Chapter comments on the chapter General Picture of the book The World Online

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Balor
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Balor

I feel this story needs some first person perspective narration. Describing everything in third person seems more like reading a history textbook.
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wangtengfei
☤ Thanks for the chapter ☫
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AS17
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AS17

Cliffhanger is ok,, but cliff hanger and directly after it a foot note with no borders is a killer
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Keyweilder
Thanks for the chapter, glad you moved from gravity tales and I can continue reading!
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HumanLion9
Thanks for the Chapter
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Thomas25
Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍
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Cory
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Cory

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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RebeLyon
Need more ministers
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Skydro
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Skydro

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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CrisTDF
Ufff to much to read hahaha
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alonsodinis
Thanks for the chapter
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TaiXai
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TaiXai

Thanks for the chapter.
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LazyLisy
I still don't understand. Is this Sun Bin stronger than Baiqi? Has he different uses?
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wildcat75
Thanks for the chapter
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heartreader
Picture that -pun intended,
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JammC
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JammC

Did the author put the title General Picture on purpose? Such puns.
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