Love this novel,is awesome.pls I beg u author, update this novel this month, june.vincent is a great gong, treating his goddess with love and care while his cute little goddess thinks only about cake.vincent wants to take his little goddess before his mature bc his goddess maturity age is too far.u can now see how awesome and interesting this novel is.so PLEASE UPDATE MORE CHAPTERS AND THANKS FOR THE AWESOME STORY 😘
I love love love this story i hope it continues to update.....i wonder will it go down the destroying the human route are will it the hero of the story stop them.......i wonder will the mc stay the top since there not alot of mc that top
I really hope the Author continues with these novels there truly a genius in story writing, since I started reading I couldn't put his/her books down, I'll be eagerly awaiting for any new chapters(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
A lot of fluff with a lot of cake...
Need to see the next chapter soon. I will waiting for Noctis with all his absurd mind...😁 i wonder when Noctis get mature, will he be the same or become more absurd?
First things first, I wanna say.... Omg goddess is so adorable XDXDXD I WANT A GODDESS OF MY OWN QWQ and second, I'll try to make my reviews as objective as possible (?)
So the story is basically your typical MC dies and transmigrates (not really) to another world, and he's basically picked up by the go-- demon Lord. The MC cultivates because goddess is OP AF and the whole process is relatively... Um, dry, is the word, I suppose. There is comedy mixed in, and I love the MC's reactions //it's how I'd react too tbh XD// especially towards goddess himself. (*´ω｀*) It's a good read, the story has potential, plot-wise, basically about the MC getting stronger so that he could stand on even grounds with lil goddess~
If this story ever updates (after, what, 9 months hiatus? More?) I'll be the second or third person to read it. That said, I'm not trying to discourage the author (author-sama you're awesome~) don't get me wrong, mixing cultures is an interesting concept though it confuses me a lot, and I think it's better to make a new culture, a culture unique to the story itself, but mixing cultures also work especially here since it's a mix of xianxia (story-wise) and tsukkomi. XD
I love it even though a weak main character is not my favourite type of reading. I wonder what would happen. well, thank you, author, for writing this! base on the title I guess the demon get topped? love it.
I love your novel!! When you come back please continue to produce great chapters!!! I noticed that there are quite a few bl novels that were dropped, so I'm glad that the author considers her readers with informing us of her hiatus before hand. This is such a cute story and I can't wait to see mc become like Sebastian with his perfect butler statues and also his OPness. The interactions are great between the two and I love the characters!!!! As the author states, the demon king is pampered, but not a spoiled brat. There is a thin line between the two (I think), but the author is doing a great job with not crossing that line. Plus the mc is hilarious.
Though you can find a little grammar errors here and there, the author is doing a great job producing the story.
I sincerely recommend this novel to bl lovers~
Amazing cute fluffy story!! I like the protagonist's thoughts very much I want to know demon king's POV too ♥♥♥ soo cutteee I think me and protagonist are fangirling over the goddess ahhhhhhh soooo kewt ♥♥♥
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: Get an editor or give your readers a way other than comments to assist you in editing your work for the sake of grammar.
Positive Feedback: You did well in everything not mentioned above, I also want to point out thanks for telling your readers that you would be on hiatus, and why.;,;.
Personal Feedback: Though I feel like this is a well thought out novel, I still don't wish to continue reading for two reasons, BL & Poor grammar (the former more than the ladder), however, I can see you have minimum two loyal fans, so keep up the good work.;,;.
(4.6)(3/5 in writing quality)
Yes, the demon king is indeed very adorable. I was going to put this at the end but the bathing scene in chapter 7 is so hot I just had to get it off my chest and write it down here as soon as possible. For the longest time, I thought I was straighter than a line drawn in a world where there are only two dimensions, but today my faith has been shaken.
Now then, where was I? Oh right, the review.
When I first started reading it, the grammar bothered me a little, but the narrative was so fun and lighthearted I soon forgot about it. It's not so bad that it makes the sentences difficult to understand and each and every sentence is so fun to read the slight grammatical errors just stopped bothering me even when I noticed them. Of course, it'd be best for the grammar to be improved upon, that goes without saying.
So far I haven't read far enough to truly get to the meat of the story, but just going by the narrative and character interaction, I'd say without a doubt that this is a fun read, and if you're into BL, then it's even better.
See no Evil, Hear no Evil!
Ignoring the BL stuff as I've read to chapter 6. The novel was an amazing read. Its description was clearly written and the pacing is just perfect.
So far, I find the character was greatly described and the interactions with demon king were hilarious for me. One plot has been revealed so far, as far as I've read it anyway.
World background has not been established yet, I think that's because the Author wants to tell it through the MC eyes. Not a problem for me.
Anyway, do I recommend it? Yes, but! With a strict caution. (I wanted to read more, but as I've seen the chapter 7 title, I shuddered a little. Think I pass this out. But, if you're into the BL stuff, then this one was a damn good novel! 4.8 - Not into BL xD)
So far, I really like it! The story is only 13 chapters in so it is hard to say how to rate stuff so sure.... but the characters are fun and there interactions are full of detail. I'm loving the fascination our MC has with our cute little demon king--its so funny and wonderful! I can't wait to get more chapters! Thanks for all of the hard work~
This is Fro ~~~ (≧∇≦)/
Fro just wanted to say thank you for all the readers that have visited Fro's story. Here a lot of kisses from shameless Fro ❤⃛ヾ(๑❛ ▿ ◠๑ )
English isn't my mother tongue, so forgive me if I have a lot of mistake in my grammar, I welcome all your critics about them! ^^
So this story is a BL romance between a very loyal, possessive, shameless gong with a super bossy, pampered demon king shou.
This will be a slow burn romance with a lot of fluff, and with the phase of weak to strong for protagonist gong
The story setting would be mixed between chinese xianxia, western magical, japanese manga, and rpg game. Since Fro isnt a native of Chinese, western or even Japanese, I can only mixed them to avoid writing incorrect information because of lack background...
So... Fro welcomes all comment, review, critics, suggestion, rating, vote from all readers to improve my writing!! See you in the story, a lot of kisses from shameless Fro ~~~ ❤⃛ヾ(๑❛ ▿ ◠๑ )