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Matrixkrock
A good novel of the historical genre with kingdom building and war at its core. Those who like these types of novels better give it a try. Keep up the good work authorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
the MC was getting very cold and psychopathic as the story went on, MC has an ambition but at the same time he does not have love or affection for anything which leaves him empty and that takes away any charisma from him, Michelle is literally the same as the MC but she is a woman, same personality all the same uninteresting character, secilia the sister of the MC is by far the best character together with erika, between the MC or michelle I can't say which one is more boring
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DiperZ
No se entiende un choto el MC aparece en un capΓ­tulo y jo aparece en mΓ‘s de 10 capΓ­tulos aparecen personajes irrelevante a mi parecer que solo sirven de relleno una miersa
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Its cool novel with good characters and world design, but... I almost grinded my teeths out while seeing those cuntries names. Author simply took map of Europe and Torture Set for Begginers and combined those two to produce the absolutely worsts knockoffs of countries and religions names i ever saw, and then he copied those names thousands of times just to insert several of those in every second paragraph... Darn it! I'm still grinding my teeths just remembering it. Now, still, its quite good novel.
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sakuraminha
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alienhead226
Really good book
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Virtuosso
The best kind of Isekai and war and military book on webnovel. The story and characters are perfectly written, the world building is very detailed and engaging.
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alesjandritos
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lorenzo86
This is a great fiction , the caracters are charming and you can't help but get attached , athought the main caracters all have some mental problems and are more "evil" than "rightoeus" . It also very human . It's some a same that the author is in the middle of a "writing block" . I realy hope he will pick this fiction again. Even if this fiction isn't completed it worth reading
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BorrowedDreams
To sum it up: "This was a really exciting experience, such a shame is also too short" - that's what she said. You see, this here was actually a great novel, the elements of a time period that almost no author of light novels seems to use, the originality of the story telling without abusing tropes, and the sweet madness that isn't exaggerated as in the generic fictional works, this was a good reading. But you could have worked the naming, really.
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Human7710
The story was great and really brought to life the concept of someone being brought back to a world similar to there own and changing for either good or for the bad. Had an okay ending, sad that he could not continue it any longer
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Shaduum
i loved it. its a shame ended too fast.a lil ww2 maybe revamped this thing. and a feel sad for our saint erika....SKRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRLLL
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MaximB
ΠΏΠΈΠ·Π΄Π΅Ρ†. It's over (for now). :[ Probably the longest original WN I have finished. Good work ΠΏΠ°Ρ†Π°Π½. Your other world take was very interesting and unique, especially with the post-Napoleonic War themes. Maxwell was a relatable MC and I kinda began missing him during the 3rd volume (I guess that was your intention, but the last real time he was the center of focus before the end was a while ago). Am interested to see how you will continue (if you indeed decide to do so).
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TyrannyWunna
In Earth,southeast asia,Burma republic nation,at May Town,normal guy working as a monk for 8 days with a boring life died at night during sleep,painless death.His soul is collected be a only remaining Goddess of moon. MC:where am I? He is currently at a room with ancient decoration. Goddess:hello,Wunna,Im a sole Goddess of All Universe. Wunna:Oh,You are a Goddes?So where are the other Gods?Why am I here? Goddess:You are dead during sleep and I called you because Im a lonely God and bore to dead and I called you because I want you accesend into Godhood.I need a partner or husband for coming eternity.But I cannt make you a God now,I dont have enough power for that.You have to achieve in mortal world,so I will send you to parallel Earth with some Immortal gifts.About other Gods,millions years ago,A war break out and all the gods including Olympians,Asgards and Jade palace died due to supreme destruction wepon and I was lucky due to visiting at mortal realms.So Im the lonly one now.I choose you to be my Husband because you never **** a virgin and only prostitutes and whores.So I pity you and you have good deeds by not committing any crimes.Then Im a Virgin Goddes,I will await you until you become a god.Satisfied now,future hubby? Wunna:wow,thats awesome.Ok,I will become a god,so send me into low realm. Goddess:I can give you ,immortality, not a weapon or thing in that world can bleed you,you will be forever young and Strength of a hundred men,speed of the fallen star,can teleport within a thousand miles and character creation.But you have to become a god before that world aged and destroyed by comprehending laws and emotions,you can do whatever you want in that world.Enjoy the funs,dont forget that Im waiting yiu,love.Now create your body. Wunna:thanks you,honey.I need six ** ab,6 ft 2in tall,white skin,face of Damon of Devil may cry game. Goddess:Granted,I will send you into that world, have funs.bye. Wunna:hahha,thanks sweethear In a forest, suddenly a space rip appear and a man was walking off.He is tall and white skin ,muscular slim body and black short hairs and blue eyes.He is wearing a V shaped neck black T-shirt ,Long cotton black coat,black fit pant,military boots,A sword looks like one in Lord of the rings movie which is mc king's sword.Sword is silver colour similar cross-guard. Wunna:Wow,here Iam with awesome physiqe and powers.hahahha.I need to know where am I and where is nearest town.I will teleport into next 500 miles to the west. Suddenly,3D door appear near a city,a man walk off.Ohh,I see a city now,I will explore and get intel and time to have funs. 4 horse pulling carriage was moving in a road lead to the Paris, and 20 knights are escorting it.In the carriage,a princess was sitting with 2maids. Elena,maid:Princess-sama,we are arriving soon.The king will be very happy to see you.You are the only daughter. Princess Catherine:I really miss my parents. Suddenly the carriage stop,a knight is knotting in the window. Knight:your highness,a man is stopping our carriage looks like a bandid with weired clothes.Should we kill or catch him? Princess:just catch him that stupid peasant.Dont bother with small matter. Knight cap:hey peasant, move away or die. Wunna:I just want to talk and you want me die,you mere mortal,kneel or disperse. kmight cap:just beat him to dead my guys. 2knights with shining silver armor came forward and they punch at him and their hands cracked . 2 knights screamed. Wunna came forward and beat the whole 20 knights like bullying.Wunna came to the carriage and open the door.He see 3 beauties,one of them like a princess. Princess:How dare you insult me in my kingdom,peasant?What do you want?You will not get away,the whole Europe will after you if you do something to me? Wunna:wow.Im scared my love.ah ah.hehe.I laugh.Initially I just want to ride a carriage but your bodyguards are so rude.so things get ugly.So if you dont want to get raped or killed,lead me to your palace now.I will take one of the horses now. Princess:Ok,lets see if you still dare arrogant in front of my father royal knights and mages.Set off. Wunna:oppos,Im scared.Unfortunately for you,nothing in this world harm me.Whatever,go quickly and serve me a cup of wine.I miss the cigrattes. The maids quickly serve him a wine bottle.Wunna quickly drink the wine and feel relax by rising Knight's armored horse.The group move into the palace.
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evorp99
How to control and conquer the world while lazing in the bedroom. Perfect novel regarding writing and story, I only hope for the appearance of a character with a normal mind, but I know that it could live for a few hours with the other characters of the novel. Sometimes I wonder whether the characters are picked up by a book on psychological problems.
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evorp99
The story is very well written and developed, almost a psychological drama on the supremacy of the reincarnators in less developed world. The different characters are highlighted by the different mental problem, this creates a new perspective in the cliche story of reincarnator making the novel more interesting. However, I think this creates too many complications during the writing of the novel, that, in any case, has a good future prospect for development.
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Superbias
The pacing is a bit fast and sometimes some events which you would think are important are skipped entirely and are instead implied in the story to have happened which can either be a thing you love or a thing you hate. For what the novel is, it's a good read. Character developments and actions make sense (within the context of the novel), plot seems to be thought-out and structured, and characters are interesting and have actual understandable motives (within the context of the novel). The only real gripe I had with this novel is how the MC tends to take a backseat for huge swathes of the story but like I said before, you either love it or hate it. Now for light spoiler territory. I love how when you get into the later chapters and you start to realise that previously 'sane' characters may have a bit more screws loose than you originally thought... Other than that, I found it rather interesting that when a person who is by definition a 'good person' who just wants to live a happy life or for their people to be happy but happens to oppose the MC dies *cough* Victoria *cough*, for some reason a good chunk of the commenters are celebrating their demise. I guess it just goes to show how some of the readers were really pulled into the power fantasy of an MC who is by definition a villain and because of that, I can't help but give this novel some bonus points for achieving that.
