Chapter comments on the chapter Life of a Spotter of the book The World Online

Seriously, a different perspective after all this time and you just killed the dude 😕

And here I thought that it would be a success story. 😔 Still his last thought is 😏

Man, poor guy... Just wanted a little adventure, just to die like that.

I want to touch that(waist) again! The ultimate last breath thoughts/line!

poor guy he only wants bobs and vegana but still.......

Hays why is lofe so hard.... Hays...... That poor sode character.. A passerby but died cruelly

If the book is as poorly edited as these chapters here, I dont think I would buy it. Yes, I stubbornly hung on until after the 100th chapter and the story finally heated up past lukewarm temperatures into something halfway decent. Yes, I'm still reading this because I'm a stubborn fool who likes military history, fiction and a follower of the Art of War but I'm not gonna buy the book since I find it irritating enough to get through this as is without paying for it.

☤ Thanks for the chapter ☫

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Thanks

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Thanks for the chapter.

He just want to get laid, poor lad

Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍

Thanks

Thanks

The author created a character just to kill him

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon