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GhostyZ_Is_Gay
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KenRingdomStory
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EvilWolf
I dont see how anyone can like this it was good at the start he was strong didnt cate about anyone, then neck minute he starts being a nice guy gets tricked into a demon contract and hes okay with it, then gets forced to marry her daughter its TRASH!!
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kendell_fisher
Where did this story go, i want more !!!!! Love the fact the Mc wont let anyone hold him back and picks friends that dont use him (only 6 at the moments) and he dosen't a simp captian save a hoe mindset exactly what i like
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Lord_DragonHawk
This Seat is awaiting more updates, otherwise this Seat would have rated this higher.
Mortals help this Seat get more updates.
This Seat is going into seclusion until there are more updates!
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Micpoll
Rapaz eu tinha essa novel na minha lista faz tempo mas nΓ£o tinha lido , mas depois que comecei a ler acabei tudo
Novel IncrΓvel recomendo espero que volte a soltar mais capΓtulos
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soulofglutton
One of the best stories out there But alas it's been around 7 months but there is not a single update
Author should at least tell if has dropped (probably has ) or not .....
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WenHaoChen14
I don't like this, but I do recommend it for anyone who also likes this kind of novel and this genre! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
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Ireana
This novel is my favorite but when is it updating again it's been 5 months..................
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Everything_Forever
It was OK at first but it started going down hill after a while and the author doesn't even publish any more so this review doesn't even matter but I'm still going to because it needs to be done.
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hidden_clouds
Wow what an interesting story . So happy that I stumbled across this gem of a story with the author designing such a rich and intriguing world where he has designed such an intriguing mc.
I really hope that the author continues to amaze and expand on the world and the astral spirits with in it.
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slayerr
simply awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Lonesome_Duck
I'm loving this story, probably one of my favourites on here, but there hasn't been an update in forever.
I love how the author describes many of the world's, not just sticking in the human world, and actually allows us to explore more of the universe.
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WEBUniverse
I love the book so far. I canβt wait to see more. Keep up the good work author. Although the book may not rank high just know that you have readers who love your novel.
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LawlessDruglord22
This underworld Lord is pleased with your writing
But one thing why is the MC so cold hearted
Why doesn't he have a small love life
Update quickly and don't you puny rats dare annoy me
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chitwn
Great read itβs like the MC is a hero with villain tendencies. Glad to have picked this up a def must read canβt wait to see how things turn out OP main character would seem like a bad start but actually makes the story better with his twisted personality
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Themist_cles
Mad book but there are a lot of typos, great MC but I feel he ought to be a bit more cool headed. No other problems other than those two great story, OP MC... No issues
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ByZoKe
This is the best cultivation original novel on the original category (personnal opinion)
If you like story with overpowered Mc then it is for you
Of you like ruthless Mc then it is for you
If you like to see the mc develop his personnality through the story and based on encounter and mentor and not just because the author want it then it is for you
If you want heartwarming/cute moment you will have to read till chap ~50
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elfriche
This brother greets the author. The author,
other than being a hater of using gaps between sentences and being hated by Wn, not being allowed to get his book voted at times, is really putting hard work to make the background interesting but with a mysterious vibe that makes you want to know what else there is to the world, the characters are also better than majority of novels, please keep up the hard work with this chuuni love child of yours.
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void_lord
All for brother....
This is the best original novel I had ever read..even the last wish system is shut in front of this novel...
May the darkness bless your novel
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KimBurn
I am not really good at writing reviews so please bear with me.
This story is slow-paced but for me it's good because it shows different influences of different views to a child that stubbornly holds on the beliefs instilled into him by his companions as a growing child. On how he deal with the obstacles and what does he firmly believe in. In their world, decisions are important but it should also align with his beliefs as it may cause repercussions to his foundation.
He is extremely decisive and that's what I like about Hei. If he resolve to do something, he will do his best to accomplish it.
I wish that the author can continue writing more exciting chapters. ππππ Thank you!!!πππ
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jebrodrick
There are things i like about this story and others I really don't like. Despite being modeled after your basic Wuxia novel, I like that AGB has a unique world with a pretty cool cultivation system,
However, my biggest gripe is with the MC. He's apparently 6 years old and thinks, talks and acts like an ***** but you've given no explanation for why that is. It's not like he's reincarnated. Also, the MC is plain dumb. He's made at least half a dozen bad decisions in first 5 chapters.
All in all this would be a much better read if the MC's character traits are ironed out.
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GoodDummy
Simply awesome. Powers are awesome.
Powers are good
World development is good
Characters are mythical,(as in, they act like gods in Olympia)
Description and wording makes the fictional world into fantasy.
And story actually progress.
The MCs character is alive, thou super arrogant, even if he's a future god, he is not yet. what good will it bring to humiliate everyone you see and approach you. Treating someone like a person does not make MCs less godlike.
Though having exact number on how many spirit he actually have is better, it make us guessing but does not Remove the mystery
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BadGenuis
Simply awesome. Powers are awesome. Though having exact number on how many spirit he actually have is better, it make us guessing but does not Remove the mystery. The MCs character is alive, thou super arrogant, even if he's a future god, he is not yet. what good will it bring to humiliate everyone you see and approach you. Treating someone like a person does not make MCs less godlike.
Powers are good
World development is good
Characters are mythical,(as in, they act like gods in Olympia)
Description and wording makes the fictional world into fantasy.
And story actually progress.
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_nameless_02
This junior pays her respect to the hardworking senior..
*Bows to senpai*
This particular being, appreciates how you interaction with the people.
I'm giving this novel a 5 π because of it's creativity in terms of cover and how the author have a vast understanding in people's perspective mind.
Pardon this being for being poor for I am not generous enough.
Please support this novel!ππ
Continue this wonderful work of yours senior! π
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Dr_Zombie
Dr. Zombie Pervert lifts up his head, after examining his patient. After copping a feel of their breasts-while they were sedated-he lifts up his cold rotten hand and gives them a thumbs up. The tip of the thumb hanging by a thread of skin.
"In perfect condition, I approve." Dr. Zombie Pervert says with a decayed smile. "More people should get in on this."
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ArrogantTrueDragon
This dragon was just passing by..
This dragon liked this novel..
This dragon is pleased..
This dragon gave you 5 stars don't disappoint him..
You puny mortals should read it too..
#HiddenDragonSectMaster
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Vegito_Blue
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Micpoll