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TheSinisterBrove
not even past the first volume you said speed of updates doesn't even affect me you said look at where im at what've you got to say bout this now I want my bonus chapter
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D13V4S
The story is set in 17th century europe with slight fantasy settings and slightly changed names of countries. Take it as alternative history story. Imagine 17th century europe without gunpowder but with magic guns and cannons. The story seems to revolve around revolution of warfare, the change from era of sword to the era of rifle.
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helios00
Really love your story and the way you develop the world in which it is set. 100% not just saying this because I helped you out with a couple of parts in the first couple of chapters. Hope you continue to write to the best of your ability :).
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AveragePerson
This is quite new to make a isekai novel set in Napoleonic era and I like it. Late 17th century setting and looks like you combine the 7 years war and Napoleonic war which is unique. And the military innovations of the mc is nice. The naming is not bad and could be improve, i suggest using real names in the both wars to make it interesting. The only minor
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BadKrow
I'm not usually a fan of reincarnation/transmigration stories for 2 reasons. Reason #1 the main character is touted to be a genius, yet seems to suffer iq/eq mistakes time and time again never learning from them. Reason #2 the main character is suppose to be a normal average everyday person, yet they somehow have manifested more knowledge about a broad number subjects than a normal person can amass. To make matters worse these individuals tend to die young. Thankfully the author for this story hasn't made a mistake like this for the main character. The underlying issue though is... who is the main character? Or to be exact is it a singular main character or something like Game of Thrones where you have a cast of main characters. You can't call someone a main character if they haven't appeared for majority of the story. They are a side character at best. The author didn't want a Mary Sue to be a antagonist, but in the end there is are some glaring plot holes that need to be addressed. The main character's family hasn't been thoroughly explained. How could a ******* of a middle-sized noble family living in a dying alliance with different families who have been fighting a losing war against a major world power able to exert so much influence? How could someone of the same family have enough money to afford a R&D division that can drastically change the course of technology in a war in a few months? And perhaps the most confusing of all why would such a family raise their own daughter to be a assassin? Magic exists in the this world, but it still hasn't been thoroughly addressed either. A few readers have stated that the story feels like its too fast paced. I also feel this is true. Why do you ask? I already mentioned it earlier the main character more or less exists in a few sentences after the first few chapters. Its because he literally doesn't need to do anything anymore! The introduction to future enemy antagonist for the story feels forced. The antagonist is normally shown after the main character has faced a unknown setback. Yet, because he knows they already exists he can plan for it. At the rate the story is going the main character should be able to conquer the world in a few years because of how retarded the world powers in the this world are. I'm not stating the novel is bad or I wouldn't have given it such a high score. The important characters are fleshed out, but we don't have a backstory for them so it feels incomplete. The war scenes that are described by the author are vivid and if you are a fan or war simulators you'll enjoy it. The writing is superb and it doesn't suffer from the usual grammatical, syntax or sentence placement issues. But a weakness is still a weakness. Because the main character has everything set up for him there really isn't any kind of struggle. At the very least as the reader you know that its very unlikely he'll lose a battle. Instead he'll be steamrolling his enemies for the remainder of the series. Which begs the question... is it worth reading if you already know whats going to happen? On the contrary, the soon-to-be future antagonist would make a better main character. The country they are working is completely scared of them and are doing everything they can to kill them off. A lot of commentators have stated this series reminds them of youjo senki. On the contrary I feel like this series reminds me more of dungeon defense. Especially if you enjoy female characters being psychotic.
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Virtuosso
Just awesome! Well written and captivating story that leaves you wanting more q
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Razerboy2
A very interesting plot u have there :D . Really love the relationship the main character has with his mates in military training. The fact that he i
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