Chapter comments on the chapter Date of the book The World Online

.... please for the love of... dont let this harem ... harems are bs also id be nice if there wasnt always love in the novels... not every story needs the mc to fall for a gal ...

first he is handsome and now he is ordinary looking......let's not even start on the clear inclination of a harem build up. i really don't like inconsistencies, no matter how small they may seem. i mean come on who likes inconsistencies? no one, thats right (omg i even have started to answer my own questions......it's time to go sleep, its late lol)

Oh thank god no harem.

☤ Thanks for the chapter ☫

He now has an advantage in his pants. ERECTION.

This was extremely forced... and also to give a rare dropped village token away is just plain stupid, he already gave her so much but now the author forces the mc to give her more? What for? So that her brother can make his village so that she and he can never meet since she is in her brothers territory while that Yuan loser is sticking to her (probably even with her incompent brothers approval) till the mc can appear some day and stomp that guy arrogantly show mt. tai bla bla... please author don't do it... if you want to do romance put effort into it and some serious thinking...

I don't see this going well at all. Their relationship is progressing much to quickly. (But maybe thats just the intorvert in me speaking)

I dont know but the romance thing kills the story for me

Oh wow, an mc who is dishonest and obvious inclinations towards a future harem. Wonderful. :|

First !

Thanks

So wooden!

I really don't get people who hate on authors writing harems. I think it's great just seeing how the author spins his story creatively rather than worrying about it

He will never let her go again ? Come on he never loved her or chased her.... He let down his roommate after seeing her treasure tsss. Asshole

I hope MC will be with xiaoyue.. Coz I think song jia like to take advantage of him..

I'm confused, what is wrong with having a harem in a novel. And at the very least the author should be able to decide if there's romance in his own novel.

The “falling in love” could be better. I only saw a girl who fell for someone cuz he gave her some money. I don’t think she actually fell in love, but author will force it that way. The author isn’t good at writing romance... the women so far were pretty much all submissive under MC’s big toe

Why keep the date a secret from Sun Xiaoyue? It's like leaving another option open if their relationship doesn't work out

He is a lord though.........3 wifeys is normal right? Lol

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