The noVel overall was quite good, but the ending was a little Underwhelming it could have continued,but anyways meep yp the great work i hope tou make a second one also im reading you newest work as well its great.
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This story was bad main character was inconsistent and its personality the female harem was super Bland and you could tell that they were only there for wish fulfillment the other living God's where disappointments with the one with the bow just basically being his b**** and following all his orders with no will of his own the ending was so trash and didn't make any sense at all( how the hell can a living God defeat the very thing that created it) but the one thing that got on my nerves the most what's how every character in the story just put up with the main characters b******* and nobody ever gave him a piece of their mind the main character never gets any development man the story is bad this isn't even good to kill time. What makes all of this worse is that people are actually telling this author this is a good story without actually telling him any of his mistakes or asking him to improve will tall people trying to get into the story I'll just say this it's at the bottom of the rankings for a reason you're better off going to go read Supreme magus or the one story with the ants now those are some good Original Stories with actual character consistency
I f*cking love this novel. Honestly this is a novel where you can easily pass time while reading it. It has not so complicated story. Overall a nice reading experience. I really happy that I gave my time to read this novel.
Kinda disappointed. I had a lot of expectations for this novel and they all fell through at about ch 120. At that point the harem element in the story becomes more prevelant, dont misunderstand me i dont hate harem stuff, it was just done terribly in this novel. All the female characters became very 2 dimensional, to the point they were almost indistinguishable to me. Also newest introduced harem member (i beleive she is introduced ch 118) is absolutely horrible, her character did a complete 180 in about 3 chapters, (not going into specifics for spoiler reasons). Otherwise, the novel was pretty good and i might comeback and finish it but for now its dropped.
After finishing the novel I have to admit it was an enjoyable read. What I didn't like was the writing quality, which an editor or a proofreader could fix, as well.as the pace, which was a bit faster than I personally like. other than that, the story is good and has an ending that doesn't leave you with any lingering questions about the world depicted in it.
This is my opinion from chapter 68:
Novel is really good. The history is interesting and the characters are too. The protagonist is kinda of OP even though he was nerfed multiple times, btw one thing that bothers me is the nerfs, it's kinda of annoying to see the protagonist progress and then get nerfed 10 chaps later (only happened once till now tho). The history needs an editor but the english is pretty good I can understand 99% of what's written even though there's usually a few spelling errors in the paragraphs.
This one is after I finished the novel (having a lot of accounts sure helps):
Finished reading the novel. So i'm here to update my post. Still think it was a good novel. Definitly above the normal quality for first time authors, saddly when I got to 140+ chapters I wasn't as invested in the story as in the first 100 chapters but that tends to happen with original histories. Original authors (ik every author is an original author but i'm trying to differentiate an author with a team of editors and proof-readers from an author that writes alone without proof-reading) usually make some common mistakes in their first few novels that make the novel be not as good as it should've been. In my opinion these mistakes are:
1- Harem: I'm gonna be honest, I kinda hate harem novels, they're very childish to me. It's one of the easiest ways of keeping you audience to 12-16 yo. I'm not saying that 16+ yo ppl won't read your novel because it's a harem but it's not a very believable tag... In the first few chapters we were introduced to Victoria, a lovable little panther that makes a contract with the MC. Saddly since a harem started Victoria's character wasn't developed until much later. 1 or 2 of the harem girls are likable the others just exist... Harem's are hard to pull of and 90% of the time they don't work. It's too many characters, you need to think about too many personalities and how they'll react to certain events otherwise they're just robots... Not gonna lie, if this novel was about Mars and Victoria travelling the world and doing interesting stuff it would've been 2 times better. Instead of developing the personality of 10 (random number) characters you would have to focus on only 2 and that would make things so much more fun...
2- Bad leveling system/strenght system/magic system: I recommend using excel for status pages or writting it manually, one thing that always bothers readers is wrong status pages and I've seen a lot of them here. If you start with a status page, never drop it, man-up and go with it until the end that's the only way... Even though the MC was nerfed multiple times in the start of the novel he was still too strong, his status points didn't make any sense since he "couldn't use all his strenght". I would recommend thinking very hard about the strenght system for the next novel since a lot of ppl stop reading when they don't like it and a bad strenght system makes the novel less enjoyable (the stats given to the mc clearly don't work...).
3- 100+ chapters without a hard fight (to be honest this point is kinda self-explanatory, hard fights shouldn't happen 100% of the time since we want to know that the power ups the MC got are working so it should be something like 30% hard fights and 70% easy fights)
4- Not having a definitive goal: his goal was too abstract, it was said that he wanted to live a long and happy life. Obviously he wasn't acting like some1 that wants a long and happy life but that's quite common in novels...
Ps: these are my opinions, i'm probably wrong about most of the stuff here but it's a few points that make me lose a bit of the drive to read novels.
Ps2: I never meant to be offensive while writting this review. It was meant as my point of view, If you feel like it isn't constructive criticism, feel free to skip my comment!
Ps3: If you want some inspiration to write harem novels I would recommend Guild Wars by Kotaro, it's an original being posted in webnovel. I think he did the harem in the best way possible making it interesting for all ages. The +18 chapters are a bonus not what makes the harem good btw...
Ch 68 score if 4.8
End of the novel score is about 3.5
Ty for reading and I apologize for any and all typos!
Okay i quit. Why the fvk is this in my recommend list? This is simply a trash. 10 chapters and still no change in his stats besides his energy ? Oh and btw i think he's level 4 now but guess what? Not a single stat is added to his strength or anything. The reason? The author said he wanna take it slow, but this kind of speed , fvk this is way too slow. The power level is also pretty vague. He says 1 stat point is equal to the power of a person? And because the mc , a half-dragon is 5k yrs old, he says the mc got the strength of 3 five thousand years old half dragon ( currently he got 3 strength) ? So the age also affects the power? Nice idea . But the novel, pure and utter trash. Clearly written either by a kid or a highschooler
I honestly had high hopes for this book, it has really original concepts and ideas and it fell so flat, I hope it gets better. Mars is too much of a simpleton and a walking contradiction, i.e. I have to hide that I am half Dragon, 30mins later announces to the whole town he's a half Dragon.