating Sim Game Levelling System which had now turn to... I don't know... something I didn't expect? Well enough of that.
The story started a bit abrupt without much information (MC thrown into a world with a bunch of gals all in love with him- HAREM RULES) but throughout the story, snippets of information from each girl from their own "routes" and some information from the MC will be revealed in a way that is not noticeable at all and enjoyable as well.(Hopes the author can keep this up!)
Not much serious plot yet (MC still living his God Life- Damn I want that too)with him keeping balance with his harem (Damn! Damn! Damn!) but thinking of the conspiracies that made him still living in a game might be something to look forward to in the future (I want this to continue on...)
The girls had there own base archetype, yup! base. Which means all of them had their own originality which is fun, cute, erotic, and, and, and...(Damn you MC!) That made the girls well... girls. Not just some beautiful living S'x doll. They had their feelings, thoughts, emotions. And no, not all the girls are with MC(yet... haaaaaaah....)(DAMN)
Long story short: HAH! I AM ARATA THE KING, GOD OF THE LIVING!!! NOTHING CAN BEAT ME IN THIS GAME!!! mWAhAhAhA!!!
WHAT?! DAMN LIVE WIRE TRIED TO KILL ME?! NO? I'M NOT DEAD YET? WHAT?!?!? I'M NOW INSIDE THE GAME?!?! I CAN LIVE WITH MY WAIFUS?!?!?!
WHAT?! GAME UPDATE?! MORE DATE-ABLES?!
DAMN! MY TRUE HAREM SKILLS WILL BE TESTED BUT NOTHING WILL CHANGE CUZ I AM ARATA THE KING, GOD OF THE LIVING, THE HAREM MASTER!!!
-Review(Rant?) of a gentleman(regrettable person?)
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Otonashi_Yuzuru
Is a really good novel but i don't like the author... Is a really mean person you know? we are only getting like 10 chapters per week! i was expecting like idk... 50 atleast? D:
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YesorNo
I really like the story... To the extent that at times I was tempted to try my hand at writing something similar. That is the highest praise I can give you as a fellow author. Your world is just that interesting. The only minor complaint I have is with his main wife's archetype... But that doesn't stop me from giving 5 stars.
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yvi
Bery good bery good.
IMO, much better than other translated novel that is like a dating system. MC was too much of a goody two shoes. Good luck Author-sama hope you won't drop this!!
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ComplexENV
TBH I'm only here because this book has a damn fine title. π Now then... 140 140 420 140 140 420 140 140 420 140 140 420 140 140 420 149 140 420
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JSJJ
All I can say is that this novel is different, but in a good way.
I have not read a dating simulation story quite like this before.
Writing Quality: It's quite good with no plainly visible mistakes , although the use of the phrase of this king is a bit jarring.
Stability of updates: I binged it, so no comment
Story Development: Quite slow paced , but it is acceptable since this is a beginner arc and the author does not drag on the scenes
Character Design: the date-ables could use some more fleshing out, especially Attori since she is the main waifu, but since this is the introductory arc the author might grace us with more info in future chapters.
World Building: The narrator himself is still in the process of discovering this suddenly real world. So hopefully more info in future chapters
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Zetheryl
..........It's good so far π....... Keep up the good work ππππππ. ............
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droopyghost
Hi, Author here. It would be shameless to give myself 5 stars, but I guess I have to reward myself for the effort. I welcome you to My Arata Complex! I'm sorry if you expected so much ero for a harem book, but my protagonist is a softboy so he wanted (more like obliged) to romance the girls first before getting down with anyone.
The new world he lived in is set in a video game so there will be notifications and requirements to his actions like playing a game. Then again, it would be minimal to increase the realness of the new world.
Also, drama is a tag here, so you might find some of the scenes dealing with him choosing between things.
I hope you'll like reading the book!
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Gyihhuhu_
Very very good story, I'll be reading this.
Plus, don't burn yourself out, I'm also an author so I know. (Can't offer much criticism since I've only read like three chapters)
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ProCultivator
Very good story. Grammar is at a good level and story is not slow or fast. Unique novel and i like it. Keep updating and more chapters please
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Dmatetoh
Interesting novel that entices the reader to read more and engrosses them, the plot has been organised very wonderfully,ππ
Encapsulating all possible plots that may occur through out the novel. ππ
I hope the novel may have more releases. ββAs it is killing me to wait for one halterππ
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weebyboi
Following, decent concept and good grammar, looking forward to more, hopefully not too much ero focus lol-------////////////////::::::::::::::::::::::
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